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author=Marrend
Is it just me, or do those glasses look too small on her?

*Edit: That's really the only thing that jumps out at me. Even then, I'm mostly sure Tsubasa uses a very similar combination of eyes/glasses. Which makes this observation seem, I dunno. Unimportant?


Yes, yes, and no. The problem is that the medium-build-girl file only has the one model of eyeglasses in that layer.
author=dewelar
author=Marrend
Is it just me, or do those glasses look too small on her?

*Edit: That's really the only thing that jumps out at me. Even then, I'm mostly sure Tsubasa uses a very similar combination of eyes/glasses. Which makes this observation seem, I dunno. Unimportant?
Yes, yes, and no. The problem is that the medium-build-girl file only has the one model of eyeglasses in that layer.


Yeah. I thought the glasses looked a little weird too, but my drawing skills with a mouse (Or even an actual pencil) are kind of sort of, completely crap, so I don't really have a way of fixing that. Also, I had completely forgotten about Tsubasa when I was choosing those eyes, but to me they are the only ones that really look good with the glasses.


Little side note. I just finished recoloring the hair for koneko's tachie, Any thoughts?
Marrend
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author=LorSquirrel
Also, I had completely forgotten about Tsubasa when I was choosing those eyes, but to me they are the only ones that really look good with the glasses.


What about Izumi? This is merely my opinion, but that style of eyes seem to work best with glasses.

author=LorSquirrel
Little side note. I just finished recoloring the hair for koneko's tachie. Any thoughts?


Are you sure you finished recoloring that hair? The visible artifacts in the form of black spots suggest otherwise.
author=Marrend
author=LorSquirrel
Also, I had completely forgotten about Tsubasa when I was choosing those eyes, but to me they are the only ones that really look good with the glasses.
What about Izumi? This is merely my opinion, but that style of eyes seem to work best with glasses.

author=LorSquirrel
Little side note. I just finished recoloring the hair for koneko's tachie. Any thoughts?


Are you sure you finished recoloring that hair? The visible artifacts in the form of black spots suggest otherwise.


Better?
What do you guys think about the new look for Eminako?

Pic right here!
Marrend
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The pink-ish tint in Eminako's eyes seems kinda weird to me, but otherwise, she's lookin' good! As for Koneko, she seems very, I dunno, posterized?
I hadn't noticed the pink tint until you mentioned it. Kinda weird but nothing major.

As for Koneko. Yeah... I'm not very good at changing hair colors ^_^;
author=LorSquirrel
What do you guys think about the new look for Eminako?

Pic right here!


To second Marrend, I find her exceptionally cute. Well done.
Thanks! I was really trying to make her cute, so I guess I've succeeded.
I finally acquired a closer-to-permanent internet solution, so I will likely be on more frequently. ^.^ ... maybe... probably.... hopefully. Anywho, let me start by saying LORSQUIRREL YOU STOLE SARAKO'S SLEEPING TREE!! T^T lol Nah, it's fine, I found other ones in the Grounds and Side areas for her to sleep under so I'm only just kidding around. Also, in regards to the Kurokawa Twins; how much drama is too much drama for this game? Cause it will come to feature a triangle (usually) and some family-expectations/broken-sibling-relationship situations. ^.^;

Side note: I should really finish playing all the "Not-Miki" characters routes. =.=;
Marrend
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For some reason, I'm thinking Koneko's hair is supposed to be brown. Kinda like Shoko's hair color. If I recall what I did with Shoko, I took the hair layers that I used, and COLORIZed them to (106, 47, 0), then did a NORMALIZE.

Even if I'm dead wrong, I hope this helps you, LorSquirrel.
author=Marrend
Even if I'm dead wrong, I hope this helps you, LorSquirrel.


Sorry to say that you were indeed wrong. But it did give me the idea to go back, re-create the Koneko tachie, and mess with the colorize tool until I got it right. This in turn yielded much more favorable results!

Boom baby!
... Since I ended up updating their tachie and stuff, I think I'm gonna post another potential character in progress, if that's alright with everyone. ^.^


Their name is Eiko Sekine and they're an energetic prankster.
I feel like my descriptions are really lacking =.=;

On that note I really should start on the Kurokawa twins' respective stories (starting with Sarako), but I would like some answers in regards to does and don'ts for story and the likes before I start. No point in making a misstep when it can easily be prevented.

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author=LorSquirrel
Boom baby!

I agree with your assessment of 'Boom baby!', it is most definitely an improvement. ^.^
author=BDFalcon
... Since I ended up updating their tachie and stuff, I think I'm gonna post another potential character in progress, if that's alright with everyone. ^.^


Their name is Eiko Sekine and they're an energetic prankster.
I feel like my descriptions are really lacking =.=;

On that note I really should start on the Kurokawa twins' respective stories (starting with Sarako), but I would like some answers in regards to does and don'ts for story and the likes before I start. No point in making a misstep when it can easily be prevented.


Looks nice! And yeah. slightly lacking in the descriptions, but I can't really complain seeing as I am me >.>...

author=BDFalcon
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author=LorSquirrel
Boom baby!


I agree with your assessment of 'Boom baby!', it is most definitely an improvement. ^.^


Thanks.
author=BDFalcon
Their name is Eiko Sekine and they're an energetic prankster.
I feel like my descriptions are really lacking =.=;


Don't be so hard on yourself... The word "They" says it all;)
I've been working on Eminako and YAK recently, and felt like I would take a some time to make a new tachie for a character.



Or alternatively this one with different eyes.



What do you guys think? Cute? Weird? Good? Bad?
Cute, definitely (looks a bit like a Noriko recolor, so of course I'm partial), but...her eyebrows look off. Yes, I'm essentially blind, but they look...dark greenish?

Oh, damn. She does look like Noriko doesn't she? I must make adjustments!
author=LorSquirrel
Improved?

Hmmm...hair looks nice, and the eyebrows look better (still look a little on the greenish side, but that may be me). Will not comment on the glasses, because I know if you want glasses that's the only choice that material_m gives you but...gah, I wish someone would add something with wire frames, at least...