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Still have yet to put the update but he's a video preview

I'm still working on this. You're not getting rid of me at all. I just wanted to share a preview of the new update in a video. I still have yet to post the updated version.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z-v1DJfAWV8&feature=youtu.be

Note: I still do NOT want this game reviewed until it's complete.

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hmmm... not sure what to say here. Is this what a player will see as soon as they select New Game? There's an awful lot of characters being introduced without actually being introduced. I feel like I just watched episode 7 of a sitcom I've never heard of.
It also strikes me as odd that people of marriageable age are going off as a group to pick berries for mom's pie.
That's the way I want to do it and I am keeping it that way. The other characters are friends. I am not changing that. Sorry if was rude but it makes really mad when people question those things. I want to d what I want to do. I wrote this out as a novel and I brain stormed it and thought it through. I am basing it on my novel. I don't know how else to start it off.
Two things.
1) You need to consider the player's perspective. If your ultimate objective is to create something that will entertain others, you'll have to be mindful of said others.
2) You're going to need thicker skin. No matter how great a masterpiece you make, there'll always be someone saying it's too ______. Dealing with negative feedback is a part of life.
I don't know how else to start it out and that was how I wrote the novel. I got mad because you're not being constructive and you're judging my game before I even post the update. The video doesn't show you every thing you know. I have a lot more than that and yes I just noticed the typos. So either stop be unconstructive and judging my game before I release the update or don't bother commenting. Not trying to be mean or rude. I am trying very hard to entertain others and you do not respect how hard I am trying.
That was my first impression when I first played the game in its early versions.

But for what I could understand, Rose just throws up the characters and you'll get to know their ins and outs as you proceed on the game. They're stranger to the player at first but you'll get acquainted to them during the story. At least that's what I could get from my first play.

But I agree that Rose should probably have put a different video, because this is misleading and will give incorrect impressions.

The text needs some revision, but the game has improved much from when I first played it. My suggestion would be trying to use the cutscenes more like Phantasy Star IV did. Make the pictures smaller, and use more than one image per cutscene.

Your art style has also improved. The proportions are better, though hands still need some working.
Thank you Sug. I feel lot a better now. However a funny thing happened. I fell asleep and got a dream of something better to do with it. So I am going to take that video down after get the improvements done. :)
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