RAEKWON'S PROFILE

Fire beats ice... I will give you that, because it melts.
But Ice beating fire? Do you freeze the fire? Fire isn't a liquid, solid or gas.
Wouldn't water be more effective against water?

So... did you want feedback on the map or the textbox/portrait or both? You didn't actually answer.

The second version of the map has blending problems with the dirt in the lower right. The grass and dark grass and dirt tiles are all designed so that you can go seamlessly from one to the other without clear solid lines between tiles. You made use of it with the two scorches areas in the upper left, but not with the scorched area in the lower right. And also not with the dark grass. No matter what caused the dark grass, it's not going to change from light to dark in the middle of a blade of grass. Your grass just cuts off.

The dude in the text box needs underarm hair. If he's lifting his arm up like that you should be able to see his underarm hair.

And yeah, fix the typo.