ROSE_GUARDIAN'S PROFILE

It's hard to think outside the box is the only problem. I try not to be too cliché with my stories but it is pretty hard not to be cliché. About the evil church thing, I personally liked Breath of Fire 2 that had a similar story line. However I do try to stay away from what is expected when I make games.

LockeZ Thank you for showing me that. I kind of like some of the those ideas. I try my hardest not to be too cliché and through in something unexpected. For example I know this probably had nothing to do with the topic but one of my games instead of the hero getting turned into a ware wolf I have get turned into a monster like an incubus for example.

Thank you for your comments. I'll see what I can do to make it less cliché.

I was just wondering does this story sound too cliché to everyone? I want to do a good story that everyone well almost everyone will enjoy. Here is a story idea for my game Soul Reign I am going to remake. Here is my prologue.
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A long time ago humans and beast people lived in peace. However they later began to argue and fight over many things. So they found a way to break the world apart into two different worlds. The two worlds were called Valanor and Halida.

Now about a couple thousand years later a great disturbance in the dimensional rift threatens both worlds. Monsters have been appearing in all areas of both worlds, and have been ravaging towns and people. However the two legions of both worlds chose to protect people fro the monsters.

That's really all I have. Also what are some things you guys and girls think of when you hear Soul Reign, please no goofy or comedy ideas. I want the story to be strictly fantasy.

That's weird. The quest is optional and so are the quests in the menu. I'll take a look at it and see what is wrong. For right now just skip that quest and continue with the story. I will have to figure out why it is doing that and fix it.