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I'm confused. I have no idea what could possibly be up with that head (except that it's still big) and I'm supposed to be able to draw. ):
Muisc homework help D:
Muisc homework help D:
What are you thinking about right now?
Muisc homework help D:
Black Gear : A story in a steel imperialistic gritty deisel-punk world
Like this. (click quote to see)
You shouldn't rely on spellcheckers too much. Just buy the hugest book on English grammar you can find and study like whoa. It's the only way to avoid writing things like 'some one' or 'an raise' or 'red faced' or stuff like that.
That "you're" of mine: "Opps (should be oops), your (should be you're) right. I guess it is time for me to go."
Really, there are all kinds of mistakes in this. You might want to send it to your English teacher (if you have one, that is). I'm sure he/she/it would be happy to help you.
You shouldn't rely on spellcheckers too much. Just buy the hugest book on English grammar you can find and study like whoa. It's the only way to avoid writing things like 'some one' or 'an raise' or 'red faced' or stuff like that.
That "you're" of mine: "Opps (should be oops), your (should be you're) right. I guess it is time for me to go."
Really, there are all kinds of mistakes in this. You might want to send it to your English teacher (if you have one, that is). I'm sure he/she/it would be happy to help you.
Black Gear : A story in a steel imperialistic gritty deisel-punk world
Tbh, I have no idea what's going on. That's to be expected, though, I didn't really read the whole thing. That means you failed to catch your reader's attention, which is my first criticism.
The second is that your formatting is murder. Everything would be so much more pleasant to read if characters' speech had its own paragraphs and you didn't have only 6.5 words per line of text. It reminds me of my Geography textbook.
Another thing that caught my attention is the weird switching between 1st and 3rd person POVs, but I think that has more to do with your text formatting skills than anything else. And your grammar skills require some work too, you know. For somebody who intends to get this published, you ought not to mistake 'your' and 'you're'.
The second is that your formatting is murder. Everything would be so much more pleasant to read if characters' speech had its own paragraphs and you didn't have only 6.5 words per line of text. It reminds me of my Geography textbook.
Another thing that caught my attention is the weird switching between 1st and 3rd person POVs, but I think that has more to do with your text formatting skills than anything else. And your grammar skills require some work too, you know. For somebody who intends to get this published, you ought not to mistake 'your' and 'you're'.
What Videogames Are You Playing Right Now?
Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince. I'm actually playing it as a substitute for Dragon Age which is huge and very incompatible with my old brick of a laptop.
laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame.
laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame.
Need more art topics <____<;
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lol, butthair.
sorry, I couldn't help it. But beautiful drawings once again! I especially like the chibi, it's absolutely adorable.<3
Whats the worst thing you ever saw in high school?
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Damn, none of my stories are really that dark...
However, there was that one event where I saw a shrine of the school's cooking class teacher. She was well-loved by her students and died during Spring Break due to a helicopter crash. My first day back was a very, very depressing day.
In my HS, nobody makes a proper shrine. Once or twice when 'the need arose' a few friends of the kid who died would post myspace photos with 'We'll miss you' written on them. You either want to laugh or cry (or headdesk) when you see that. D:
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