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Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

here she is can someone please test her i sm going to bed
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Seira.rar
DISCLAIMER:
She is a mayadere which means she is actively trying to kill you, and even here dere side is more tsun then dere. So if you do not want to watch the player get painful assassinated do not play. also there is strong language though I did try to stay away from the f bomb, oh and there are a few places where she wears a bikini. To recap VIOLENCE STRONG LANGUAGE and BIKINI.

Edit: I promise dozen an updated story as soon as i got home so here it is i am headed to bed
Story 1 INTRODUCE = 27 PLACE = Hall B JUMP A BRANCH A PLACE = None ID = 0 (I wish the teacher would either get his own supplies, or send someone other then me. I can hardly see over these boxes) ID = Takuya Be careful you might run into someone. ID = 0 You think I want to carry all these boxes. You know you could help me out by grabbing a couple. ID = Takuya You know i can't do that the teacher would give us both detention for a year. Besides how am I to open the doors for you if I am holding boxes. ID = 0 (Great I ran into someone.) ID = ??? You just ruined my new uniform! You are going to pay me back with your life! JUMP B

Content creation (technical)

i thought i found a way to fix seira by changing affection up to affection up 5 and putting her in version 2.2 but when i went to test it it came up as a speaking line am i doing something wrong?
Branch B
ID = 0
I'm really sorry about your uniform, let me help you pay for it.
ID = 27
Well at least you are willing to make up for your mistakes. I think I will let you off at that.
ID = 0
What do you mean my mistakes?! I couldn't see where I was going, because of the boxes. What is your excuse?
ID = 27
Most people don't have the balls to stand up to me. Especially after such a beat down. I like that.
AFFECTION UP 5
JUMP 3


Edit: please disregard post i changed affection to aff and that fixed it

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

if anyone wants to try to fix seira i give my full permission and consent and wave all credit to her i think i know how to fix her and will upload a more updated version when i get home if someone could beta test her to make sure there arent any errors and that all the stories line up i would appreciate it.

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

ok that's cool i didn't know if you intended it to be optimistic or something else

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

so dozen any comments on seira?

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

marrend i finnished fran and i like it so far i do have one suggestion though on the roof at the end masako says "This case... I fear it will be as simplistic as you think it will." i think won't be might be a better way to phrase that. not that i by any means should be correcting anyone else

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

just seira and yoko yoko is heavily inspired by a batman villian but the reason i'm scrapping them is this is my first day off in a month and instead of relaxing with a game or anime i'm working on seira it's not that i want to scrap them i hate leaving anything unfinished but if i get a few more people to review her and none like her i will scrap her and focus on fixing the problems i see with maeda including her extremely short story

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

oh ok i was reading it wrong then lol i thought you couldnt have been introduced to them first ok playing through this i realised that seira is no where near ready to be evaluated i need to sort too much out and i don't think i have time so i think it will be best just to scrap her and yoko what do you guys think?

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

i meant i can't seem to get fran's 5 to work Seira is still a work in progress i still want to add a few more stories and tweak the ending a little bit and if you don't want to see her anymore the only way to make her disapear is to not visit the fashion mall i might add a bad ending i still have 12 hours off of work btw the higher her affections the less violent she is

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

i will let vndb define those for you ok sorry i was going for yangire Yangire refers to characters who snap suddenly out of jealousy, irritation or something similar. This behavior is different from that of a yandere character in regard to the motivation that sparked the change in the character.

Mayadere Heroine
This type of a tsundere is dangerous and scary.
Think of a heroine that started as a villain trying to kill the protagonist but then switched to his side after falling in love with him. One that still makes jokes about killing him once in a while...

And sorry for not being more clear on the violence everyone has a past that the dont want to relive and i'm sorry that my charector brought that back up for you