WHAT DO YOU THINK OF MY POEM

This is a poem from mine. I hope you like it

"A ruined system,
Drowned in corruption,
Hidden in darkness,
To make them not feel the opression.

News candidates to power,
All stupid, they want to be as god,
Because they want you to be his lover,
But they forget to love.

Democratic debates that don,t have speak turn,
They act like Childs, in a ridicule way
Because they want to open the urns,
And make you vote like preachers in a church in may.

People votes when they look at the face,
"he is handsome", "he looks kind",
But a pretty face can hide an evil mind,
And maybe the nasty-face is the Best candidate".



There are some parts that are weird. That is because I'm Spanish and the poem in spanish rhymed in a better way. Hope you like it! Also this is more based on the spanish goberment.