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The picket fence looks odd. Also, there should be a comma after "Miguel." I get what you're trying to say with the verb "speaks," but I don't think it works as-is.
Skylark
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I agree with Craze about the picket fence. However, the verb "speaks" fits in fine I think.
Everguard
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I love the mapping, apart from the fence. However, I think you can change the verb. Maybe if you said "Your presence tells us" or you could keep speaks, but change what comes after it to say "Your presence here speaks volumes. You must have received the pastor's approvel". Just offering my help :) feel free to disregard
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I love the mapping, apart from the fence. However, I think you can change the verb. Maybe if you said "Your presence tells us" or you could keep speaks, but change what comes after it to say "Your presence here speaks volumes. You must have received the pastor's approvel". Just offering my help :) feel free to disregard
Thanks I might actually do that. The game has some really bad grammar issues I know, I'm actually thinking about having somebody else go through the game and correct it because I'm so bad at it haha.
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The picket fence looks odd. Also, there should be a comma after "Miguel." I get what you're trying to say with the verb "speaks," but I don't think it works as-is.
You don't light the fence, do you think I should just make that area a wall? Cause I wanted to create a balcony, if I remove the fence it will look odd with the sky hanging there.
Ravenite1
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post=208571post=208497You don't like the fence, do you think I should just make that area a wall? You see I wanted to create a balcony, if I remove the fence it will look odd with the sky just hanging there. I wish there was kind of balcony in a tileset I could use.
The picket fence looks odd. Also, there should be a comma after "Miguel." I get what you're trying to say with the verb "speaks," but I don't think it works as-is.
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