A.P. Project: Wing's Avenue

Well, well, I have been thinking about a semester if submit or not this game here, and finally I did it, so this is my game or rather the Remake of my game (That is why this is the "A.P. Project" and no just "Wing's Avenue)". Why a Remake? Well, the original game wasn't telling exactly what I wanted to tell, the dialogues were bad, the game play horrible and the dungeons exasperating and obviously full of bugs, so I was trying to do second part of the original game and had a mental blockage and resume the project after like two years and i'v realized that I could do it better, more like the idea I had in my head and no like some, I dunno...
So after this narcissist (There are many "I"s xD) speech, there is download of a demo (the demo is what I've done in the project, mostly graphical things, small story progress and asdfs), so as I'm Chilean (Spanish speaker) the demo was originally in Spanish, the one her is in English, i dunno how correct is the translation, i done it in a day, anyway there wasn't much to translate the demo last less than an hour, so...
And well that, i hope you enjoy this and i hope some constructive criticism, but whatever, any form of criticism is welcome xD
Good night, people (Or days or afternoon or evening or etc.)