Hey, so I thing this project needs more care. To be honest two good things about it so far are graphics (you can't go wrong with Final Fantasy rips), music (rips) and the very first line of the story.


I got this for Christmas from Zephire98

The rest seems to serve no purpose and can be reworked completely. I think puzzles are not terrible but they can't fill the emptiness. And the story... I hate it and I'm sure I can do better than that. There were supposed to be four different endings. But I don't really need them. One decent would be enough. So I'm returning to notepad and gonna write something better. I like some pieces. Dj Death playing his favorite dance macabre in dungeon is witty at least. And being poisoned by an old man isn't so bad either. I can use it as a timer in this new version.

I plan to change the world too. There will be battles now. It makes sense and I really need to have a game with working and balanced battles on my portfolio. To accommodate them, there will be bigger dungeon, more surface maps and more interiors. There probably won't be too many new NPCs (one so far), repurposing the old ones should be enough.

Other 'systems' will be changed as well. There will be a fast travel item, which transports you back to town and more items overall. I may even add regular equipment. Symbols should serve a purpose and leading to a treasure. There will be more puzzles and I'm likely to enhance some graphics.

I'll stop pretending that this is a horror game. It's an adventure.

Overall My aim is to make this game worth 3 stars.