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Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~
author=KuronekoxYour brilliant passive-aggressiveness..author=MuteI couldn't write one to save anyones life... :<
There's only two, sadly. But hey, a custom-content tsundere is always a possibility for anyone who wants to write. Perhaps I should write one..
author=Kuronekox
We need a well written tsundere character, though.
...proves that you can sound like a tsundere in tsuntsun mode whenever you feel like it. I figured that you could write one easily enough.
Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~
author=KuronekoxThere's only two, sadly. But hey, a custom-content tsundere is always a possibility for anyone who wants to write. Perhaps I should write one..
There should be a tsundere girl. :P
Content creation (technical)
PRIORITY = Absolute
As long as the conditions are fulfilled and the player is at the proper place to witness this event, the event is 100% likely to happen. It'd be useful for events that are meant to happen on a specific day, but it also opens up griefing possibilities for writers.
That's nothing a good check of each story before uploaded can't fix, though.
As long as the conditions are fulfilled and the player is at the proper place to witness this event, the event is 100% likely to happen. It'd be useful for events that are meant to happen on a specific day, but it also opens up griefing possibilities for writers.
That's nothing a good check of each story before uploaded can't fix, though.
Content creation (artistic)
author=MarrendYou're not wrong, but I much prefer that everything is finished before people see it so they can enjoy (or try to enjoy) the work in its entirety. I prefer that people can experience the full route the first time they play it. Besides, I'm not going to upload straight to the Finished Content thread until everyone here is satisfied. It's just that I'll write the main route before I release it here.
You don't have to have a route that's 100% done to post your work. Isn't part of the reason this thread exists? To get feedback on one's route before it goes into the "Finished Content" thread? Not that it's totally disallowed to do things to completed routes after they get on that thread (See: Uchioniko, and it's three-ish updates since flagged as "complete"), but the expectation of the "Finished Content" thread is that there is very little the creator would want to change to the content.
/ten-cent opinion
Content creation (artistic)
author=Marrend
Sounds like Kyouki is back on my must-play list. As soon as something playable is available.
*sighs at all the unpublished routes*
I'M WRITING AS FAST AS POSSIBLE. D:
Really, there's no excuse for me to be taking this long to finish a single route, but I can assure you all that I'll finish some time between today and the end of time. Please forgive me..
Content creation (technical)
A note to people who use the PICTURE command (especially Kevincalanor):
Be absolutely sure to use the 'PICTURE = None' command before the end of any story that uses the PICTURE command. If you don't, the picture will remain on the screen in other events and even on the school board.
Kevin, I'll just let you know that I was looking at Keika standing in front of two people hugging in the trees because of this.
Be absolutely sure to use the 'PICTURE = None' command before the end of any story that uses the PICTURE command. If you don't, the picture will remain on the screen in other events and even on the school board.
Kevin, I'll just let you know that I was looking at Keika standing in front of two people hugging in the trees because of this.
Content creation (artistic)
author=Marrend
I keep expecting a post that reads something to the effect of "Darigaaz, Marrend, stop before you go any further!"
Not that I have anything against my current plan, but the complications involved are quite daunting. Though, again, that assumes people can read what my plan actually is, given what little I've shown of it.
Even if someone were to tell you that, you should continue writing. It's your story to tell, isn't it? It looks interesting so far..
Content creation (artistic)
author=MarrendIt's not okay, and that's because the accuracy is severely crapastrophic. Simply put, the height you're planning to use (192 cm) is about 6'3". Does that seem to be within the normal height range in Japan? No, that's not as important. Is that the height you really want Emiko to be?
So, I'm trying to have <player> describe Emiko. One of the first things I wrote was...ID = 0
She's 5'9"
...sincenot-mepeople are be able to judge this kind of stuff. Then, I realized that we are in Japan and I should probably use the metric system.Only stupid Americans use the English system, anyways.My thought is to use a rough approximation (3 feet is about 1 meter) which comes out to approximately 192 cm, after rounding. Crapastrophic accuracy aside, I'm hoping this is okay, in general.
The <player> would not be stupid enough to think Emiko is 192 cm. That's the height of a tall man in Japan. Emiko probably does not compare to a tall man in height. It'd be quite surprising if she does.
Content creation (artistic)
author=Marrend
Though, perhaps, what Emiko's route needs is a good, old-fashioned crisis. An event that allows <player> the opportunity to show that he's reliable, and cares about what happens to her. A bit cliche, maybe, but I'm not seeing how else these two are going to get together.
"There is nothing new under the sun." Most 'new' things are variations of old ideas. As long as the crisis is interesting enough, your readers will like it.
Content creation (artistic)
author=Marrend
Call me stupid, or crazy, but I'm having some issues with what kind of name <player> would use for an online environment. My first thought was to use Ferdinand, the stroy-test name for <player> before it was changed to Kazuhiko, for the lutz....
ID = Ferdinand
Message: Hey, Emiko!
(There was a several minute pause before I got a response.)
ID = Oracle_Askigaga
Message: Okay, I give up.
Message: Who are you, and where should I know you from?
ID = Ferdinand
Message: I'm <player>.
Message: We were, um, supposed to meet here for a multiplayer game?
Message: Remember?
ID = Oracle_Askigaga
Message: Oooooh.
Message: Riiiiight.
...but I dunno. Could there be a better name for him?
Ferdinand sounds good enough, but there should be a reason for the <player> picking the name. The name means protection, courage, bravery, etc. It could be the meaning he likes, or maybe he just likes the sound. Perhaps an old friend had nicknamed him that since childhood. I dunno either.
Speaking of gamer girls, if Oracle_Askigaga plays online multiplayer games, than she surely would know of Nimbostratus..













