TRIAD2'S PROFILE

@marrend don't worry about that i am going to write a way around the fact you can't actually give her money (secret savings account)

Edit: i hope to have one or both done by wednesday if not i will post them both on here and you guys can do or not do what you wish because i wont have time.

i guess i can tone down some of the non voilent issues and make it where he volunteers to pay for the uniform instead of her trying to beat the money out of him and make it where she doesent mention the deal they make that would make her less bully and more yandere

not really sadist more like when a little boy likes a girl and doesent realise himself what the feelings mean he will throw mud at her to get his attention just instead of mud its book baseballs and a few sharp objects

@ dozen what do you suggest i do to keep her from sounding like a bully, that won't require a total rewrite?

I think i realised why so many go for the cliched stepping on the yanderes territory cliche it's so hard to keep her from looking like just a regular bully otherwise i'm too far into this and i dont have enough time to go back so i guess i'm stuck trying to keep her from looking like a bully maybe if i show her as nice and sweet to other's but just mean to the player that might help i am also open to other suggestions

ps i disagree on your comment about marrends content granted they are usually short but there is usually a reason for it though

marrend I have a stupid question. If you are able to figure this out in a way where it increases your run ins with Joruri are you also going to lengthen her story?