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Let's work on your game descriptions!
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Well great. I am about to give up. My game been denied almost 15 time.
I don't even know anymore.
This is current description.
Description need fixing. I tried everything.
I don't even know anymore.
This is current description.
Slayers Legends Episode 1: The Land Corruption Story Summary -
The legend that was once known is now being experience once again. The chaos begins to overshadow the peace in our world "Zyia". Ages ago the world was brought back in peace by 13 people who possess the lost magic class. Heroes with a demon, dragon, and slayer of titans being among them.
After the crisis ended the heroes sealed theirs powers away including the Demon Slaying magic. They are the people who are descendant of the Heroine Yumia. The original Demon Slayer who serve the creator "God". Are hidden away from humanity on a island in the sky that is not visible.
But now the era of darkness is about to told yet again. Now that the demons have now been freed from the seal that was placed on them. They run free without anyone coming to slay them. Who could have done such a thing? Who will bring peace to our world Zyia?
The new story of darkness is about to unfold!!
The legend that was once known is now being experience once again. The chaos begins to overshadow the peace in our world "Zyia". Ages ago the world was brought back in peace by 13 people who possess the lost magic class. Heroes with a demon, dragon, and slayer of titans being among them.
After the crisis ended the heroes sealed theirs powers away including the Demon Slaying magic. They are the people who are descendant of the Heroine Yumia. The original Demon Slayer who serve the creator "God". Are hidden away from humanity on a island in the sky that is not visible.
But now the era of darkness is about to told yet again. Now that the demons have now been freed from the seal that was placed on them. They run free without anyone coming to slay them. Who could have done such a thing? Who will bring peace to our world Zyia?
The new story of darkness is about to unfold!!
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Gameplay:
Will be based around the Academy within the game. Similar to Final Fantasy VIII's Garden and Seed. Battle system will be intense with every playable characters is unique. Some quest will have you look for items on monsters, hunt monsters or deliver certain items. This will also allow you recruit other academy students temporarily. Quest that are completed reward you with Guardian Points. Which can be used to get rare items, equipment or find hidden location.
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Features:
- Targeting 7 hrs for Episode 1
- Traditional Turn-base Battle System
- Individual Classes for characters
- Challenging Bosses
- Quest System
- Expect some original characters and monsters (Party and several others)
- Original Music is currently being produced
- No Over World(Every place is connected)
- Recruit NPC( Academy students )
Gameplay:
Will be based around the Academy within the game. Similar to Final Fantasy VIII's Garden and Seed. Battle system will be intense with every playable characters is unique. Some quest will have you look for items on monsters, hunt monsters or deliver certain items. This will also allow you recruit other academy students temporarily. Quest that are completed reward you with Guardian Points. Which can be used to get rare items, equipment or find hidden location.
---------------
Features:
- Targeting 7 hrs for Episode 1
- Traditional Turn-base Battle System
- Individual Classes for characters
- Challenging Bosses
- Quest System
- Expect some original characters and monsters (Party and several others)
- Original Music is currently being produced
- No Over World(Every place is connected)
- Recruit NPC( Academy students )
Description need fixing. I tried everything.
Let's work on your game descriptions!
author=Marrend
@djking: Oops! I probably didn't notice your initial post, as I was in the process of typing up a response to somebody else!
Anyway, there's a bit of weird wording in there. For example, I'm not sure if "class" is the right word to use, as two of the three examples that you provide are races (ie: demon and dragon). I would probably use the term "heroes" then use "with a demon, dragon, and slayer of titans being among them". That's just me, though.
You you really have to keep using "our world, Zyia"? Once it's established that the name of the world is Zyia, you could just use "Zyia" or "the world".
I'll try that.
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Is there anything wrong with my description for my game. I posted it above.
Don't know if it got denied for since it doesn't say.
Don't know how my other game. I had over a year ago got accepted.
-------Edit:
Anyone willing to help?
Don't know if it got denied for since it doesn't say.
Don't know how my other game. I had over a year ago got accepted.
-------Edit:
Anyone willing to help?
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Is there anything wrong with this description?
Slayers Legends Episode 1: The Land Corruption Story Summary -
The legend that was once known is now being experience once again. The chaos begins to overshadow the peace in our world "Zyia". Ages ago the world was brought back in peace by 13 people who possess the lost magic class. The classes are Demon, Dragon and Titan Slayer to name a few.
After the crisis ended the heroes sealed theirs powers away including the Demon Slaying magic. They are the people who are descendant of the Heroine Yumia. The original Demon Slayer who serve the creator "God". Are hidden away from humanity on a island in the sky that is not visible.
But now the era of darkness is about to told yet again. Now that the demons have now been freed from the seal that was placed on them. They run free without anyone coming to slay them. Who could have done such a thing? Who will bring peace to our world Zyia?
The new story of darkness is about to unfold!!
------------------
Gameplay:
Will be based around the Academy within the game. Similar to Final Fantasy VIII's Garden and Seed. Battle system will be intense with every playable characters is unique. Some quest will have you look for items on monsters, hunt monsters or deliver certain items. This will also allow you recruit other academy students temporarily. Quest that are completed reward you with Guardian Points. Which can be used to get rare items, equipment or find hidden location.
---------------
Features:
- Targeting 7 hrs for Episode 1
- Traditional Turn-base Battle System
- Individual Classes for characters
- Challenging Bosses
- Quest System
- Expect some original characters and monsters (Party and several others)
- Original Music is currently being produced
- No Over World(Every place is connected)
- Recruit NPC( Academy students )
The legend that was once known is now being experience once again. The chaos begins to overshadow the peace in our world "Zyia". Ages ago the world was brought back in peace by 13 people who possess the lost magic class. The classes are Demon, Dragon and Titan Slayer to name a few.
After the crisis ended the heroes sealed theirs powers away including the Demon Slaying magic. They are the people who are descendant of the Heroine Yumia. The original Demon Slayer who serve the creator "God". Are hidden away from humanity on a island in the sky that is not visible.
But now the era of darkness is about to told yet again. Now that the demons have now been freed from the seal that was placed on them. They run free without anyone coming to slay them. Who could have done such a thing? Who will bring peace to our world Zyia?
The new story of darkness is about to unfold!!
------------------
Gameplay:
Will be based around the Academy within the game. Similar to Final Fantasy VIII's Garden and Seed. Battle system will be intense with every playable characters is unique. Some quest will have you look for items on monsters, hunt monsters or deliver certain items. This will also allow you recruit other academy students temporarily. Quest that are completed reward you with Guardian Points. Which can be used to get rare items, equipment or find hidden location.
---------------
Features:
- Targeting 7 hrs for Episode 1
- Traditional Turn-base Battle System
- Individual Classes for characters
- Challenging Bosses
- Quest System
- Expect some original characters and monsters (Party and several others)
- Original Music is currently being produced
- No Over World(Every place is connected)
- Recruit NPC( Academy students )
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From Left to Right Starting at the top.
Daj - Demon Slayer
Misami - Phoenix Magic
Riko - Chariot Magic
Flare - Dragon Slayer
Terresta - Titan Slayer
Jeno - Gravity Magic
Haruka - Exorcist
Pu-Pan - Beast Magic
Itifiquandia - Sound Magic
Sencei - Magic is currently unknown
Daj - Demon Slayer
Misami - Phoenix Magic
Riko - Chariot Magic
Flare - Dragon Slayer
Terresta - Titan Slayer
Jeno - Gravity Magic
Haruka - Exorcist
Pu-Pan - Beast Magic
Itifiquandia - Sound Magic
Sencei - Magic is currently unknown
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Realm of Chaos: The New Story Demo v0.2 Release
author=bigtime
Got unable to find audio/bgm/11 i think. This was when I was fighting in the city and went back north.
Also dialogue errors are horrible in this game. Im guessing english isnt your main language so thats ok. In houses most book shelves and what not can be walked on. Best of luck.
Well I am not planning to release another demo anytime soon and I haven't gotten close to half of the game.
Also I am not good with dialogue and I working alone on this. Beside it will be fixed.
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