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Breathless
An indie horror game made by RPG Maker XP

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author=KunaKasai
author=Xnition
author=KunaKasai
author=Xnition
author=Riddleriddle
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.
There is no key for that bedroom, you don't have to look for it
is there any way to finish the game without the last game over? the one that riddlerriddle was talking about. I'm guessing that I'd need to find gasoline somewhere to power the generator, but I can't find it anywhere and there isn't really a clue to where you can find it. Searching all the rooms won't help for me, because the lady seems to be room triggered and for instance I can't exit the third room (the storage) without dieing.
there's only bad ending where you have to die. There is also no gasoline for the generator. Escaping the third room is simple, if you still couldn't figure out a way then watch the walkthrough :))
So there's only one ending? I got
The one where she wakes up in the asylum after running out the door and gets killed by her mom
And I don't see how I could get another ending (except for the non-existent gasoline one). what I meant by not being able to leave the storage room is when I have done everything and found the front door key. After that I was running around to find gasoline, but upon exiting the storage room the thing is immediately up in my face. Anyways I recorded a let's play of it so If you don't know what I mean check that.

Anyway in case you want some tips on improving the game:
Give clues on where to find things, for instance I couldn't find the first key, only after checking EVERYTHING, and that's not something that you should have in a game in my opinion.
Definitely get someone to do a spell-check before putting it up. Not only did I get slightly annoyed by grammar mistakes (which are somewhat excusable as you're not a native speaker) but there were some spelling mistakes that could've been avoided by just rechecking, like the storage room being named strorage.
I suggest rewriting the background story of the main character. Right now, to me she just comes across as a major brat and I don't feel sorry for her whatsoever. Anything could be better, like it were actually shapeshifters or demons or whatever, just use imagination.
Anyway I corrected some of the grammar as I played the game so if you want to see, my Youtube channel is the same as my username here.

thank you for your feedback, i will try to improve it in the next update :)

Breathless

author=tyang15
I love horror game. I will tired it out and post it into my youtube channel soon. May I have your permission?

- RedRanzo

sure you can do that, but this version is incompleted so there is a few bug and grammar mistakes. If you think that it is fine then it is okay for you to record it and put it on youtube

Breathless

author=KunaKasai
author=Xnition
author=Riddleriddle
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.
There is no key for that bedroom, you don't have to look for it
is there any way to finish the game without the last game over? the one that riddlerriddle was talking about. I'm guessing that I'd need to find gasoline somewhere to power the generator, but I can't find it anywhere and there isn't really a clue to where you can find it. Searching all the rooms won't help for me, because the lady seems to be room triggered and for instance I can't exit the third room (the storage) without dieing.

there's only bad ending where you have to die. There is also no gasoline for the generator. Escaping the third room is simple, if you still couldn't figure out a way then watch the walkthrough :))

Blood Ties

author=nhubi
There you go. That makes it easier for people to download it, since quite a lot of people seem to miss the downloads tab.

Thks :))

Blood Ties

Where can i download this game ?

Breathless

author=Riddleriddle
Hi, I would love to finish this game because it sounds like there is a lot more to the story but I keep getting stuck
at the part where I can exit out of the front door because mother catches me once I leave. I still have a locked bed room door and can't seem to find the key...hmm.

There is no key for that bedroom, you don't have to look for it

Breathless

Ok i'll do my best to fix t
author=ExtremeDevelopment
Already stuck...Is there a walkthrough somewhere?
I'm stuck where you exit the opening room.I checked every door and it says ''it's lock''(the last part was a joke btw).So far,I love it,especially the lighting.There are some grammar mistakes though I don't mind it.Still,you should get someone to fix the grammar errors since it may make some people turn away.

I'll try my best to fix th grammar :) thanks for your feedback

Breathless

author=ExtremeDevelopment
Wow this looks very good!I'll play it as soon as a download is added.
Thanks man! By the way, i uploaded the game :))
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