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TESPY'S PROFILE

I've loved games and programming since I was young. I joined this site because of my interest in Eredia: The Diary of Heroes, a project I eventually helped out in the play-testing and proofreading/editing departments.

My best skills lie in game programming, proofreading/editing English text, and play-testing games.

Most of my game programming experience is in Unity, and I've grown pretty confident in my skills. I've been learning to script for RMMV as well, and at the time of this writing, I've created two nice plugins for it.

Most of my play-testing/proofreading/editing experience is as QA staff at a certain eroge publisher. Did more than 8 projects for them.

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Looks much better! The only thing I would change is make the sharins text on the bottom left (both in and out of the septagon) contrast more with the septagon they are on. Perhaps color them gold, since sharins are the currency.

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Glad to help :> I think that for the menu bubbles, it'd be better to not have the names on the bubbles, since as you said, the name would be displayed in the left hand box anyway.

Understood about your other points.

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It looks pretty nice! Certainly a lot cooler than the rather plain menu you had before.

Here are my suggestions for improving it:

- Remove that timer box in the top right; seeing play time isn't feature that deserves to be shown on the main menu like that. Just seeing the playtime in the save menu is enough. Plus, the space you'd free up from that could be used to make other parts of the main screen look nicer.

- Make all the green text in this menu white; they blend in too much with whatever is under them.

- If you removed the timer bar, the text on the menu bubbles should be under their respective bubbles, or at least a bit lower; it looks rather cramped as is.

- Also if you removed the timer bar, you should make the menu choice bubbles and their text bigger. Perhaps spread them out a bit, perhaps lower the character portraits down slightly so the screen looks less cramped.

- I think that's just a glitch, but that zero in the box displaying your money needs to be in front of the box, like the letters on the Menu box in the top left.

- The boxes with the party members' names on them should be a little taller, with the text in them getting bigger to match.

I hope this helps! ^_^

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I like it :>
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