TAWMAN'S PROFILE

Hey! Im Tawman! Just an old gamer who has an interest in ruby and java IDE programming and love RPG as much as anime. Just following my hobby here! Feel free to check out my stuff! ( Though not so much of em now..but one day, who knows? :p)

Failure isn't making something and turning out to be not much of a hit. Failure is when you set out to do something but abandoned it for mere reasons...

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A Berserker's Story
If a man has great power, how would he use it?

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Let's work on your game descriptions!

author=Marrend
@tawman: Off the top of my head, I would suggest something more like...

What would you do if you were in the midst of a war between Man and Demon? Would you hide in terror, merely waiting for your demise, would you save what lives you could while risking your own, or would go go forth to the front lines and fight?

You are a Berserker, the last of a forgotten clan. Wielding god-like strength, it's up to you to bring peace to a war-torn world, as your ancestors did before you.

Personal aside:
This game is somewhat inspired by the story/plot of Disgaea 2.


...that. I kinda feel a bit more can be said about how the game was inspired by Disgaea 2, but, it's up to you.
I'll take up on that advice :)

Let's work on your game descriptions!

Need a professional to do a grammatical check on this. Thanks for the co-operation!

___________________________________Description_____________________________________

What would you do if you were in a world with a war being waged between men and demons?

Would you hide somewhere and wait for your demise?

Or take a gulp of courage and rescue innocent lives while risking your own?

Or would you join the military and fight in the front lines?

You're a Berserker. The last of a forgotten clan...

Wielding great strength like the gods of old, it's up to you to bring peace to a world wrought by war and bloodshed. Along the way trying to remember your past and those of your ancestors, your heritage.
You'll be faced with many grave risks and perils, but you will not face them alone.

Walk a mile in the shoes of man who seeks to regain his honor and valor in a world void of both.


A slice of the plot and inspiration from the famous RPG "Disgaea 2" has been taken into the making of this game.

New Developer Mapping Help Thread

@liberty
Thanks for the briefed details about the pros and cons of my mapping :D
Id like to know how i can identify which one is ceiling tile and which one is ground tile? Oh and image 4 is well how do i say this? Its a room of a families father who is a magical engineer and ventured of to another kingdom so in a way you could say that its abondoned.
Room 4 is the village chiefs house so i thought about making it big (as Chief's are rich af) but ill take on your advice and make it smaller :)

New Developer Mapping Help Thread

@InfectionFiles
Thanks a lot man.The description is so well defined and improved than mine that just explains how much experience you have.I can't give you anything but i hope my gratefulness satisfies you :D

New Developer Mapping Help Thread

Guys can you please help me?
My game keep's getting rejected and this is the 8th attempt!Im getting too tired of this and i don't even know whats wrong with the game in the first place...
Hes the description:
You woke up in a cave. With no memories of your past.Forced to fight monsters. You tried going to a nearby village, but found it near its annihilation. What would you if you are in a world with a war against demons and humans? Would you hide somewhere and wait for your obliteration? Would you rescue innocent lives while risking your's? Or would you join the military and fight in the front lines.

Our protagonist here is in the same situation. He's a Berserker. The last of its kind. It was an ancient clan with people with a special class. A class with physical strength beyond godlike caliber. Get into his boots and experience the adventure of risk, danger, valor, honour and friendship.

This game was inspired by an anime called "Sword Art Online"

THIS IS WHERE THE DESCRIPTION END
Now im gonna send u the maps picture (Which im going to use as screenshot's in the game post)


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Thanks for your feedback.Could you please tell me how to specify which one is ground and which one is roofs? Appreciate it.

Let's work on your game descriptions!

Guys i need help with my description's grammer could you please correct the grammers and reply the description with proper grammer back to me?

DESCRIPTION

What would you do if you woke up in a cave with no memories of who you are.
Where you live.What job you do.Why are you here.What will i do next.Why
are you doing this.This questions keeps thriving in the protoganist mind.
But through various events,various encounters,various things,he decides
to curve his own path.From now ill be this,ill do this next,im doing this
because of this.
Its a cruel world,where theres a war,a war against humans and demons.
What will you do in a situation like this?
Try the game now to find out.
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