FREDO'S PROFILE

author=kentona
The grass is quite golden yellow already.

I wouldn't change a thing myself! Time to work on the next area!

Maybe it's just me, but it looks more bleached out than yellowed. I'd agree that maybe it's time to just move on though. It looks fine as it is.

Something about the colors is bugging me. It's not just the black... It looks like the colors are bleeding into each other. I'm not sure if it's just a lot of pieces of chips thrown in together on a 256 color palette and getting degraded or if it's just bad screenshot quality, but there is something about the way the colors come together here that is not working for me.

Edit: I do love how you put the pieces together though. It looks great, but I think the palette needs to be evened out, the number of shades of green needs to be reduced, and the whole thing needs to be unified a little bit (right now you can easily tell which parts are and aren't meant to go together)

It's nice but there's something about it that makes it less than pleasing...

For one, I don't love the tint.

But really, I think maybe the straight line is sort of ruining what is otherwise a nice shot? I dunno. I wish I could say what exactly, but there's something about it that makes me go "Meh" even though it's actually a pretty nice screenshot.

Very nice! I don't know about the roof/tree overlap though. It looks a bit odd, like the tree ought to be a bit taller than that overhang. It sorta ruins the illusion for me.

This looks great. The characters still seem a bit short (and a bit mismatched with some of the environment in terms of palette) but it's in better proportion than the mansion, It's a pretty great look. Love how busy the map is without being unintelligible. It's a great use of space