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Version 0.1 to 0.2 changes.
jomarcentermjm- 04/05/2012 10:35 AM
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Alright i'm now fixing a ton of problems since the last let's play made by someone else and to stop the annoying e-mail.
Because of the competition i been doing it too quick(since i started the game at least one week. Not checking some problems and anything. but since i can work very slowly now i can fix any problems without any problems.
well i'm starting the project from the very start. so here some fixes for you to see...
here is what i'm fixing
-Grammar and spelling
-Logic
well if you don't believed me look at those picture.
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you may see some fixes at the fix log page of this game profile.
link: http://rpgmaker.net/games/3926/Fix_logs/
well i told you if you wait. everything else fix itself.(not literally)
-thank you.
Because of the competition i been doing it too quick(since i started the game at least one week. Not checking some problems and anything. but since i can work very slowly now i can fix any problems without any problems.
well i'm starting the project from the very start. so here some fixes for you to see...
here is what i'm fixing
-Grammar and spelling
-Logic
well if you don't believed me look at those picture.
photos:
you may see some fixes at the fix log page of this game profile.
link: http://rpgmaker.net/games/3926/Fix_logs/
well i told you if you wait. everything else fix itself.(not literally)
-thank you.
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I'm...I don't...I can't...it doesn't...it's just...
There are no words. You have rendered me literally speechless.
There are no words. You have rendered me literally speechless.
Outside of showing two out of three screens with black backgrounds (That's "improved" mapping?), a pink message background, and maybe a font change, nothing shown here convinces me that I should try this again.
I really don't intend to come off as mean, but....
I really don't intend to come off as mean, but....
Acrypt
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Better than what I can currently do at least. ;D /half-attempt at a compliment.
I'd change that purple though. It's blinding, distracting, and doesn't really fit the game much.
I'd also find yourself someone that actually knows English -very- well to help edit all the text in the game.
I'd change that purple though. It's blinding, distracting, and doesn't really fit the game much.
I'd also find yourself someone that actually knows English -very- well to help edit all the text in the game.
author=Acrypt
Better than what I can currently do at least. ;D /half-attempt at a compliment.
I'd change that purple though. It's blinding, distracting, and doesn't really fit the game much.
I'd also find yourself someone that actually knows English -very- well to help edit all the text in the game.
there a feature that can change the color of the window skin through the option screen.
Sana
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Most of us know that buddy, but we shall continue to rant about it until we see some improvements to our eyes~ *o*
DarrellChan
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author=jomarcenteri can help you correct the grammerauthor=Acryptthere a feature that can change the color of the window skin through the option screen.
Better than what I can currently do at least. ;D /half-attempt at a compliment.
I'd change that purple though. It's blinding, distracting, and doesn't really fit the game much.
I'd also find yourself someone that actually knows English -very- well to help edit all the text in the game.
Acrypt
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author=Sana
Most of us know that buddy, but we shall continue to rant about it until we see some improvements to our eyes~ *o*
Yeah. What this guy said.
I was meaning the screen-shots... Lol... People look at game info and screen-shots BEFORE they play the game. Those... make people avoid it more.
i can help you correct the grammer
Hope in humanity is restored. Actually it's extremely lost right about now. :(
author=DarrellChanauthor=jomarcenteri can help you correct the grammerauthor=Acryptthere a feature that can change the color of the window skin through the option screen.
Better than what I can currently do at least. ;D /half-attempt at a compliment.
I'd change that purple though. It's blinding, distracting, and doesn't really fit the game much.
I'd also find yourself someone that actually knows English -very- well to help edit all the text in the game.
thank you for helping with my current problem with the grammar just let's me upload the version 0.2 current status file.
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Seriously? The blind leading the blind.
You both need help with your grammar. In those screens alone it should read, from the first screen:
"Well it looks like Alex is now reading the newspaper."
"Hello there. Do you want to read the Newspaper?" (Previous day/Yes/No)
"I'm almost there now. The plan must not be compromised."
That's just three out of who knows how many text boxes. And no, don't bother asking me to help. I'm happy to help those who help themselves or at least try. Run your writing through an autochecker, open up a dictionary to look up the meanings of words or take a class in basic English.
Seriously? The blind leading the blind.
You both need help with your grammar. In those screens alone it should read, from the first screen:
"Well it looks like Alex is now reading the newspaper."
"Hello there. Do you want to read the Newspaper?" (Previous day/Yes/No)
"I'm almost there now. The plan must not be compromised."
That's just three out of who knows how many text boxes. And no, don't bother asking me to help. I'm happy to help those who help themselves or at least try. Run your writing through an autochecker, open up a dictionary to look up the meanings of words or take a class in basic English.
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