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This game is the second entry of a series of short-stories about different
characters from the same world.
The Rework is here:
Featuring extended story, gameplay, character backgrounds, updated graphics, added features.
The feature list:
- Item quick-select/use
- Improved Panic System, Spawn system for the horrors that come for you.
- A feature to let you fight back at some point.
- A feature that memorizes the decisions you make through the game and uses it in other games playing in the same universe.
- Press F5 for better Fullscreen F6 to adjust it
Story:
A peaceful, isolated village turns into one girl's nightmare as she awakens from her slumber to find herself separated from her beloved sister.
Join Unelma Cerdess as she wanders through the village while gradually uncovering the truth about its tragic fate.
This psychological thriller takes place in the same universe as "The Crimson Mind", though the timelines vary.
It is part of the series of short stories which lead up to my final project.
Game features:
- Dark atmosphere accompanied by a dark story
- Multiple endings based on choices made (make sure to collect all 4 diary flashbacks to unlock a post-credits cutscene!)
- Stealthy gameplay surrounding a Fear system
- Doesn't feature combat, character-driven
- About 45-60 minutes length of gameplay
Updates:
2015/6/8:
- Updated all facesets and some sprites (with the exception of Leyn)
- Fixed bug where slashing at a crystal with 0 seals gives game over
- fixed a certain npc chasing you before intended chase.
2015/7/8:
- Added a death checker, no longer the player will be murdered minutes after
he's supposed to. It gave the impression that something entirely different killed the player.
2015/14/8
- Made menu simpler, additional credits added to game.
- Fixed some slight bugs like typos and transfer events.
Feedback is appreciated!!
Credits:
Helladen - Dash Script
modern algebra - ATS Special Message Codes Script
Vlue - Sleep Item Popup Script
Casper Gaming - CSCA Light Effects Script
Archeia, Car, rhyme, Evileagles, boldpaste, Yami,
Neonblack - Luna Engine Scripts
First seed material - Original Mack Tilesets
mikie0100 - Window Skin
Celianna - Nebula Parallax
Songs Used:
I3-Emotional - Beyond the Veil
I3-Emotional - Eternal Promise Broken
I3-Emotional - Murn for the Past
I3-Emotional - Timeless
JDB - Behind The Mirror (Bonus)
JDB - Descry
JDB - Hounted Mansion
JDB - Outside Steps
JDB - Waiting
JDB Artist - Inspirational Vol.2 - 08 She Remained
JDB Artist - Inspirational Vol.2 - 34 Facing Dead
Composer/Musician
JDB Artist
Publisher
DEGICA Co., LTD
(C) 2012 ENTERBRAIN, INC; artists
Luna Engine Factory – Archeia and Caz
Luna Engine Etrian – Archeia and rhyme
Luna Engine EvilEagles Ys – EvilEagles Archeia and
Kingdom Rise and Fall (For the shopkeeper image)
Luna Engine Ffspiration – boldpaste
programmers
Luna Engine – Yami (Cuong Nguyen)
CPBE Add-ons – Neonblack
Etrian Unique Scripts - rhyme
Special thanks:
Darkperv - Testing
Ninjamike28 - Testing
Orbin - Testing
Helena AKA mothbae - Dialogue fixing (as always C: )
(7hours this time)
Developer
ENTERBRAIN, INC
Artist
Celianna
Publisher
DEGICA Co., LTD
Latest Blog
The Rework Update!!
atasuke10
The Rework is here:
Featuring extended story, gameplay, character backgrounds, updated graphics, added features.
The feature list:
- Item quick-select/use
- Improved Panic System, Spawn system for the horrors that come for you.
- A feature to let you fight back at some point.
- A feature that memorizes the decisions you make through the game and uses it in other games playing in the same universe.
- Better fullscreen. Press F5 for Fullscreen, F6 to adjust it.
Screenshots from updated game:
Featuring extended story, gameplay, character backgrounds, updated graphics, added features.
The feature list:
- Item quick-select/use
- Improved Panic System, Spawn system for the horrors that come for you.
- A feature to let you fight back at some point.
- A feature that memorizes the decisions you make through the game and uses it in other games playing in the same universe.
- Better fullscreen. Press F5 for Fullscreen, F6 to adjust it.
Screenshots from updated game:
- Completed
- atasuke10
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atasuke10
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Closeauthor=bicfarmer
I felt like it could have been alot better. Not a fan of amnesia light dependency gameplay. The other mechanic, where you get stronger, that basically will aggro all the enemies in the room and you will either take hits or be forced to camp after it runs out. Some tiles were passable when they shouldnt have been. On the second floor of the orphanage, the stairs on the right side (next to the left door that leads out of the building) did not seem to work. Also, how do you get the other ending? Do you accept yourself instead of reject? That's the only branching decision in the game I think.
Spoilers for plot hereMind explaining the plot a bit? I have no idea what happened at the end, or why they have to leave, or why the protagonist suddenly turns tsundere, or anything. What happened to her sister? Who's the random person at the lake, a sequel hook? No idea. I'm never big on these subtle types..
Freakin tileset passability, it was always a clusterfuck in that project so I could never fully fix those :S Basically yes, you accept.
Basically the ending you get influences Unelma's character in the next game.
For the plot, I don't know if you've read the flashback diaries but I'll assume you didn't, since you didn't see her turning "tsundere" in advance.
She turned tsundere because she was infected by Ray and the infection kicked in where she felt murderous, and it took control of her. As for why they have to leave. Basically her sister(leyn) capitalized on Unelma going wild and organized the entire thing so she could separate from her. But it didn't go according to plan, By the plan, Unelma should've never remembered anything and should've just left thinking she's dead. So why she had to leave was because she wanted to in the first place, and Unelma couldn't have stayed in that village alone, so she took the only offer there was. The random person at the lake was for the sequel yes ;D.
Sorry I'm not the best at explaining either, hope that helped a bit xP
bicfarmer
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I felt like it could have been alot better. Not a fan of amnesia light dependency gameplay. The other mechanic, where you get stronger, that basically will aggro all the enemies in the room and you will either take hits or be forced to camp after it runs out. Some tiles were passable when they shouldnt have been. On the second floor of the orphanage, the stairs on the right side (next to the left door that leads out of the building) did not seem to work. Also, how do you get the other ending? Do you accept yourself instead of reject? That's the only branching decision in the game I think.
Spoilers for plot here
Spoilers for plot here
Mind explaining the plot a bit? I have no idea what happened at the end, or why they have to leave, or why the protagonist suddenly turns tsundere, or anything. What happened to her sister? Who's the random person at the lake, a sequel hook? No idea. I'm never big on these subtle types..
atasuke10
1751
author=belial12
wah this is a very good game! I really liked the whole system of fear and seals and stuff, plus this game gives off a sense of exploration though I'm not sure if that's intended.
the story line is fine for a short game, and I'm really looking forward to the next game, perhaps you should play around more with the concept of a fear system?
Overall a nice game, I would give it a 3.8 star, thanks for the hard work!
Whoa thanks you so much!
I'm glad you enjoyed it that much :D
The fear system itself was easy to make but the spawning system for the thing made me tear my hair out :P.
belial12
0
wah this is a very good game! I really liked the whole system of fear and seals and stuff, plus this game gives off a sense of exploration though I'm not sure if that's intended.
the story line is fine for a short game, and I'm really looking forward to the next game, perhaps you should play around more with the concept of a fear system?
Overall a nice game, I would give it a 3.8 star, thanks for the hard work!
the story line is fine for a short game, and I'm really looking forward to the next game, perhaps you should play around more with the concept of a fear system?
Overall a nice game, I would give it a 3.8 star, thanks for the hard work!
atasuke10
1751
author=AnnAbyss
Is this game a zip. file?
If my memory serves me right, I rar'd it and then uploaded it.
atasuke10
1751
author=Asphodel
Fun game. I liked how you get rewarded for exploring with calming drugs and flashbacks, haha.
Also, nice mapping skills.
Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
That was the idea xd put something in each house to encourage going in.
Asphodel
63
Fun game. I liked how you get rewarded for exploring with calming drugs and flashbacks, haha.
Also, nice mapping skills.
Also, nice mapping skills.
atasuke10
1751
author=shayoko
Random thoughtsgood intro
should change the "lvl" on the status screen to age.
and make a custom menu that removes all unneeded features like status,equip ect
i hate plots like this so much...and people wonder why anyone could hate humans...unreal...
but...its pretty satisfying seeing this village rot :D
oh kick out of the village? they just said kick before...i thought they wanted to physically beat the crap out of the girls from the way the cutscene with the mayor worded it
General 45M+Honestly,i am not a fan of horror games as the overly "dark" situations and themes
often found in them. blow my mind how people can call it a master piece.
This game however has the right amount of depressing and positive things to make it a great game.
generally speaking,that is to say design wise i have no complaints whats so ever! :D
there were a couple minor improvements to be made. but...
Overall
I highly recommend this game!
Thank your for your kind words!
I'm happy you enjoyed it so much, it always gives me inspiration to make more
games when people enjoy them :))
I'll be making the hud simpler soon(tomorrow since its finally weekend) i was just too busy this week to fix anything :P
Random thoughts
General 45M+
Overall
I highly recommend this game!
good intro
should change the "lvl" on the status screen to age.
and make a custom menu that removes all unneeded features like status,equip ect
i hate plots like this so much...and people wonder why anyone could hate humans...unreal...
but...its pretty satisfying seeing this village rot :D
oh kick out of the village? they just said kick before...i thought they wanted to physically beat the crap out of the girls from the way the cutscene with the mayor worded it
should change the "lvl" on the status screen to age.
and make a custom menu that removes all unneeded features like status,equip ect
i hate plots like this so much...and people wonder why anyone could hate humans...unreal...
but...its pretty satisfying seeing this village rot :D
oh kick out of the village? they just said kick before...i thought they wanted to physically beat the crap out of the girls from the way the cutscene with the mayor worded it
General 45M+
Honestly,i am not a fan of horror games as the overly "dark" situations and themes
often found in them. blow my mind how people can call it a master piece.
This game however has the right amount of depressing and positive things to make it a great game.
generally speaking,that is to say design wise i have no complaints whats so ever! :D
there were a couple minor improvements to be made. but...
often found in them. blow my mind how people can call it a master piece.
This game however has the right amount of depressing and positive things to make it a great game.
generally speaking,that is to say design wise i have no complaints whats so ever! :D
there were a couple minor improvements to be made. but...
Overall
I highly recommend this game!
atasuke10
1751
author=FieryDenis
Quite a fun game. I really liked the sword mechanic - gave power to the character.
I do have a question however:
There is a house in the woods with a locked door that I was unable to unlock. Is it possible to somehow unlock it?
PS. Removed other questions after finding the answers from ExtremeDevelopment's gameplay videos.
No sadly you can't, That one house, there's no way to open :D
Sorry :P
Quite a fun game. I really liked the sword mechanic - gave power to the character.
I do have a question however:
There is a house in the woods with a locked door that I was unable to unlock. Is it possible to somehow unlock it?
PS. Removed other questions after finding the answers from ExtremeDevelopment's gameplay videos.
I do have a question however:
There is a house in the woods with a locked door that I was unable to unlock. Is it possible to somehow unlock it?
PS. Removed other questions after finding the answers from ExtremeDevelopment's gameplay videos.
atasuke10
1751
author=mjshi
Submitted review~ I'm going to replay this to reevaluate the mechanics, though, since you say you fixed the bugs.
Alright, i'm looking forward to it :)
I hope I didnt create more bugs with this thing though :P
Submitted review~ I'm going to replay this to reevaluate the mechanics, though, since you say you fixed the bugs.
atasuke10
1751
author=mjshiWhat the hell.
This game certainly has a very interesting mechanic that result in seemingly-random gameovers...
I mean, getting chased down by spectres and fear being max -> gameover, I can understand, but fear only being yellow and attempting to slash a crystal with a katana with full seals -> gameover? What xD
I don't think that's supposed to happen xd
can you tell me which crystal was it place wise? Maybe it's a specific one I didn't fix.
Edit:
- fixed every possibility of that happening, by adding a death variable checker.
It'll constantly check the variables to have you die when intended and not before or after.
This game certainly has a very interesting mechanic that result in seemingly-random gameovers...
I mean, getting chased down by spectres and fear being max -> gameover, I can understand, but fear only being yellow and attempting to slash a crystal with a katana with full seals -> gameover? What xD
I mean, getting chased down by spectres and fear being max -> gameover, I can understand, but fear only being yellow and attempting to slash a crystal with a katana with full seals -> gameover? What xD
atasuke10
1751
Update/Fixes:
- Updated all facesets and some sprites (with the exception of Leyn)
- Fixed bug where slashing at a crystal with 0 seals gives game over
- fixed a certain npc chasing you before intended chase.
- Updated all facesets and some sprites (with the exception of Leyn)
- Fixed bug where slashing at a crystal with 0 seals gives game over
- fixed a certain npc chasing you before intended chase.
author=atasuke10
- When and if Unelma's rid of her sword and is knocked out at some point, don't go close to the left wall (trying not to spoil and tell the bug at the same time)
Yeah I'm using Yanfly Chase Engine in my current project too, so I know how annoying it can be. I actually do like the art, it's way better than anything I can do that's for sure :P
author=atasuke10
I watched it through, it was very entertaining for me :D
seeing you panic when the panic meter filled xd and running through everyone getting chased by even more things :D
eating all the pills at some point too xd
Hahah yeah ain't nobody got time for regen XD And yeah when life gives you enemies you don't simply sneak past them.
You #YOLO.
atasuke10
1751
author=ExtremeDevelopment
Just like I promised, here' the playlist ^^
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLbBjoGTz_G4owX5gUmLlpw5V1GWU1dTiA
I watched it through, it was very entertaining for me :D
seeing you panic when the panic meter filled xd and running through everyone getting chased by even more things :D
eating all the pills at some point too xd
as well as I saw some unforgivable bugs being in the game resulting you to die in very bs ways. Sorry about those.
I'm gonna update the game with the fix as soon as I'm done renewing the art in it.
three days.
Meanwhile the bugs that are game breaking:
- Slashing at crystals without seals gives you a game over when it should just give
a warning that you can't make it disappear without seals
- When and if Unelma's rid of her sword and is knocked out at some point, don't go close to the left wall (trying not to spoil and tell the bug at the same time)
Just like I promised, here' the playlist ^^
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLbBjoGTz_G4owX5gUmLlpw5V1GWU1dTiA
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLbBjoGTz_G4owX5gUmLlpw5V1GWU1dTiA
