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Death Animation (Need your help)
sanggameboy- 01/11/2017 01:59 PM
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So I've been making this animation, it's supposed to be fast but I don't know if it's too fast that you can't even see what's going on in the scene. And I feel like there's something missing in the scene, but I don't know what is it (for now).
Guys, what do you think about the scene? And if you were me, what would you do to make the scene looks better?
Guys, what do you think about the scene? And if you were me, what would you do to make the scene looks better?
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Make_it_MagiK
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CloseWell, you're right that it's pretty fast... Although one can understand what's going on, i would prefer to make it a bit slower. Apart from this i think it's everything alright, i really like it! Good job! One thing more though, maybe if I would be at your place I will add some plants or something that decorates a bit the hall near the windows... It looks a bit empty for me, but of course is a matter of taste
NoBody13
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It seems like the character disappears when it gets skewered. Like you see just a "thing" that comes out, the character disappear and then the thing becomes covered with blood... I dunno maybe cuz it's too fast? And because of that you cannot see that actually the character gets skewered.
PS: I hope you understand what I mean...
PS: I hope you understand what I mean...
author=Make_it_MagiK
Well, you're right that it's pretty fast... Although one can understand what's going on, i would prefer to make it a bit slower. Apart from this i think it's everything alright, i really like it! Good job! One thing more though, maybe if I would be at your place I will add some plants or something that decorates a bit the hall near the windows... It looks a bit empty for me, but of course is a matter of taste
Actually, it's a bit slower in the original file because it was 60fps, and the gif above is <30fps, it means the converter cut a lot of frames from the original file and that make the converted file seems faster. And I didn't put anything in the hall near the windows because my high school never put anything in the hall near windows, hahaha.
author=NoBody13
It seems like the character disappears when it gets skewered. Like you see just a "thing" that comes out, the character disappear and then the thing becomes covered with blood... I dunno maybe cuz it's too fast? And because of that you cannot see that actually the character gets skewered.
PS: I hope you understand what I mean...
I understand what you mean, but I did that with purpose. :D
I don't know how to explain this, but it just fit with how the conversation, that plays the scene, goes in the game.
And btw here's the new version of the animation. (^ ^ )
My friend told me to add more blood so I did it, and the result looks great so far.
Make_it_MagiK
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author=sanggameboy
Actually, it's a bit slower in the original file because it was 60fps, and the gif above is <30fps, it means the converter cut a lot of frames from the original file and that make the converted file seems faster. And I didn't put anything in the hall near the windows because my high school never put anything in the hall near windows, hahaha.
And btw here's the new version of the animation. (^ ^ )
My friend told me to add more blood so I did it, and the result looks great so far.
If it the original is slower, then I think it's just perfect! Hahaha, well then I think it's okay even without decorations. Besides I have to say that the blood gives really a nice touch, good work!
NoBody13
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author=sanggameboyauthor=Make_it_MagiKActually, it's a bit slower in the original file because it was 60fps, and the gif above is <30fps, it means the converter cut a lot of frames from the original file and that make the converted file seems faster. And I didn't put anything in the hall near the windows because my high school never put anything in the hall near windows, hahaha.
Well, you're right that it's pretty fast... Although one can understand what's going on, i would prefer to make it a bit slower. Apart from this i think it's everything alright, i really like it! Good job! One thing more though, maybe if I would be at your place I will add some plants or something that decorates a bit the hall near the windows... It looks a bit empty for me, but of course is a matter of taste
author=NoBody13
It seems like the character disappears when it gets skewered. Like you see just a "thing" that comes out, the character disappear and then the thing becomes covered with blood... I dunno maybe cuz it's too fast? And because of that you cannot see that actually the character gets skewered.
PS: I hope you understand what I mean...
I understand what you mean, but I did that with purpose. :D
I don't know how to explain this, but it just fit with how the conversation, that plays the scene, goes in the game.
And btw here's the new version of the animation. (^ ^ )
My friend told me to add more blood so I did it, and the result looks great so far.
Oh... Now is much better, you should thank your friend ;) (I'm sure you already did)
author=NoBody13
Oh... Now is much better, you should thank your friend ;) (I'm sure you already did)
Yeah, I did, but I don't feel proud of myself, because he was the one who made the animation better, not me. I knew there was something missing but I just couldn't know what it was. I'm just disappointed in myself.
NoBody13
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author=sanggameboyauthor=NoBody13Oh... Now is much better, you should thank your friend ;) (I'm sure you already did)
Yeah, I did, but I don't feel proud of myself, because he was the one who made the animation better, not me. I knew there was something missing but I just couldn't know what it was. I'm just disappointed in myself.
Maaaan what are you saying? I mean, after all, you did the animation, he just gave you a tip, nothing more (for what i know, LOL). Nobody is perfect, (haha that's funny since my name is nobody) and everyone needs help sometime:) keep on the good work!
author=NoBody13author=sanggameboyYeah, I did, but I don't feel proud of myself, because he was the one who made the animation better, not me. I knew there was something missing but I just couldn't know what it was. I'm just disappointed in myself.author=NoBody13Oh... Now is much better, you should thank your friend ;) (I'm sure you already did)
Maaaan what are you saying? I mean, after all, you did the animation, he just gave you a tip, nothing more (for what i know, LOL). Nobody is perfect, (haha that's funny since my name is nobody) and everyone needs help sometime:) keep on the good work!
Thank you. :(
I've always been working alone, so I always force myself to be the best. When my friend gave me the idea to add more blood, I was like "how could I forget about that detail". I knew there was something missing but couldn't know what it was. *sigh* Really really disappointed in myself. But anw, thank you again. (^ ^ )
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