PROJECTKYLE100'S PROFILE

Hey all. I have changed my game description sens my last post 6 days ago. But I still need some help. Mostly with "punctuation" and grammar. I'm close. But I still got to fix some things. Any tips? Here is what I got so far.

" Era. A land full of mystery and Adventure. Now stands threatened by a race of super solders known as Shadows! Infused with radioactive power. The shadows are nearly unstoppable in battle. And whiten time. Devastate most of the land that once thrived.

Yore main character in this game is Dugan. A fallen Shadow who truly feels the world must be destroyed if humanity is ever to have peace! However, after befriending a young girl by the name of Karla Nelson. Dugans Black heart slowly softens. And after discovering the truth about Karla's own past. Dugan gives up on his evil ways and fights beside Karla to save the grate land of Era from his ancestors clutches!

The game is still in the making. The first level of the game is complete. And the 2nd is almost done. The story will change depending on what choices you make threw out the game.

I will update everyone when a new chapter is added."

Hey all. I'm attempting to post my RPG game. Shadows. On this sight. But its says I need to work on my Description. Could I gat a few pointers. Here is what I got so far.

"Shadows is a Sci Fi adventure game about a lost man with a dark and tragic past.

Do to an incident that drove him out of his mind. Dugan finds himself in a Crazy world surrounded by danger and mystery. A world he feels he must burn! Until he meets a young girl by the name of Karla Nelson. Who softens his black heart and gives Dugan a new meaning to his life

The game is still in the making. just the first level of the game is complete. As i'm still working on the rest.

I have worked hard on making this a family friendly game. Although the story line can be dark and tragic given Dugan was driven to insanity by it

I will update everyone when a new chapter is added. But right now. Only Chapter 1 is playable "

author=SnowOwl
@Kyle
Too much empty space in all your screenshots. You could easily remove 50% or more of those maps.

Changed the shop. The map dosn't go any smaller so I had to add more wall and fill in more space

You would have to play the game to understand. To make a long story short. The land surrounding the tower is guarded well. Vary well :)

I need help grading this map. The place is supposed to be a wreck as its an abandoned weaponry.