ISRIERI'S PROFILE

GRAVE MISTAKE
-Not a bad level. Climbing the treetops was good n' fun. The potatomen zombies were cute!

-That first bonus room is surprisingly jarring! The combination of the SMW cave tiles and the default music really threw me for a loop. I think you might want to redo that room to look like the rest of the level.

-The only part I'm iffy on is the large open space where all the blue pipes are. They're at such a distance that most players will either do one of two things: Very carefully make long hops from pipe to pipe, stopping at each once to assess the situation (uncommon) or they'll make continuous running jumps from pipe to pipe and do it all in one go (most likely). I'm worried the two venus plants you've got in there will nail unsuspecting players who leap at the wrong times, so I think it would be a good idea to hint toward their presence: Coins over all the pipes except the ones with plants.

-I'd also stick some tree graphics in that area. It might look nicer.

-Approved. Excellent 3up moon at the end! This is a serious contender for Best Level Title.

-I totally thought this was going to be Ghouls n' Ghosts. :<

PEACEFUL PARADISE

-THIS IS WAY TOO LONG. You need to cut it.

-3 or 4 of the sections you currently have need to out the window. The biggest problem with this level is that because it goes on for too long, the platforming gets stale and repetitive. This is a great level and I think it's close to being set to go: It just needs a massive cut in length. Go through it and decide which sections you want to get rid of, and adjust the warps accordingly. Once that's done, I'll have another look.


CONSPICIOUS CAVERN

-The luigi thing didn't really impress me. Didn't like it.

-You can have the character blocks at the beginning, but you can't block the other characters from the level: The rules are that all levels must be playable by all characters. (Except Link. Screw Link.)

-Although there's nothing really wrong with the way this level plays, I can't help but say that it feels odd. There's something about the graphics and the structure of it that don't feel right to me. The lack of a ceiling in certain places, the music, the uniformity of the tiles, the background. Why isn't this outside or something? Why not set it to a starry background and say you're in a huge Vanilla Dome cave?

-At the very least I'd recommend a music change for sure. The cave theme from the New Super Mario Bros would fit well here.

-The first half of the level was pretty good and I had no problems with it. It's a little hard for World 1. Better for 3 or 5 maybe? The only part of this level I didn't like was Demonigi at the end. I'd get rid of all of that.

-I'd like to know how one gets up to the bonus room.

-The goal area needs to end in a full screen of black background.

CHEMICAL ROMANCE
-I don't have too much bad to say about this one at this point. The design of this level is pretty interesting. Everything looks nice too. Normally I'd tell you to add secrets, like a bonus pipe, but this is the one odd level where I think you're fine with what you have. Approved.


FOREST OF COLD SILENCE
-Mother music. Welp, I'm sold. Approved.

-But seriously, this is a pretty solid level. My only real complaint is that the level's a teensy bit too long (or i'm just insane) and that the roto-discs aren't snowflakes.

-Your bevy of bonus rooms is very beneficial to the level's pacing! I liked the hidden one on the bottom of the screen. The rooms themselves are all designed well, in addition.

-I kind of wonder if you need ghosts in this level. The enemies you already have in place do a pretty good enough job as is, I thought. But that's only a nitpick. I didn't pay attention to see if there were any clever placements.

-The poison mushrooms made me smile.

-It was refreshing to play a simple level again. I actually had fun with it. Officially Approved.