HOMUNCULUS'S PROFILE

You should keep the shape of the leg for sure, maybe just thin out the lines to keep the shape something like in the quick example below, cause the shape is excellent!

As for the breast, it looks like the cleavage goes too high up for the size of her actual boobs. In your reference pic, her boob crack (Sorry for the crude term, I just don't know how else to word it right now LOL) is so large/goes so high up is because
A. She has large breasts
B. Her arms are directly under her breasts, lifting them up
Your characters breasts are smaller and free from anything under them to lift them up, so they'll be a little lower and won't have much cleavage.

Again, this is a super rough example lol do yo thang, you're doing a great job improving and trying :D Also, what are you referring to when you say couch? Is it her leg/crotch area? Also, is she wearing a tight short skirt or actual shorts/onepiece?

I typically only give attention to video games that speak to me on an emotional level, so major yes to that question :D I mean, there's always exceptions, like fighting and action games and whatnot, but for the most part, I want my games to hit me right in the feels and make me contemplate shit. I prefer gamesthat are portrayed more as an art form and means of telling a story/message over action (Again, I do love some action games, fighting games are excellent for staying alert and honing skills)

I'd say the biggest so far have been Silent Hill 2, 3, and 4. They made a huge impact on me. Good role models, I know LOL. They inspired and influenced my art and writing, they helped me dig inside myself to confront issues I ignored for the longest time, they just ripped my feels right out of me and made me stare at them until nothing made sense anymore. I loved it XD Of course, i was an awkward introvert in high school at the time so it certainly didn't help me fit in at all, but au contrair, they made me not give a shit about not fitting in.

Followed up by Breath of Fire V, cause Ryu is one honorable heroic mofo and I will not ramble any further cause I don't know if I could stop myself once I start X3

Ahhhhhhhhhh vidjo games <3 <3 <3

I'm juggling so many games right now lol. I know what I must do know.

Firstly, right now I'm jumping between FF9, Chrono Cross, Rune Factory and Legend of Mana lol.

I have that pattern though, I have 4-5 games on the go at once until I find one that I get hooked on. I WAS hooked on the Suikoden series. I beat 1 for the first time (I played it before, but never complete it), replayed through 2, and played and beat 4 for the first time. I started 5 before, but didn't care for it, but I made a promise to myself that I can only replay 3 once I beat 5 (2 and 3 were always my favs, 4's a worthy rival now though). But as a break, I decided to pick up Suikoden Tactics to try since it takes place directly after 4. I got right into it, but then found it got a little too repetitive. I really want to progress the story, but at the same time the battles were getting tedious so I lost interest in it XD Then I got to wondering... Do I troop through Tactics or just skip right to 5? I was so stumped that I dropped the series and start game surfing again lol.

Thank you topic, I now realized what I must do. Suikoden Tactics!!!

Heeeyyyy, you're on the right track there! :D Both hand and leg are looking much better!

Such an interesting style you have going on here! I love the progress you've made, definitely keep it up :D And for the record, I'm a sucker for heavy outer-edge linework. Especially if the detail lines are fine, it really makes a picture stick out.

Great job with the corpse too, that's a very annoying pose to get down; but of course, one will never improve if they don't challenge themselves, so job well done!