Ends 04/01/2013 03:59 AM

Judges
halibabica
Deckiller
nin8halos
DarklordKeinor
Isrieri

RMN's Mario series takes its next big step!

WHAT IS THIS?

Super RMN World is a community collaborative game where everyone uses the Super Mario Bros. X engine to create Mario levels! The stages are submitted by members of RMN and compiled at the end of the event. This is the 4th installment of the series and hopes to be the most solid and enjoyable one yet.

Everyone is free to join whether you've used SMBX before or not. You need SMBX to participate. If you don't have it, you'll need to download it.

You may also want to pick up the graphics pack by Red Yoshi and supermarioman. It has many nice resprites for your stages.

STORY

As a peace offering for his past misdoings, Eli has constructed an art gallery and presented it to Mario and his friends. The paintings inside shimmer mysteriously; they're almost too real! Eli's waiting at the end to hear what his guests have to say, but can he really be trusted?

SUBMISSION RULES

  • Levels must be made in SMBX v1.3
  • Levels must be made FOR THIS PROJECT! No pre-made levels will be accepted!
  • Levels must end in ONE SMB3 STAR. Furthermore, this star must be placed in the square frame with the black jagged backdrop like in SMB3. The only exceptions to this rule are mini-boss stages, where the star may appear in the room after the fight.
  • Levels must contain FIVE DRAGON COINS. These are the SMW coins with the Yoshi emblem. These will be resprited into RMN Coins in the full game. Thematic resprites are allowed so long as they remain recognizable.
  • Levels must have a DIFFICULTY RATING from 1-8. This determines what world it will go too. It may be adjusted depending on many factors.
  • Levels must be submitted with the format "YourUserName_DifficultyRating_LevelName"
  • This naming rule applies to the compressed file you submit to the event, not the actual .lvl file. If you use any custom graphics or music, put the files in a folder with the EXACT SAME NAME as the .lvl file. You can make mp3's work in SMBX by specifying the file path in the Custom space (ex: Level Name/Name of Song.mp3). DO NOT PUT THE LEVEL FILE IN THIS FOLDER. Create a compressed file with everything included.

    You may submit up to EIGHT LEVELS, and you can't submit more than one level to the same world. Worlds have no specific themes. Levels may be denied for quality reasons. If your level is denied, you can fix it up and resubmit it. If you want to submit more than eight, you'll have to withdraw another first.

TESTING AND FEEDBACK

Super RMN World is raising its standards considerably. The five judges, halibabica, Deckiller, nin8halos, Isrieri, and DarklordKeinor will be critiquing the levels. Heed their advice, as they won't let anything sub-par through! You can adjust your levels as many times as needed, but don't expect to get in without a well-designed stage! A level will only be admitted after three judges approve it.

All feedback will be included in the Super RMN World Wiki. Click your username on the main page to find your level list. Click the level names to see the judges' feedback. Click the 'Talk' icon to post questions or comments. When at least three judges list 'Approved', the level's ready to go.

Although the judges will be testing each level thoroughly, participants are strongly encouraged to do the same. Every bit of criticism helps. Below is some advice to consider while designing your levels, among other criteria they must meet.

For good examples of the quality we're looking for, check out Super RMN All-Stars, Super Talking Time Bros 1+2 and Mario vs. The Moon Base.

GENERAL ADVICE

  1. Graphical Consistency
  2. SMBX uses graphics from many different games. Just because you have them at your disposal doesn't mean you should use them. Pick a theme for your level and use graphics/enemies that fit together visually.

  3. Pacing
  4. Your levels should have a rhythm to them. Challenging sections should be offset with easier parts. Power-ups should be spaced well enough apart, but not so far that the player gets desperate. Try not to throw in too much (or little) of anything.

  5. Aesthetics
  6. Use your tile sets properly and fill background space adequately. Don't leave it too empty, but don't clutter it up too much, either.

  7. Completable
  8. This means it shouldn't contain any no-win situations. The player mustn't become hopelessly trapped. Similarly, they shouldn't be able to die after collecting the star. Check to make sure they can't fall off any cliffs after getting it.

  9. Lengthy
  10. Don't make your level too short OR too long. Consider where to put your checkpoint. It shouldn't take too long to reach it, nor to reach the end from the checkpoint. Keep in mind what they player has to do in each stretch of level.

  11. Purposeful
  12. Give your level a reason to exist. Try not to make it bland or forgettable.

LEVEL CRITERIA

  1. Checkpoints
  2. Every level should have one. If it can't for specific reasons (auto-scrolling, switch block shenanigans, etc.), then don't make the stage too long. SMBX can only support one checkpoint per level, so multiples don't work. Like Dragon Coins, you may resprite it so long as it's still recognizable.

  3. Power-Ups
  4. Your stage should have a good balance of items that are helpful to the player. ? Blocks should never contain lone Mushrooms; give the player Fire Flowers or Leaves. Exceptional items like the Tanooki and Hammer Suits should not be easily obtained.

    Use discretion with where you place items. One at the start and one after the checkpoint would be the least you could do. Also, pick items that the player can put to good use. A Fire Flower in an area with monsters immune to fire does the player no good. Incidentally, SMB2 enemies and Nipper plants will be changed to be vulnerable to fireballs for this project.

  5. Banned Objects
    • SMB2 Crystal Ball, SMB3 Roulette, SMB3 ? Ball, SMW Keyhole, SMW Exit Gate
    • All banned because they end the level. All levels must end with an SMB3 Star.

    • SMW Bowser Statue
    • Banned due to its glitchy hit box. You can still be hit by its fireballs while standing on top of it. Use the SMB3 Bowser Statue instead!

    • SMW Star
    • These were used as Secret Stars in Super RMN Bros. 3, but they're more trouble than they're worth. You may not use them.

  6. Bosses
  7. Boss stages will be handled by the judges. You may still use boss NPCs in your stages, but only as mini-bosses. The fights must be kept simple and easier, so don't go overboard.

  8. Different Characters
  9. Mario, Luigi, Toad, Peach, and Link will be available to play as from the start, and all levels must be completable with all characters. You can't make a level where the player is forced to be a specific character. However, you can include a character block at the start if you want to recommend someone in particular. Let the player decide if they want to be that character or not, and don't include sections only they can get through (such as a pit only Peach could hover across).

  10. Player 2 Start
  11. SMBX has the option to play with a friend, so you need to include P1 and P2's start positions. Make sure your level can be completed by two players. Avoid situations where one player can get through while the other is stuck. The following are a few things you can do to make your level P2 safe:

    • Don't block the level's main path with character blocks. All characters need to be able to get through, even in 1P mode.
    • Use generators for things like falling platforms, P-Switches, or in any instance where the player needs an NPC to advance.
    • Place exit warps carefully. If P2 warps into a spot P1 already occupies, collision detection bumps them apart, and possibly into nearby hazards. Warp exits should be safe anyway, so design carefully.

  12. Misc. Stuff
    • Tutorials
    • A tutorial level will be provided that explains the mechanics of SMBX, covering both the basics and advanced stuff.

    • Water
    • All water must be SWIMMABLE. By contrast, waterfalls must NOT be swimmable. Don't fill your pits with water if they're supposed to be bottomless.

    • Pipes, Doors, and Carry Items
    • All entrances in SMBX are set to disallow the player from carrying an item with them. Make sure you set them to allow carrying NPCs.

    • One-Tile Passages
    • Avoid making paths that are only one tile high. If Mario stands up in one, he zips through the wall in the opposite direction he's facing. This can break the game in some places. Just don't do it.

    • Ceilings
    • If you're making a water level or Mario is able to fly, you may want to block the area off the top of the screen so the player can't soar over everything. See this screen sides tutorial for more info.

PROJECT TIMELINE

Signups begin NOW, and EVERYONE is free to join! The project will run for one month (all of March), and levels may be submitted for testing during this time. When the month is up, no more levels will be accepted. For one week after, existing levels may still be updated based on feedback. Beyond that, no more revisions will be allowed and the full game will be produced. It may take a while, but the end result will be worth it. Now, get cracking! Let's make this the best community Mario game yet!

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Participants Entries
Blitzen
kentona
halibabica
GreatRedSpirit
Davenport
Jparker1984
Desmo360
Redd
Solitayre
Ratty524
Decky
outcry312
Gigabowser
nin8halos
pyrodoom
Seiromem
jackalotrun
DarklordKeinor
masterofmayhem
apa649
Carbz300
Blobofgoo
Tomstar
Isrieri
camelliakitty
GloopMaster
lonestarluigi
Thiago76590
andreea7214

Posts

Ratty524
The 524 is for 524 Stone Crabs
12986
Updated Opposite Day. Removed the invisible ceiling from the level and fixed a design flaw where you could die in the bonus room.
Seiromem
I would have more makerscore If I did things.
6375
Half way done with my World 8 level, had to restart the first time due to Editor issues.
Lost a lot of inspiration @.@ I'll get it done some time.
author=DarklordKeinor
I'm sorry for not reviewing your level. This has been a crazy week and my focus keeps shifting.

I've updated your feedback for Snow Problem on the wiki. To save you the rush to read about it, just know I approved it.

Anyway, I'll post a level review here for "Hunted Forest"

Pros:
A nicely done ascend/descend level
Everything is placed well
Good boss at the end

Cons:
Could use another secret or two
Rename the level to "Haunted Forest"


thanks for reviewing it :) ill add a few secrets
Isrieri
"My father told me this would happen."
6155
In the process of revising my own levels. Most of the complaints were that they were very barren and flat-looking. But prettying up levels is my weakest point. :(

Gonna pull Cave of Monsters since it doesn't fit the level design we're working toward.
Decky
I'm a dog pirate
19645
I'll try to continue reviewing/making levels in a couple days.
in my level Haunted Forest there is a couple of secrets one at the start and one at the end can you find them?
Since the wiki hasn't been updated yet, I'll write your level review here, Seiromem.

Seiromem's The Hop
Excellent level! I must say, your improvement as a level designer is beginning to shine through. The length of this could be a little shorter for a world 1 level, but I think it works just fine.

My only gripe is that the propeller block in the checkpoint area can get you killed. Try going to the top of the pipe on the upper right side of the screen to see what I'm talking about.

Fix that and I'll approve this level.
Last question: How do I make a part of the level sink when Mario stands on it?
Seiromem
I would have more makerscore If I did things.
6375
author=Blitzen
Last question: How do I make a part of the level sink when Mario stands on it?

You're going to have to go into more detail of what you want.... I don't exactly know what you're asking.
author=Blitzen
Last question: How do I make a part of the level sink when Mario stands on it?

There's no way to trigger an event by standing on something.
Seiromem
I would have more makerscore If I did things.
6375
author=nin8halos
author=Blitzen
Last question: How do I make a part of the level sink when Mario stands on it?
There's no way to trigger an event by standing on something.


Except to put a coin on that platform, make you HAVE to grab the coin to stay on that platform (Like what Davenport did in that one castle in the CMS, can't remember which...)
Hey. Hey. Halibabica. You should review my levels. Jes' sayin'.
Seiromem
I would have more makerscore If I did things.
6375
Added update to Darklordkenoir's nitpick.
Also added my infamous world 8 level!
It'll be too hard in it's current state!
There is no questioning THAT.
So tell me what to tone down, and I'll do so.
Also, I lost creativity and stuffed in a mini-boss.
Might be too elaborate but.....

I also forgot an SMB3 End zone! So don't tell me to add it, I'll do it....
halibabica
RMN's Official Reviewmonger
16948
from GloopMaster
Hey. Hey. Halibabica. You should review my levels. Jes' sayin'.

I just finished my comic stuff tonight, so I'll get into reviewing levels first thing tomorrow!

from seiromem
I lost creativity and stuffed in a mini-boss.

I also forgot an SMB3 End zone! So don't tell me to add it, I'll do it....

If it ends in a mini-boss, you can have the star appear in the arena. It's the only exception to the rule.
Alright Seiromem, I played your newest level.

Seiromem's Bubblar Temple
For the most part, this level is pretty reasonable. Enemy distribution, while harsh at times due to the spawning, is still fair. However, there are a few problems I have with this level.
Problem 1: This is a world eight level and you are providing the player a sign that tells the player what to do to progress. At this point in the game, such a thing is counter-intuitive.
Problem 2: The wrap around section where the player has to platform off of the bubble enemies is bullshit. Consider an alternative.
Problem 3: The boss (bosses) is overkill. Two spiked Boom-booms with enemies everywhere! I'm going to say that this is going overboard. Only have one Boom-boom in the room and cut out the additional enemies.

Solve these problems and I'll give your level another look.
Ratty524
The 524 is for 524 Stone Crabs
12986
I just got done replaying Super RMN Bros 1. I have to say many of us have come a long way since.
halibabica
RMN's Official Reviewmonger
16948
Posted feedback for apa649, Blobofgoo, and DarklordKeinor. Takin' a break before I look at Davenport and the rest. Yes, I am playing it alphabetically by author. How original!

I don't think I approved anything yet. ._.
Seiromem
I would have more makerscore If I did things.
6375
I'll have to wait a bit then.
halibabica
RMN's Official Reviewmonger
16948
Davenport, you drain me like a leech. Have some feedback. Your levels have lots of potential, but some of them need quite a bit of work.
You know what? I was going to make a level based on Guernica, but it's really not working out. Cubism is hard to do in SMBX.