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but a friend of mine is already teasing me about it and had a lot of criticisms about her too so i'm thinking of doing a total rewrite of her lines

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

if you accidentally named your character after a porn star would you change her name?

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

I fixed the going back to neutral thing just now so itll be fixed in the finished beta product which will be the next release expect it in a few months

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

i just woke up and saw the preview of the acadamy girls i can't wait i copied and pasted the edited junko into the story

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

merry christmas http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/22300/locker/Yoko_Tanaka.rar again all critisms concerns are welcome

EDIT: sorry i didnt play test it ive been up all night writing the last 5 or so clean mode stories

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Taken care of thank you again i owe you one

@marrend I just noticed that I have been using the version of ruris name that is in the charecter list on the technical page ID 11 = Monotami Ruri {Marrend, "Uchioniko"} which is slightly off sorry i will fix that

EDIT: the next test of yoko might be a little late i just lost 3 out of 5 stories i had planned and i do not remember anything about them lol

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

thank you so much it's perfect

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

ok then i want to have another test release by tomarrow a christmas present from me to you but i will have to temporairly remove a story i'm waiting on a stamp of approval on it

is the main site down?

Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)

Edit how is this then


BRANCH B
PLACE = Classroom B
ID = 26
SHOW LEFT
He taught me the rules.
ID = Teacher
<player> your test is on the desk please take it and no cheating. Yoko The chess board and clocks are already setup. I will be there shortly.
ID = Teacher
Masako, why are you here?
ID = 10
I wish to ask Tanaka a few questions, if I may.
ID = Teacher
I suppose that's all right.
ID = 10
Thank you. Why do you let her play chess when she is supposed to be in trouble?
ID = Teacher
I'm forcing her, not allowing. This is her punishment. She finds it boring and under-stimulating.
ID = 10
I see.
ID = Teacher
Ms Tanaka please try and remember to keep any noise down. I do have other students here after all.
ID = 26
Don't worry we will.
ID = 10
Do you mind if I ask you questions about this... lunchbox incident?
ID = 26
Do you mind if I don't answer?
ID = 10
Forgive me. I had thought that giving you this opportunity to explain your actions would prove more stimulating than merely sitting idly.
ID = 26
If the teacher doesen't mind there is a chessboard ready. Why don't we make a game of it? You may ask your question while it's your turn. I answer before I can make my turn. To make it more interesting, we make the turns timed. Whoever goes over the time limit automatically looses.
ID = 10
UNFRIENDLY
That is all this is to you, is it not? A game?
ID = Teacher
I don't mind. I'm tired of losing anyway.
ID = 26
No but I have a hard time dealing with boredom, and simply answering questions would be boring.
I'll go first if you don't mind.
ID = 10
A lot of things are puzzling me about this incident. Why didn't you go to the teachers first?
ID = 26
I gave Ruri all the evidence we had gathered and told her to take them to the teachers but they all refused to even look at it. So I had her take it to Izumi and Mayu who were still being detained by the teachers for Mayu's outburst.
ID = 10
I see. Quite the gambit you've set up check in three moves. In any event, how was it that the clothing of the male students involved was changed? I understand that you were not near them, so it is a rather odd point about this whole affair.
ID = 26
That was easy a few weeks ago I invented a machine that would change my clothes but I didn't want to test it out on my self so I used them as guinea pigs.
ID = 10
Interesting. Witnesses overheard you saying quote "The underwear was Ruri's idea." Would there by any truth to that?
ID = 26
Yes I was going to load pink thongs then I was going to tattoo their butts with please spank me. She talked me out of it. The gambit was my own variation of Englund's gambit, and I will have you in checkmate in two moves.
ID = 10
Why didn't Shirazu try to calm you down? Check.
ID = 26
She was busy keeping Mayu calm. Check
ID = 10
Was Nemoto involved in anyway with the punishment you gave the male students in question?
ID = 26
No as far as I know she still hasn't touched them Izumi and Ruri are trying to keep her distracted, but I feel it won't last long. Checkmate.
ID = 10
Why didn't Monotami try to keep you calm?
ID = 26
That's simple I was calm all she could do was try to negate as much damage as possible which she did.
ID = 10
You're saying you weren't upset that you were being framed?
ID = 26
No the teachers hate me anyway, and the only person hurt was someone I had never met. Check
ID = 10
Exactly how much damage was Monotami able to negate?
ID = 26
Besides the tattoos? A lot, I was going to drill holes into the bats and pay students to spank them. Check
ID = 10
Mate in three. Why did you turn yourself in?
ID = 26
I had left too much evidence, my machines, my bats, witnesses, and last but not least motive. Check.
ID = 10
Why did you involve Monotami why not send her away.
ID = 26
Maybe I wanted someone I felt I could frame or maybe her child like personality made it hard for me to leave her alone. I don't really know myself. Check
ID = 10
Checkmate. You're skills are quite proficient.
ID = 26
Thanks and back at you.
ID = 0
(They played 11 more games the final score was Yoko five, Masako five, and three stalemates.)

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I made all those changes and more to make the changes fit

STORY 14
CONDITION = 6 DONE
PLACE = Courtyard
ID = 26
SHOW CENTER
ID = 0
Do you only do one experiment a day?
ID = 26
Yes it's easier to collect, process, and file the data I get from my experiments that way.
ID = 11
SHOW LEFT
UNFRIENDLY
Are you Yoko by any chance?
ID = 26
That I am. What can I do for a sweetie like you?
ID = 11
One of my friends was viciously attacked!
ID = 26
I'm sorry to hear, that but I don't see what that has to do with me.
ID = 0
Yoko that's pretty harsh of you. Couldn't you be nicer about it?
ID = 11
The teachers' are saying you did it, but my friend Shoko says you wouldn't do that.
ID = 26
Shoko was attacked?!
ID = 11
Not Shoko, Mayu.
ID = 26
Who's Mayu?
ID = 0
Calm down and tell me everything starting from just before this attack till now.
ID = 11
All four of us were getting ready to eat lunch when I noticed a really stinky smell coming from Mayu's lunch.
ID = 26
Who are all four of you?
ID = 11
Mayu, Izumi, Shoko and me. When Mayu opened her lunchbox it was full of rotten food from the garbage.
ID = 0
How can you tell it was from the garbage someone may have put it in the sun?
ID = 11
It had old banana peels, chewed gum, a half eaten moldy sandwich, and a piece of pizza with a footprint in there.
ID = 26
Yep sounds like garbage to me. Why do the teachers think I did it?
ID = 11
They say that you were spotted laughing and talking about experimenting in that area. Plus they say you never leave enough evidence to prove it's you.
ID = 26
Shoko's right please help me prove my innocence so that neither of you get hurt in the fallout.
ID = 11
Really?! I believe you but Mayu won't be so easily convinced, she's ready to go on a rampage.
ID = 26
Then we have to prove my innocence quickly. I have no reason to experiment on someone I have never met or even heard of before most of my experiments are on how people handle things outside their realm of normal perception. If I don't know how they would react under normal situations any data gathered would be useless to me.
ID = 11
What did you mean by fallout?
ID = 26
I like Shoko, if she defends me and the teachers convince Mayu that I am responsible it may cause Shoko to get hurt. If that were to happen
MAY HEAVEN HELP THE PERSON WHO CAUSED IT BECAUSE I WOULD BRING DOWN THE FULL WEIGHT OF MY INTELLECT UPON THEIR LIFELESS BODIES.
ID = 0
(Wow everyone cleared out in a hurry. Not that I can blame them, that last part scared even me.)
Ruri trust me when I say this it's better to settle this before that happens.
ID = 11
The teachers were saying that you have done some pretty mean things in the name of your experiments.
ID = 0
Yoko may do mean things to some people, but putting garbage in a lunch box isn't her style, that seems like revenge or bullying.
ID = 26
Thanks for the vote of confidence honey remind me to show you how mean I can get later.
ID = 0
That's my cue to go someplace safe for now.


STORY 15
CONDITION = 14 DONE
PLACE = Courtyard
PRIORITY = HIGH
ID = Girl A
Did you see those screaming boys?
ID = Girl B
The ones that were hanging upside down in girl uniforms?
ID = Girl A
Yeah, what was with the "spank me please" underwear?
ID = 0
(I have a really, really bad feeling that I know who's behind this.)
ID = Girl A
I have no idea but the cricket bats were a nice touch.
ID = 0
Excuse me but can you tell me if a girl with red and black hair was involved?
ID = Girl B
I didn't see any girls with red or black hair sorry.
ID = 0
I meant one girl with red hair on one side and black on the other.
ID = Girl A
You mean you think Yoko was involved?
ID = 0
So you didn't see her?
ID = Girl B
No sorry.
ID = 12
NEUTRAL
SHOW LEFT
ID = 14
SHOW CENTER
LIKE
I'm glad the teachers held us for questioning. That is the funniest thing I have ever seen.
ID = 12
DISLIKE
You haven't seen anything yet. I won't let them off so easily, because of them I had to buy my lunch.
ID = 26
SHOW RIGHT
Mayu are we ok now?
ID = 12
NEUTRAL
I guess so.
ID = 14
NEUTRAL
Yeah with the evidence Ruri gave us it was clear you didn't have anything to do with what they did.
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
Their punishment has just started. You could have let me handle it.
ID = 14
Were you really that upset that they tried to frame you?
ID = 26
No not really I just wanted to judge their reactions to my latest inventions, besides the underwear was Ruri idea.
ID = 0
Then I would hate to see what you would have done if they would have hurt Shoko.
ID = 26
THERE ISN'T A PLACE FAR ENOUGH FOR THEM TO HAVE RUN IF THEY WOULD HAVE DONE THAT!!!
ID = 12
You think there would be anything <b>left</b> after I'm through with 'em?
ID = 26
That would depend on how effective Ruri and Izumi are.
ID = 14
Ruri would be happy if you were to join us for a snack after school.
ID = 26
No thank you. I just want you to know that as long as both of you are friends with Shoko, I won't experiment on you without prior consent, and all available knowledge prior to said experiment.
ID = 14
You know, Yoko, the reason you were implicated in the first place is <b>because</b> of your experiments! You might already know this, but, it's something to think about for next time.
ID = 26
I don't mind being implicated. I just don't want my friend to get hurt.
ID = 0
(Did she say friend singular on purpose?)
ID = 26
I have to go now bye to you two, and a special good bye to my honey. MUAH!
ERASE RIGHT
ID = 12
NEUTRAL
She's weird.
ID = 14
NEUTRAL
Well at least everything is settled now.


STORY 16
CONDITION = 15 DONE
PLACE = Front B
ID = 26
SHOW CENTER
Are you trying to ditch out on your makeup test honey? MUAH
ID = 0
Is that today?
ID = 26
Yep the teacher sent me to get you.
ID = 0
Why did my teacher send you?
JUMP A


BRANCH A
PLACE = HALL A
ID = 26
He's the supervising teacher for my detention.
ID = 0
They finally got enough evidence on you huh?
ID = 26
No I turned myself in for what I did to those boys.
ID = 0
I see.
ID = 26
After you finish the test, honey, want to play chess? I'm sure the teacher wouldn't mind if you replaced him.
ID = 0
The detention teacher allows you to play chess?
JUMP B


BRANCH B
PLACE = Classroom B
ID = 26
SHOW LEFT
He taught me the rules.
ID = Teacher
<player> your test is on the desk please take it and no cheating. Yoko The chess board and clocks are already setup. I will be there shortly.
ID = Teacher
Masako, why are you here?
ID = 10
I wish to ask Tanaka a few questions, if I may.
ID = Teacher
I suppose that's all right.
ID = 10
Thank you. Why do you let her play chess when she is supposed to be in trouble?
ID = Teacher
I'm forcing her, not allowing. This is her punishment. She finds it boring and unstimulating.
ID = 10
I see.
ID = Teacher
Ms Tanaka please try and remember to keep any noise down. I do have other students here after all.
ID = 26
Don't worry we will.
ID = 10
Do you mind if I ask you questions about this... lunchbox incident?
ID = 26
Do you mind if I don't answer?
ID = 10
Forgive me. I had thought that giving you this opportunity to explain your actions would prove more stimulating than merely sitting idly.
ID = 26
Hrmm... Well, there's a chessboard. Why don't we make a game of it? You may ask your question while it's your turn. I answer before I can make my turn. To make it more interesting, we make the turns timed. Whoever goes over the time limit automatically looses.
ID = 10
UNFRIENDLY
That is all this is to you, is it not? A game?
ID = 26
No but I have a hard time dealing with boredom, and simply answering questions would be boring.
I'll go first if you don't mind.
ID = 10
A lot of things are puzzling me about this incident. Why didn't you go to the teachers first?
ID = 26
I gave Ruri all the evidence we had gathered and told her to take them to the teachers but they all refused to even look at it. So I had her take it to Izumi and Mayu who were still being detained by the teachers for Mayu's outburst.
ID = 10
I see nice gambit check in three moves. How did you change the boys' clothes without being anywhere near them?
ID = 26
That was easy a few weeks ago I invented a machine that would change my clothes but I didn't want to test it out on my self so I used them as guinea pigs.
ID = 10
Interesting. Witnesses overheard you saying Ruri came up with the underwear idea is that true?
ID = 26
Yes I was going to load pink thongs then I was going to tattoo their butts with please spank me. She talked me out of it. Mate in two.
ID = 10
Why didn't Izumi try to calm you down? Check.
ID = 26
She was busy keeping Mayu calm. Check
ID = 10
Was Mayu involved in anyway with the punishment you gave the boys?
ID = 26
No as far as I know she still hasn't touched them izumi and ruri are trying to keep her distracted, but I feel it won't last long. Checkmate.
ID = 10
Why didn't Ruri try to keep you calm?
ID = 26
That's simple I was calm all she could do was try to negate as much damage as possible which she did.
ID = 10
You're saying you weren't upset that you were being framed?
ID = 26
No the teachers hate me anyway, and the only person hurt was someone I had never met. Check
ID = 10
How much damage was Ruri able to negate?
ID = 26
Besides the tattoos? A lot, I was going to drill holes into the bats and pay students to spank them. Check
ID = 10
Mate in three. Why did you turn yourself in?
ID = 26
I had left too much evidence, my machines, my bats, witnesses, and last but not least motive. Check.
ID = 10
Why did you involve Ruri why not send her away.
ID = 26
Maybe I wanted someone I felt I could frame or maybe her child like personality made it hard for me to say no. I don't really know myself. Check
ID = 10
Checkmate. You're not too bad at this.
ID = 26
Thanks
ID = 0
(They played 11 more games the final score was Yoko five, Masako five, and three stalemates.)