TRIAD2'S PROFILE

author=flowerthief
I wouldn't make fun of that chick. She ain't one to be messed with. She's a rebel, or so I've heard.

yeah she kicked the players butt. speaking of strong ladies here is maeda yet again i went over her story with a fine tooth comb changed some tachie and last but not least ran a grammar checking program on it. http://www.mediafire.com/?76o914789evkhf6

shes not a chimera she's just a little nuts i spent 8 hours watching old batman cartoons and designed her (i had little to no net for nearly a week.)

I'm going through maeda with a fine tooth comb and i hope i find all the grammatical errors and am able to fix them till then here's a sneak peak at another one i created when i had no net

marrend thank you i will rework that part and re post the story as for help with punctuations yeah i could use help i went to 18 different high schools 21 different middle schools so my education was really inconsistent and the person i normally have do that kind of thing hasn't been online for over a year and as for the affection ups there you might be right its harder to get her to lovesick then it is to pass her test also can you be a little more specific about the inconsistencies I'm not seeing them

Edit i switched like and friendly i realised i had them backwards. as for the basketball tachie i'm not sure what to do with those maybe i will drop them because they are a lot of work the shirt alone took me nearly 3 hours of resizing recoloring and positioning

I do not know how long i will have net but here is maeda again and all constructive criticisms are welcome but I hope there are a lot fewer this time