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LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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author=Brady
@Mr.Detective:
He wishes he had Locke-Actor's eight second intro!
THAT'S WHAT YOU THINK BUB

(Yeah, I have the FF6 font on my computer. Wanna fight about it?)

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Solid. Not too empty, everyone looks busy.
I never understood the indoor shadow, though. What light source could possibly make that shadow?
Also, the bottom wall doesn't make much sense. The wall on the bottom is below the side walls. If you want the look of a cutout cardboard box, remove the bottom wall and put sheer black there. If not, you could extend the side wall down and wrap it all the way around to the doors.
Otherwise, it makes the entrance look like a small bridge and the entire building is raised.
I never understood the indoor shadow, though. What light source could possibly make that shadow?
Also, the bottom wall doesn't make much sense. The wall on the bottom is below the side walls. If you want the look of a cutout cardboard box, remove the bottom wall and put sheer black there. If not, you could extend the side wall down and wrap it all the way around to the doors.
Otherwise, it makes the entrance look like a small bridge and the entire building is raised.
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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Amelia's HP is 6/11 but the bar is like 90% full
I thought each HP bar went with the name below it until I cross-referenced it with the giant character list and realized that the same person was probably at 6 HP in both places. You should really move the HP up and make the gaps be between each of the four characters instead of between the name and the hp, and/or put some sort of divider between the characters like a horizontal line or give each one their own window border
That's a lot of fucking characters
I thought each HP bar went with the name below it until I cross-referenced it with the giant character list and realized that the same person was probably at 6 HP in both places. You should really move the HP up and make the gaps be between each of the four characters instead of between the name and the hp, and/or put some sort of divider between the characters like a horizontal line or give each one their own window border
That's a lot of fucking characters
oh I totally didn't even notice
(the bar was being drawn so that it ran of the side of the window)
They manage their own equipment, pick their own skills, and carry their own inventory of items. They act on their own in battle--after the player has acted (so you can guide them by, say, lowering a foe's defense), but before enemies.
Earning the loyalty of at least a few of your allies is the key to success.
(the bar was being drawn so that it ran of the side of the window)
author=LockeZ
That's a lot of fucking characters.
They manage their own equipment, pick their own skills, and carry their own inventory of items. They act on their own in battle--after the player has acted (so you can guide them by, say, lowering a foe's defense), but before enemies.
Earning the loyalty of at least a few of your allies is the key to success.
Looks interesting, Louis! I'm not quite sold on the font though, it looks nicer the more I look at it, but at first it was off-putting. And before it kills me, in the first screenshot you spelt profession "proffesion".
Quite like the font myself; nice and soft, since there looks like there'll be a lot of reading involved.
Actually, it might be the window. I definitely feel the default-looking window isn't doing you any favours, and the lines in the background make the text look funny when you glance over it, I think.
I totally wanna post a screeny of my Pantomime's new slightly-animated Kefka sprite, but I feel like posting screenies of the final act will ruin the spectacle somewhat D:

Cough. No, it's not a hentai game. But close call. Yes it's gonna be all nips in the REAL game. And I think this will be the only nudity scene, the sprite is fully nude too, so I don't know if it'll be final. 18 and up. You kids, go to bed! I SAID GO TO BED!

I guess she had abreast of the situation.
The game will be split in parts. I don't want to upload anything over 50 MB. :p But DOANE's first intro will be a little over, might change that though.
My internet will be slow though if I uploaded too much MB.
Those white pixels make. Me. So. HOT.
Aside from that, the mapping is quite bare (aha, perhaps intentionally!). You should perhaps throw in some differing floor tiles, with darker shades of dirt or maybe some rocks here or there.
Oh and it's a bit peculiar how her faceset appears in the text box for the first image, but then when she gets nekkid she goes all huge and visible and whatnot. I know it's to demonstrate that she is actually naked, but it's a bit jarring how inconsistent it is.
Aside from that, the mapping is quite bare (aha, perhaps intentionally!). You should perhaps throw in some differing floor tiles, with darker shades of dirt or maybe some rocks here or there.
Oh and it's a bit peculiar how her faceset appears in the text box for the first image, but then when she gets nekkid she goes all huge and visible and whatnot. I know it's to demonstrate that she is actually naked, but it's a bit jarring how inconsistent it is.
I'm sure any normal person would get comfortable and nekkid and take a bath next to a pile of human bones.
What I'm trying to say here is that it's not a good map map. Not that anyone who would bother with it would be looking at the map anyway.
What I'm trying to say here is that it's not a good map map. Not that anyone who would bother with it would be looking at the map anyway.
Has it occurred to you that you could just... show the neck/shoulders? It conveys the literal same thing, and relies on the player's imagination rather than... that.
Well considering he said it was the only nudity scene in his entire multi-part game (which wasn't even named, that I saw) and that also happens to be the single screeny he posted...
Idk. Doesn't seem like the type of guy who goes for subtle imagery.
Just me?
Idk. Doesn't seem like the type of guy who goes for subtle imagery.
Just me?
LockeZ
I'd really like to get rid of LockeZ. His play style is way too unpredictable. He's always like this too. If he ran a country, he'd just kill and imprison people at random until crime stopped.
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His mind is full of fuck
























