RIE'S PROFILE

author=Frogge
Oh actually, the first screenshot I saw was the one where the dude went ''Oh crap !! What the place is this?'' which had me laughing, so I kinda hoped this would similar to QTPPC where it's funny because the dialogue is badly written on purpose. Either way, if the grammar isn't actually bad on purpose, I suggest you get a proofreader or mess it up even more to make it funnier :,D

Mess it up even more? That could be interesting. Never thought about it before.
My friends who already test the game were not come up for days to tell me about grammar, but only game bugs, and already fixed. So I never think about the grammar part. May be they are too soft on grammar tolerance, I don't know. Or they are already knew that I'm kinda a bit sick when created something and they just don't care about my absurdity.
But I really appreciate your input for reminding me about it. This is my first game, and english is my second language. So I need some feedback to improve anything for later work.
Thank you Frogge, I can learn something from any suggestions.

author=Marrend
...these lines? Though, I'm fairly sure "humour" can be considered a correct spelling, depending on what manner of English you are aiming for.

Thank you so much for show me the better description.
It's a bit different, but I'm sure you tried to understand my description point.
And replace it with more clearly and understandable plot. It's really much appreciated.
I'll take it. Thank you once again.

the campfire feels looks awesome..