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A Timeless Story
author=Midori_Fragments
Thank you so much!
About the double-checking: maybe you haven't noticed, but when you read the letter in the church's bookshelf, it says "on the empty shelf, apart from a big book, there is a letter..." haha XD
And for the silver dagger there was some kind of hint "there is a drawer", but I understand that the shape of the table doesn't help much XD
Upcoming projects? Yessir! We're working on "A Timeless Story"'s prequel now (but I think it will be a trilogy in the end), which hopefully will fill in all the blanks about the secondary characters. Can you guess who will get the leading role? ;)
If you're interested in following all the updates about our next games, there's our Facebook page Midori Fragments; in any case, thanks again for playing, I really really enjoyed your gameplay!
Ok, I clearly forgot tthe apart from a big book part. My bad, sorry for that, and compliment to you for actually teasing it^^
Well if it is a prequel it has to be someone from
the "Alys Timeline"
I have no idea why Glenn wanted to have a son so badly, and a story about Daniel's upbringing could be interesting
Thank you, and I make sure to follow your Facebook (the link in your user profile is not working, but I found it anyway^^). Thanks again for creating this game and good luck! :)
A Timeless Story
author=Midori_Fragments
You're so funny! I really enjoyed the intro and your talking about the Roman gods :D
I apologize for the "chiusa", that means "locked" in Italian, I corrected that in the latest version, which I'm uploading now, together with the major glitch in the neutral ending. So glad you liked the graphics, that means they hadn't been a complete failure, haha :)
In the opening video the girl was indeed Alys: pictures within the game were drawn by various artists, so occasionally the characters are slightly different.
Thank you^^
No need to apologize, that was the smallest inconvinience of all time :D
Alrighty, now my thoughts about the game can be found in the end of my LP:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0l3nxrZEm4w&index=2&list=PLutQRqszz0ouZEBY5411hwB5E5krDCwl4
But for those who do not want to watch I'll write the most important parts down^^:
Overall I think this is a very good game given the fact that it is your first. Some small negative criticisms:
- I think double checking stuff in RPG Maker Games (with the hair clip and the dagger) is a bit counterintuitive and a bit unfair^^
- Placing the key to the true/positive ending in the beginning of a game is a bit annoying since you have to replay the whole thing
- The Dellbert part of the story was not fleshed out enough compared to the Alys part
Now the positive aspects:
- I liked the sprites, the drawings and the overall look of the game. It fit the games theme very well.
- I enjoyed the puzzles (with few exceptions)
- The Game had good pacing and always kept me interested in what is going to happen next, which is the most important aspect of a good game imo
- I think double checking stuff in RPG Maker Games (with the hair clip and the dagger) is a bit counterintuitive and a bit unfair^^
- Placing the key to the true/positive ending in the beginning of a game is a bit annoying since you have to replay the whole thing
- The Dellbert part of the story was not fleshed out enough compared to the Alys part
Now the positive aspects:
- I liked the sprites, the drawings and the overall look of the game. It fit the games theme very well.
- I enjoyed the puzzles (with few exceptions)
- The Game had good pacing and always kept me interested in what is going to happen next, which is the most important aspect of a good game imo
So a big thumbs up from me! Thank you for your hard work, I can't wait to see upcoming projects (if there are upcoming projects that is^^)
A Timeless Story
I started to play your game today; so far (being like halfway through) it looks pretty cool. The story is interesting and I for one enjoy the graphics. I wonder how all of it is going to be resolved in the end, but I suppose I will see. Gonna give my complete thoughts when I finished the game.
P.S: If you want to check out my LP, feel free to do so:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETMnCbQKkVA
P.S: If you want to check out my LP, feel free to do so:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETMnCbQKkVA
Lettre
author=melty
Thank you for your feedback! Letty's portrait sometimes not appearing is done intentionally, because she is somewhat a semi-silent protagonist. So it's used mostly when I see a good use for it. Dialogue wise, I'll iron it out and fix the grammar issues and see how it goes. Regarding the puzzle, if the mushroom dislikes all colours - then what colour would they prefer? A colour that isn't seen as a colour or something, lol.
Anyways, the feedback is much appreciated. I knew I left an issue in there or two, so having it pointed out helps!
Ah ok, that was intentional, well it confused me a bit^^ I somehow did not get the message of the mushroom disliking all colors but I guess that was on me :D
Lettre
Edit: Problem I had solved :D
Edit Edit: Alrighty, I have played the demo, and I liked the game overall. My thoughts:
And if you want to see my Let's Play, feel free to do so: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KT5_VdxX1Zg
Edit Edit: Alrighty, I have played the demo, and I liked the game overall. My thoughts:
First let us get the negative aspects out of the way; the game has a few spellng errors and sentences that seem to be a bit weird. The Main characters portrait does not show up most of the time during her dialogue. And there was a bug somewhere but I forgot where to be honest :D Also the dialogue is overall a bit wooden, it does not come off as natural. Espacially the siblings dialogue seemed somewhat off.
That being said I really liked the art style of the game and the overall story got me hooked even though we are barely in yet, so that is worth a thumbs up^^ I am really curious why our protagonist was trapped. The one puzzle in the game was relatively easy, allthough I have no idea why white was the correct answer for the far right mushroom.
So to sum it up: I liked it, shows much potential, needs some polishing :)
That being said I really liked the art style of the game and the overall story got me hooked even though we are barely in yet, so that is worth a thumbs up^^ I am really curious why our protagonist was trapped. The one puzzle in the game was relatively easy, allthough I have no idea why white was the correct answer for the far right mushroom.
So to sum it up: I liked it, shows much potential, needs some polishing :)
And if you want to see my Let's Play, feel free to do so: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KT5_VdxX1Zg
Jasei no In: The Serpent's Lust
Alrighty, so I finished the game. My opinion:
So overall thumbs up, I enjoyed this. I am looking forward for your "Little pink riding hoot game" :D
Oh and some shilling for the LP I did (Sorry^^):
I liked the story itself. I mean it was not a complicated one or anything, but I love good straightfforward storytelling a lot, so thumbs up for that. I also enjoyed the pixel art, I think it fit the theme very well. And in general I find this adaptation of japanese storys a cool idea!
The only minor complaint I have is: Even for a game with little gameplay that had too little gameplay. But as mentioned, it is not a big deal
The only minor complaint I have is: Even for a game with little gameplay that had too little gameplay. But as mentioned, it is not a big deal
So overall thumbs up, I enjoyed this. I am looking forward for your "Little pink riding hoot game" :D
Oh and some shilling for the LP I did (Sorry^^):
Let's Play: Jasei no In: The Serpent's Lust Part 1 - A Rainy Day In Ancient Japan
I downloaded the newer patch, as you told me in the yt comments. Thanks for going out of your way to tell me^^
Träumerei
Hi, I played your demo and I really find the art, the design and perspective interesting.
A few bugs I ran into:
Except for that it looked really interesting and I would love to see what the game will have to offer.
P.S: Shilling for my LP:
A few bugs I ran into:
-If you enter your room after having killed the magpie and you go back and check the door in the hallway to the left, the magpie is back on the balcony.
-If you click on stuff to the right for example in corners sometimes you get the text for stuff above. happened in hallways with the pictures.
- I did not even need to get the scissors, when I reentered I just magically had them^^
- And not a bug, but I guess when you go to the right first and Noel talks about water for "him" it is a bit weird since we do not know about the thirsty animal yet^^
-If you click on stuff to the right for example in corners sometimes you get the text for stuff above. happened in hallways with the pictures.
- I did not even need to get the scissors, when I reentered I just magically had them^^
- And not a bug, but I guess when you go to the right first and Noel talks about water for "him" it is a bit weird since we do not know about the thirsty animal yet^^
Except for that it looked really interesting and I would love to see what the game will have to offer.
P.S: Shilling for my LP:
White Sky
author=RC_Heal
Your review at the end was so beautiful! Thank you so much for playing the game and recording your reactions of it!
I was hiding my face at all the bugs/errors hahahaa.....sorry about that...
Seriously though, I'm so glad you liked the game! It means so much!
The bucks weren't that bad. Allthough not being killed by Toby in one of the hallway and the knife fight is worth looking into, that would be good to be fixed^^
Well once more thank you for this game and I can't wait for a possible new project in the future^^
White Sky
Ok, so I finished my Let's Play of your game (unecessary plug:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mfoRzMX6sKY
To sum up what I said in the end of the video: This game was really good. The pacing was great, every step forward we made in the game made sense, the story was emotional and the characters relatable. I also really liked the art. I am not sure if this was you first work, but if so, it is really impressive, espacially the storytelling in the game was well done.
So from me you get two thumbs up for this piece of art!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mfoRzMX6sKY
To sum up what I said in the end of the video: This game was really good. The pacing was great, every step forward we made in the game made sense, the story was emotional and the characters relatable. I also really liked the art. I am not sure if this was you first work, but if so, it is really impressive, espacially the storytelling in the game was well done.
So from me you get two thumbs up for this piece of art!
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