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Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=Marrend
I don't see anything wrong about that tachie. If you want something more hug-able, I dunno. There was a tachie Dozen once posted with a really super-sad face. She practically screamed to be hugged. I wonder if... yeah, it's there.
Maybe I'm just weird like that, though?
That wasn't my intention, but thanks for the example.
Uhhm, nothing wrong? That's good then..
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
Is someone here? ...anyone? o
I'm kind of working on a custom character. Her profile is done, but for some reason, I can't get any story written. Maybe it's the lack of effort, or the lack of experience when it comes to social encounters, or just pure stupidity. But she has a lot of tachie! ...well, it's something isn't it? Have a look at her like tachie.
No, not you! Wait, I don't mean it like that! Ugh! and I guess I'm considering him.. but he won't know that.
Her name shall be kept secret for now. Umm, what's your opinion? Does she look huggable? Is the hair color weird? What about the headband and ribbons? You get the point - what do you think? /nervous
I'm kind of working on a custom character. Her profile is done, but for some reason, I can't get any story written. Maybe it's the lack of effort, or the lack of experience when it comes to social encounters, or just pure stupidity. But she has a lot of tachie! ...well, it's something isn't it? Have a look at her like tachie.

No, not you! Wait, I don't mean it like that! Ugh! and I guess I'm considering him.. but he won't know that.
Her name shall be kept secret for now. Umm, what's your opinion? Does she look huggable? Is the hair color weird? What about the headband and ribbons? You get the point - what do you think? /nervous
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=MarrendRight on the first day, the game refers to the "girl" space as an event/story space. There are events where you only talk/hear some of your male classmates. If that's odd, it's also odd that you can land on a "girl" space and see no graphic at all.
If nothing else, there is the odd technicality of landing on a "girl" space, and seeing a guy's graphic.
edit: made it all one paragraph
Content creation (technical)
Out of curiosity, is it possible to have an event skip straight to the end of the day? The idea is that the girl accidentally injures the player character, and is forced to stay with him at the hospital until he's healed. Being an event that happens during the school day, I'd need a way for it skip to the end of the day.
(It'd have to cancel any dates, too. Ya' know, without penalty, as if you got a bug.)
I don't think it's possible, but it's definitely an idea. Any help, guys?
(It'd have to cancel any dates, too. Ya' know, without penalty, as if you got a bug.)
I don't think it's possible, but it's definitely an idea. Any help, guys?
Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~
author=laureenrabbit
Girlz can play ?
It might be weird for a girl to play a game where you're dating girls, unless you're attracted to them.
In any case, we're not stopping you. Have fun. May the blushy lovesick girls appear for you!
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
Was about to let you know about the "CONDITION = 1202" error, but Marrend ninja'd me. :P
So.. just gonna fix that and start playing..
So.. just gonna fix that and start playing..
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=BasedMG
-snop-
Right, right, I was more concerned about emotes and such though, but thinking on it I guess there's no need to fret.
More concerned about emotes? What do you mean by "emotes"?
Rest assured, the route is going swimmingly, and I've already added a couple more phone scenes and starting to begin the meat of the plot. I foresee around 20-30 scenes total, only counting main route scenes and not side scenes like phone conversations or dates.
It's typically 40-50 scenes, but that doesn't really matter if you can write the story in less. Should be fun. :3
Edit: Out of curiosity, which scenes involving the <player> gave you the most "issues"?
ID = 0
(She giggles lightly, leaving me a little flustered at both my confusion and how girlishly cute it sounds.)
ID = 70
NEUTRAL
I'm Ko-
OTHER1
*yawn*
NEUTRAL
-e. Got that?
ID = 0
(I only blink a few times as my response. She seems to take this as a "yes", and she turns to go wherever it was she was going.)
Yes, because the <player> actually expresses his confusion in the form of facial expressions.
(Damn, I probably could have worded that better. And the sad look she gives me only drives the point home.)
The game itself does have like one or two curse words, I guess. But I'll point out anyway that some people might not like cursing. It sounds better than "dang" though >.>
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=BasedMG
-snip-
This explanation could also be applied to your comment about the <player> character; I wasn't sure how to go about writing him, so I ended up settling on a variation of KS's main character, molded to fit within his already established personality. If you think all the "awkward" gestures like blinking in surprise and all that don't fit, then I can easily edit them.
The <player> can be described as a guy who spends most of his free time having fun and hanging with friends.Despite the fact that he studies,he's got a mountain of homework at his house. Whenever he isn't talking to someone, he's usually lost in thought. Likes to make snarky comments when someone is annoying him, but typically acts friendly.
There's some slight variation in his personality depending on the choices in the game, though. All that's just my own opinion, so don't trust me on that. You're the one telling the story, so write it as you like. I'm just assuming you want it to fit in with the rest of the story.
What was the last event you got with her? I know I had some issues with getting her events to fire while playtesting, but that was mainly due to bad RNG with which events are prioritized (as it should be).
The last event I got was the soul check. Looks like I won't be going down the personality route.
At any rate, thanks for your feedback, and I'll take into consideration how I characterize the <player> when I go to write more. One of my main concerns is whether I'm describing things/narrating too much, rather than the spontaneous-feeling ":shrug:"s and such of the original routes.
Nah. The narration's fine. Typically, the <player> makes comments at the beginning and end of a sequence, occasionally having thoughts about what's being currently said, so it's fine. And there's never too much detail e.e
Comments in bold text.
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=BasedMGOkay, so I've downloaded her now much smaller and manageable file of 5 MBs and I'll start playing her. So far, she's definitely cute. I could detail what kind of stupid little expressions she does, but to put it simply.. how many Other tachies does she have? XD
Oh hey, it's fine. I suppose it's my fault for loading it up with music, but her route's pretty music-oriented. Sorry it's causing delays on your end. I'm actually about to upload a new release with less music so it might be less of a load. I sort of jumped the gun when downloading music for her, and even though i haven't used it in the story yet, I accidentally bundled them with the release itself, heh.
tl;dr: Sorry, it's all the music I haven't used yet.
Edit: In fact, you should probably just wait for the next release, since I did a bit of an overhaul on her tachie and some story events. I'm just playtesting it now to make sure everything fires off correctly when it needs to.
Edit 2: New release is released
So if I -could- actually get lucky with the dice roll and land on an event more than twice a day, I'll be able to finish her route soon. Anyway... so yes, she's pretty cute. She giggles, yawns, winks and raises her brows a lot of times, and with all these Other tachies, she feels a lot more lively in her sequences. Which is weird, considering she's not all that lively in the daytime. Good job on that.
As for story, well, right now, I haven't done much the story yet. She's so clumsy~ really, one day she's sleeping in your classroom and the next she's sleeping in a school closet? When you ask for her name, she yawns as she says it. She's a pianist in the orchestra club and she's supposedly very good at it. I can't help but imagine Kotone playing her theme on the piano. :3
There's not much to be said about her story until I finish it, of course. But so far she's a lovable character and I'm curious to finish the story. :3
EDIT: So after 8 straight days of no events from her, I checked the story file. There aren't many sequences for her right now. XD Well, I'll be watching her development.
EDIT 2: The <player> character would be accurate if he didn't blink his eyes or act surprised so much. I'm not sure if it's a good or bad thing that your depiction of the <player> actually gives him a personality other than being a perfect guy who teases, girl-pleases and is almost never unfazed.
Takuya's pretty accurate, too. You got his personality well. No issues, the obligatory Takuya scene would fit in with the rest of the game.













