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Warning: This game contains a minor CG of partial nudity
It started when Raven's older brother Yuni brought home a little boy named Keldanite for the night. He went to stay with her mother's friend Brueta. However they became close friends. Now twelve years have passed, and they are members of a guild called Defenders who helps others.
Credits
Plugins:
Yanfly
Mog Hunter
Kodakwa
Hime
Graphics:
RPG Maker DS Sprites
RPG Maker FES Tiles
Some of the battlers are from CLOSET
Some of the battlers are edits from Lud Sakura's site, and Chaos Portal's Site.
I cannot remember for sure who made the dog sprites, or the cat face I am using. If anyone knows let me so that I can credit him, or her.
Music:
Zonderland Music Pack (Only in title)
Some of the music for boss battles is from here http://sound.jp/foceal/
The normal battle theme, and some of the Town music was made by my friend StormKat32
Special thanks to TrueCynder from RMC for touching up the dungeon maps.
If there are any bugs please tell me exactly what they are, and where they occur. This is the full game of arc 1. Nothing will be changed. Only bugs will be fixed at this point.
It started when Raven's older brother Yuni brought home a little boy named Keldanite for the night. He went to stay with her mother's friend Brueta. However they became close friends. Now twelve years have passed, and they are members of a guild called Defenders who helps others.
Credits
Plugins:
Yanfly
Mog Hunter
Kodakwa
Hime
Graphics:
RPG Maker DS Sprites
RPG Maker FES Tiles
Some of the battlers are from CLOSET
Some of the battlers are edits from Lud Sakura's site, and Chaos Portal's Site.
I cannot remember for sure who made the dog sprites, or the cat face I am using. If anyone knows let me so that I can credit him, or her.
Music:
Zonderland Music Pack (Only in title)
Some of the music for boss battles is from here http://sound.jp/foceal/
The normal battle theme, and some of the Town music was made by my friend StormKat32
Special thanks to TrueCynder from RMC for touching up the dungeon maps.
If there are any bugs please tell me exactly what they are, and where they occur. This is the full game of arc 1. Nothing will be changed. Only bugs will be fixed at this point.
Latest Blog
Fixed a skill mistake
Rose_Guardian
0 post(s)- 08/13/2019 04:11 AM
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I just wanted to let everyone I fixed a mistake I made with Raven's Revive skill so it should show up now.
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Based on the 10/18/2015 demo
Thoughts
bold=important
other=various thoughts
General 1H 13M dropped (This game sucks)
Overall
I recommend Avoiding this. i cant stress that enough.
Thoughts
bold=important
other=various thoughts
pretty title screen
custom art is nice
you cannot rest at your house!
for those with a bad memory that introduction or element weaknesses is horrible. there should be a better place to have this information like a optional library.
it says that's all then keeps going wth?
the attack selector is horrible (2 names on screen horizontally. so more then 2 names is offscreen.)
there is a delay before you attack which is annoying it sits there for 3-4 seconds doing nothing
duel shot does not work (Strong attack against 3 different enemies.) it only hits 2 times should be 3
dagger rush and stab to death have the same description
escaping in battle needs to be fixed. you have to press X to get the extra menu then left to get to it rather then right. it makes no sense.
i like how you enter a house and can still see outside.
what the hell!? this optional quest with the girl missing her dog! she had it with her a few seconds ago!
also you should actually activate the quest rather then it magically appearing.
oh i like those special scenes where you press S or D to view a optional scene :D
why the hell did the dog go that far away!? i wonder in real time what the distance would be probably at least 40-60 minutes from your house to the town
penelope has 2 all enemies ice attacks why? blizzard and icestorm. but ice storm does not have a cost?
on the quest screen Active quests should be before anything else (speaking of this menu its funny because there are almost no games that have failed quests)
the grammar needs work
i am surprised the fairy issue went that well. its rare we dont have to fight to solve a problem!
i don't want to save jim he is stupid...who goes into a mine (he is by himself...) gets attacked by a monster calls for help tho its impossible not only that any would would hear him....but that anyone in the village would be able to help even if they did...
Raven...you DO NOT ask why skeletons exist...seriously...obviously people died...its the exact reason you came here...
...kel asks the same thing...did the dev want these characters to be idiots or is he/she bad at writing?
During the scene where cyfer arrives at your house and penelope comes to the door. his avatar glitches and stays on screen.
^you can get it to go away by trying to go out the east exit south of your house
Cyfers move set has issues too. multiple moves with the same description and cost...
optional quest find dave is broken. the grandpas dialog loops after you have saved his son
when we enter the shrine this guy comes from the south despite it being a dead end!
why couldn't the characters just be in there correct places already? why did we have to watch them walk to their spots?
^during the scene where we saved xion
non blood related incest. this is one one of the times where i actually wish the girl slapped the guy. they are practically family...for him to kiss her...
....optional quests disappear if you don't clear them...but there was something about a red herb that you couldn't do because you could not go to opal forest...or the place where the contractor was...
^need to confirm everything clear-able and has correct names
why do people say you're from the guardians guild? this is really annoying...i know i am but why do they?
and why would they tell me this?
they should be asking IF i am part of that group!
i am dropping this at point where you are going to deal with a witch.
custom art is nice
you cannot rest at your house!
for those with a bad memory that introduction or element weaknesses is horrible. there should be a better place to have this information like a optional library.
it says that's all then keeps going wth?
the attack selector is horrible (2 names on screen horizontally. so more then 2 names is offscreen.)
there is a delay before you attack which is annoying it sits there for 3-4 seconds doing nothing
duel shot does not work (Strong attack against 3 different enemies.) it only hits 2 times should be 3
dagger rush and stab to death have the same description
escaping in battle needs to be fixed. you have to press X to get the extra menu then left to get to it rather then right. it makes no sense.
i like how you enter a house and can still see outside.
what the hell!? this optional quest with the girl missing her dog! she had it with her a few seconds ago!
also you should actually activate the quest rather then it magically appearing.
oh i like those special scenes where you press S or D to view a optional scene :D
why the hell did the dog go that far away!? i wonder in real time what the distance would be probably at least 40-60 minutes from your house to the town
penelope has 2 all enemies ice attacks why? blizzard and icestorm. but ice storm does not have a cost?
on the quest screen Active quests should be before anything else (speaking of this menu its funny because there are almost no games that have failed quests)
the grammar needs work
i am surprised the fairy issue went that well. its rare we dont have to fight to solve a problem!
i don't want to save jim he is stupid...who goes into a mine (he is by himself...) gets attacked by a monster calls for help tho its impossible not only that any would would hear him....but that anyone in the village would be able to help even if they did...
Raven...you DO NOT ask why skeletons exist...seriously...obviously people died...its the exact reason you came here...
...kel asks the same thing...did the dev want these characters to be idiots or is he/she bad at writing?
During the scene where cyfer arrives at your house and penelope comes to the door. his avatar glitches and stays on screen.
^you can get it to go away by trying to go out the east exit south of your house
Cyfers move set has issues too. multiple moves with the same description and cost...
optional quest find dave is broken. the grandpas dialog loops after you have saved his son
when we enter the shrine this guy comes from the south despite it being a dead end!
why couldn't the characters just be in there correct places already? why did we have to watch them walk to their spots?
^during the scene where we saved xion
non blood related incest. this is one one of the times where i actually wish the girl slapped the guy. they are practically family...for him to kiss her...
....optional quests disappear if you don't clear them...but there was something about a red herb that you couldn't do because you could not go to opal forest...or the place where the contractor was...
^need to confirm everything clear-able and has correct names
why do people say you're from the guardians guild? this is really annoying...i know i am but why do they?
and why would they tell me this?
they should be asking IF i am part of that group!
i am dropping this at point where you are going to deal with a witch.
General 1H 13M dropped (This game sucks)
Plot=?
Characters=all seem stupid and or annoying.
gameplay=a good amount of significant glitches,ugly mapping in some areas and a terrible skill set for characters and the grammar needs a good amount of work.
-
This experience is like a joke that's not funny.pointless.
the developer failed in every single aspect other then art here.
its fair to assume that they did not play the game first and notice the absurd amount of things wrong with it before letting others play.
its offensive how bad this is.
Characters=all seem stupid and or annoying.
gameplay=a good amount of significant glitches,ugly mapping in some areas and a terrible skill set for characters and the grammar needs a good amount of work.
-
This experience is like a joke that's not funny.pointless.
the developer failed in every single aspect other then art here.
its fair to assume that they did not play the game first and notice the absurd amount of things wrong with it before letting others play.
its offensive how bad this is.
Overall
I recommend Avoiding this. i cant stress that enough.
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I am sorry but you really got me upset here! My characters are NOT STUPID! It is just a demo! Why can't you be nice, and constructive! How do you know it won't get better. I am doing the best I can! No, mater how hard I try no one likes it. It's not fair.
EDIT:
Never mind I am just having a bad day. But you got me very upset.
EDIT:
I looked at your screen shots from your pm. I will fix this. I just wish you didn't not recommend, or recommend my game, because it is just a demo. Instead saying my game sucks, you should have been more constructive, and said it needs work. DO NOT reply again if you're going to be mean about it.
Sorry telling you not to reply is unfair.
author=shayoko
Based on the 10/18/2015 demo
Thoughts
bold=important
other=various thoughtspretty title screen
custom art is nice
you cannot rest at your house!
for those with a bad memory that introduction or element weaknesses is horrible. there should be a better place to have this information like a optional library.
it says that's all then keeps going wth?
the attack selector is horrible (2 names on screen horizontally. so more then 2 names is offscreen.)
there is a delay before you attack which is annoying it sits there for 3-4 seconds doing nothing
duel shot does not work (Strong attack against 3 different enemies.) it only hits 2 times should be 3
dagger rush and stab to death have the same description
escaping in battle needs to be fixed. you have to press X to get the extra menu then left to get to it rather then right. it makes no sense.
i like how you enter a house and can still see outside.
what the hell!? this optional quest with the girl missing her dog! she had it with her a few seconds ago!
also you should actually activate the quest rather then it magically appearing.
oh i like those special scenes where you press S or D to view a optional scene :D
why the hell did the dog go that far away!? i wonder in real time what the distance would be probably at least 40-60 minutes from your house to the town
penelope has 2 all enemies ice attacks why? blizzard and icestorm. but ice storm does not have a cost?
on the quest screen Active quests should be before anything else (speaking of this menu its funny because there are almost no games that have failed quests)
the grammar needs work
i am surprised the fairy issue went that well. its rare we dont have to fight to solve a problem!
i don't want to save jim he is stupid...who goes into a mine (he is by himself...) gets attacked by a monster calls for help tho its impossible not only that any would would hear him....but that anyone in the village would be able to help even if they did...
Raven...you DO NOT ask why skeletons exist...seriously...obviously people died...its the exact reason you came here...
...kel asks the same thing...did the dev want these characters to be idiots or is he/she bad at writing?
During the scene where cyfer arrives at your house and penelope comes to the door. his avatar glitches and stays on screen.
^you can get it to go away by trying to go out the east exit south of your house
Cyfers move set has issues too. multiple moves with the same description and cost...
optional quest find dave is broken. the grandpas dialog loops after you have saved his son
when we enter the shrine this guy comes from the south despite it being a dead end!
why couldn't the characters just be in there correct places already? why did we have to watch them walk to their spots?
^during the scene where we saved xion
non blood related incest. this is one one of the times where i actually wish the girl slapped the guy. they are practically family...for him to kiss her...
....optional quests disappear if you don't clear them...but there was something about a red herb that you couldn't do because you could not go to opal forest...or the place where the contractor was...
^need to confirm everything clear-able and has correct names
why do people say you're from the guardians guild? this is really annoying...i know i am but why do they?
and why would they tell me this?
they should be asking IF i am part of that group!
i am dropping this at point where you are going to deal with a witch.
General 1H 13M dropped (This game sucks)Plot=?
Characters=all seem stupid and or annoying.
gameplay=a good amount of significant glitches,ugly mapping in some areas and a terrible skill set for characters and the grammar needs a good amount of work.
-
This experience is like a joke that's not funny.pointless.
the developer failed in every single aspect other then art here.
its fair to assume that they did not play the game first and notice the absurd amount of things wrong with it before letting others play.
its offensive how bad this is.
Overall
I recommend Avoiding this. i cant stress that enough.
EDIT:
Never mind I am just having a bad day. But you got me very upset.
EDIT:
Sorry telling you not to reply is unfair.
Sorry for the double post. I Just want to get my point through. For all who subbed to this, or thinking about playing this.
I wasn't meaning to be mean this guy. I am just upset because the game is just a demo, and he didn't even give me a chance to update it yesterday. The demo has only 3, out 20 chapters. I don't want people avoiding it just because of what he said. I am still working on this game. What he said got me upset, discouraged me, and kind of made me not want to work on it. The updated version I didn't yet release doesn't have the problems he mentioned.
I wasn't meaning to be mean this guy. I am just upset because the game is just a demo, and he didn't even give me a chance to update it yesterday. The demo has only 3, out 20 chapters. I don't want people avoiding it just because of what he said. I am still working on this game. What he said got me upset, discouraged me, and kind of made me not want to work on it. The updated version I didn't yet release doesn't have the problems he mentioned.
I will point out that while the comments have some very negative overtones, the feedback itself is pretty decent - the notes area points out a lot of stuff that I hope you pay attention to fixing at least.
Yeah, underneath that lousy attempt at being the AVGN of RPG Maker, she made some good points for you to consider. Don't give up or feel bad about yourself. Trudge on, heed some important notes, and do the best you can do.
Wow!! the artwork of this are really nice!! xDD :D And I'm intrigued by the story!! :) Great job on this Rose_Guardian! :D
Gotta love that stick-to-it-iveness. Keep plugging away at it Rose, you'll get there. What? What do you mean sticktoitiveness isn't a word?!
Thank you WheelmanZero. I also been trying to improve my mapping skills, so that my maps stand out better. I learned it's good to use a little reference while mapping. It helps get an idea how JRPG maps should look, or how I want them to look.
I've been playing this game and I already found two particular bugs that needs to be fixed:
Zel Swamp: If you go back to Zel Swamp and move from Zel Map 2 to Map 1 (the south exit), you end up in an unknown forest location and forced to fight the "Incubus?".
Nurse Quest: After accepting the quest, I talked to all the elderly in the home, but when I talked to her again, she just offered me the quest again and I can't complete it.
Zel Swamp: If you go back to Zel Swamp and move from Zel Map 2 to Map 1 (the south exit), you end up in an unknown forest location and forced to fight the "Incubus?".
Nurse Quest: After accepting the quest, I talked to all the elderly in the home, but when I talked to her again, she just offered me the quest again and I can't complete it.
this definitely looks like something I will be playing while im supposed to be studying- i mean being bored out of my mind during the day. It looks fun and i look forward to playing it~
Played this for about a half-hour. I had the task to talk to the fairy for the smith in Gar. Which I did, but, I didn't report back right away. I figured I could just finish the dungeon, and report on the way back to Avanna. Didn't happen this way. Upon defeating the boss, I was warped back to Avanna, the new chapter commenced, and I guess the task was tagged a failure, since it's not on the list anymore?
What I find really awkward about this is that the task in Chapter 2 to find Dan warped me back to Avanna, and had me automatically talk to Mimi. For future reference, I would suggest a bit of consistency on this. Either always warp players to the quest-givers, or always have them hoof it back to the quest-giver, or, as a compromise, prompt players if they want to be warped or not.
What I find really awkward about this is that the task in Chapter 2 to find Dan warped me back to Avanna, and had me automatically talk to Mimi. For future reference, I would suggest a bit of consistency on this. Either always warp players to the quest-givers, or always have them hoof it back to the quest-giver, or, as a compromise, prompt players if they want to be warped or not.
Merrend I'll look into it. My grandpa is bugging me to get my food out of the microwave because it keeps beeping. I'll get back to you.
EDIT:
You only have until the end of a chapter to finish the optional quests. I did say that in game, you must have missed it.
EDIT:
You only have until the end of a chapter to finish the optional quests. I did say that in game, you must have missed it.
It's possible I missed (or skipped over) where it said that tasks had until the beginning of the next chapter to be completed. Even if I knew that, there was a partial expectation on my part that I had to travel to the Adventurer's Defender's Guild in Avanna to turn in the plot-related quest. On the other hand, I suppose players have the option of loading a file from before they completed a chapter if they find out they missed a task.
Either way, I can understand your desire to move on to other games. Just a little thing to keep in mind for next time, okay?
Either way, I can understand your desire to move on to other games. Just a little thing to keep in mind for next time, okay?

















