Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~

author=Ertad
Ifelt danger and retreated sorry about that...(Well honestly Iwant to continue this discussion but Iam going out of bounds so...)
Glad to hear that:) (At least one good thing came from my carzy curisouity-spelling mistake?)

I know right, It's common to feel danger near Dozen :3 I swear that his Kyouki's avatar is looking to a gun-rack... anyone seen dewelar btw?
I needed to settle a bus destination at a event ^^

author=Ertad
Then our girls will meet at some point(Shrine maiden and Magical girl might try to persue your cat ears girl...part of their job)

Iwill be tuned then:)

Now that you've mentioned it... If this whole cat-eared route ever get off the ground, I'll need someone to explain some stuff to the <player>.
At first I was thinking about a supernatural addicted junior high, but having a shire-maiden which is a true specialist is sure a nice thing, hows and whys will depend of further route develop tho. :p

author=Marrend
Um... Masako? She might be a bit tough to write for, though.

I can easily imagine <player> asking Masako's help. But... don't really think that I have vocab enough to write for her. :p
Anyhow, I'll write it down on mine NekoNotes. :3

Also I'd like to turn into fixed the reserves I've made. No need to write it down at tech tab for now, as it may chance with further develop, it's just that now I know that I'll in fact need them.
77 for the Yuriko's little sister, Sakamoto Tsuki. (May change if Yuriko's route tell to.)
78 for the current in develop Cat-girl. (Which is not Alessa {ID 75}, that was a spoiler-safe develop image.)

Now I just have to decide which route I'll develop first, the cat, Yuriko or Alessa.
Alessa's is less likely, because will be a heck of a trouble to set up, too many conditional branches due being about the Yamisaki's sisterhood and stuff... I'd have to make 3 event variations depending of Eliza's Aff. level. :p

author=Kevincalanor
So well... here it is. I hope you guys have some fun and that I can handle the feedback when I get back.

Downloaded it, played it. The story is interesting so far, however it stopped due to a condition error. And by that I meant, you added a condition which didn't allow the event to pick up.

It should be this instead:

Throughout the story, I found tons of grammar errors and spelling errors. I wrote down the ones I saw before the route stopped.


That's all I have for grammar so far. I do want to say some things that I like and dislike about Eliza though.

LIKE:


DISLIKE:


So yeah! That's all I have to say for now.

author=Marrend
The first example should work, though! It's not written the way you have it (Which, granted, is how it would normally be written), but AND should be a viable operator! That sounded a bit awkward.

*Edit: I (we?) will probably want to take a closer look at the story file in regards to grammar corrections. Granted, I didn't get very far, but, yeah. I saw a quite a few.

Weeeeird. So, I was looking in the story file and I found absolutely nothing that wouldn't start up the event. I tried changing the conditions, and it turns out nothing happened. Anyways, I try investing myself a bit more into looking into the story to figure this out.

At the Internet cafe again, this went a kind of diffrent that I were expecting to, expect for the grammar problems. :p
Allright let's try to not panic at all.


Yeah, Marrend is right. the NOT means worse instead of better. Lame, that near the part I was testing when my net leaved me :(

Wolf Reputation: Guess I need a event to explain better the whole wolf stuff, in fact the one which started with it was Eliza herself. The nickname she uses when playing, by extension the at gamecenter, is ShadowWolf7. Someone saw it there and found it fitting in the wrong way. Currently you only have a tip of it if you date Eliza at the game center, she will post a record as "SW7".
No special origin or background around it, it comes from the original Eliza which is half-wolf.

Angry nature: Due being a -online- gamer girl, she heard a awful lot of stuff from other people, (Did you ever played as a girl on a Brazilian server? Believe me you don't want to.) so when she see that whole class 'jumping like kiddies' at her class it instantly drives her mad. There are considerable spoilers around it too.
Maybe she could be a little more rational at the library though.

Yuriko's avatar: I knew I forgot to fix something after the test, and to be honest at the current stage, I didn't even had to Introduce them, as they (Alessa too) don't have affection changes, and by extension don't affect the route. (The affection change at Yuriko intro is redirected to Eliza)
Expect high forecast of Landmines with deadly repercussions when they routes get released tough. "Abort flags" will be released for cautious players.
(A abort flag is basically a "neutral flag" that stops the route. As having a relation at DISLIKE or LOVE can, and will, cause serious trouble.)

Phone: I may have to investigate them better I don't really gave attention to them when made the changes after taking out the dust from 2013.
But, she is supossed to want to hung up the fastest possible.

World Problems: I don't really followed this one, you mean that she starting to talk about stuff to soon, or that she take too long ranting around about her stuff?
There's a fair lot of things to explain around so I may be stockpiling them too much at once :p

This should make up for the explanations for now. I'm glad that you guys managed to have some fun even with at the current stage.

You guys can wait the next release, even if my network don't be beack by there I'll be here again at the Friday, but I highly doubt that I'll be able to check posts until there.

Or replace the conditions to get the next events, although some of the problems quoted above may persist.

FX-6 Nebula is back online, so the Mad scientist is back! (With another huge post) x3 Fx6 is my PC name, don't mind that, I'm just being overhappy.

Now at the FX-6 I can head back to my regular duties, and tracking bugs Live-time or Post-time anyways...

On the whole hurry, I forgot to thank you for the feedback, which came really fast btw, there's a whole lot of things to fix, but with your help I'm sure that I'll manage to pull it off.
Thanks a bundle guys, I'll be counting with you for the further feedback at the next events, the first patch should come soon.

- Height problem on Alessa's tachie and Yuriko avatar's position has been fixed;
- Some of Eliza's lines have been remade to sound a little more rational (Although still not friendly, why she would do that?)
- Typos quoted on the feedback were fixed, A lot of them may still be haunting the next events though. (you guys know better than me how many of them are scaterred around). Plus the awkward one that read abused instead of Ambushed.
- Eliza's default state is now set to Dislike, I found it more fitting to her behavior and first impressions about the player, a "Affection up 60" was added after successfully completing the co-op work to balance. (Bringing her to NEUTRAL if everything went fine)

Edit: Here it is, I've decided to make a fix patch instead of update the download due the Mp3s.

author=Ertad
Sorry Iwas taking my time with playing the route:) She is so cute:)
After reading the comments Iunderstand it wasn't my falt for not getting too far...So instead Icontinued from the text file:)
At first Iwas sure she is just atypical tsundere but instead Ifound out she isn't:)
She actually exist is the conclusion Icame to:)(How long were you working on her? It feels like ages because she is made really carefully)
Sorry from me you will not hear any technical problems since Iam no expert on that side...
But Ican say this:Those who don't play her route(From beginning to end)are missing amazing girl(And Iam not talking about her 'angry self' which is cute by itself)
But more then it when she becomes really 'girly' and actually show cute sides that only when she is in love will she show them:)
And please do release anew version when the conditions are fixed(Iwant to play her route with the music and visual sense since the events you made are just too good to be played in my mind only:)

Thanks a lot ^^
Counting the time on both years it's about four months on the mod, Eliza was created as a shy and supportive girl to a race car story back at March 09", I've been developing her personality for multiple stories and mods since then, now she's act like the one on this mod, and is a genetically modified spec-ops on a post-apocalyptic world. :3
I also made a mod that add Eliza as driver on Colin McRae Dirt II :p.

Last, have a little gift for the trouble. While offline I've ripped all unlocked backgrounds from Sosc, plus a few CGs for the ones feeling artistic. As a fortunate surprise, the player from there looks a lot alike our <player>. So save a girl from being hit by a bus just got easier!
If you're short on locations, or just wondered how Matsumori High look like. Give it a try. ^^

PS. also forgot this on the hurry:

author=Marrend

I will endevor to assist you in relaying the kind of speech pattern that a certain character would have.

I mean, um, sure. I'll help you with getting more Mayu Masako for your money.

Endevor that's a new word for my vocab, just need google what it means...
I'm side developing the next route with the bug-fix, no previsions neither percentages for now, it took a nice amount of time to figure out how to make the kitty look right. Also, Yuriko and the Cat route will probably by released together and influence each other.
Masako may only appear in one or two events, she's too badass (is that the right word?) to the route's own good, <player> will just sit and play useless if she stick around and I want him actually doing stuff.
There's the possibility of Mayu appear too, but there's too little written to be sure. As we are speaking 'bout crossovers, we have anyone else with Takuya and Tsubasa at the student council?