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I'm just an introverted chinese guy who loves games, martial arts, Asia and shit postings. Oh, I do love horror related things so much.

So much that I can't even feel fear anymore.
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A dark survival horror blended with Lovecraftian and J-RPG.

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Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=Fakkal
I agree with nhubi that capital/small letters are grammar mistakes. The capitalisation isn't the only kind of mistake that I've seen. I notice also "plural mistake", some "'s" that were missing, misspelled words and so on. I count the mistakes without capitalisation and I got like 76. If I add capitalisation mistakes, I reach 139 (63 alone). That's why I asked what went wrong with the proofreading. I would be fine if they were like 4-5 mistakes for chapter 0 after proofreading because they're not robots after all. But here, it's like it had been read with closed eyes or it was rushed. So, I felt quite disappointed when I notice all of these.

In my opinion, rushing a game isn't really a good idea. I know that it can be really boring to have to go throught the texts again and again to correct mistakes, but for me, it's important to "polish" a game to give it a better view (like nhubi said) than rather than completing it by going in "fast-forward mode".

EDIT : The reason why I give so much informations about bugs and mistakes is that I see in this game great potential of being popular and a "hit" in the RPG Maker world like Mad Father and Ib.


Sorry for rushing. The eagerness of working on my next project had consumed me. I'll do whatever I can to improve it while working on the next project as well.

(And we really should send messages instead. We're flooding the comment section.)

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=nhubi
Actually, incorrect capitalisation is a grammar error. I think it's more for the fact that you listed proofreading as the most prominent of the fixes you'd applied to this release and therefore gave it undue weight in the eyes of your subscribers, or in Fakkal's eyes at the very least.

Whilst I can understand that you are eager to work on the next project, leaving a game with glaring and repeated grammatical errors does reduce it's polish and the favourable impression you wish to create for your players.
I understand. Well, it's not like I'm gonna leave this game as I still want to add a few more things to it :D

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=Fakkal
Thanks for the advice. (Sorry for the double-post thingy)
The proofreading was for the grammar mistakes and not for the capital alphabets. I don't have much time to fix them because I want to work on my next project.

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=Gicu7u7
author=Tsurugihayate
author=Gicu7u7
author=Tsurugihayate
author=Gicu7u7
Hello , I would like to translate your game into Spanish? I can?
Of Course! :D
Could translate your upcoming launches , but it just me? Please nwn
You want to translate my upcoming games too? Sure :D
But remember that you can not give anyone else permission nwn , O my work would be in vain
But for NoTS, there's already a Spanish translator

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=Gicu7u7
author=Tsurugihayate
author=Gicu7u7
Hello , I would like to translate your game into Spanish? I can?
Of Course! :D
Could translate your upcoming launches , but it just me? Please nwn
You want to translate my upcoming games too? Sure :D

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=Gicu7u7
Hello , I would like to translate your game into Spanish? I can?
Of Course! :D

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=Fakkal
When you'll fix the bug/glitch, will the name of the game's file change for v.1.01 ?

Also, when do you plan on releasing a new version without glitch/bug ? Is there a lot to correct (glitch/bug/grammar error) ? (I know I give some but they're other that could have find some)
I'm currently waiting for the proofreader to finish the grammar checking. Bugs and glitches has been fixed, mostly.

I plan to release v1.10 next month. Gotta put more stuffs into the game so it won't be just a mere bug/glitch-fix update :D

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=Fakkal
I found the seventh part... It was in the warrior den.

The review has been made ! (pending atm)

How many references are in the game ? I'm not a good reference seeker, I only found a reference to the ring and maybe a reference to Naruto (and maybe Bleach)

I had an idea for horror games. I have never seen in a rpg horror game a figure (could be a form like an eye, a hand, etc.) stick in the doorframe when you opened the door (or the door is already open). That idea came when I pass in front of a black rectangle and was expecting a jumpscare.
Oh hey, thanks for the review! :D

The scratched screen effect is not a bug. It's just there to add a little bit of atmosphere.

Naruto or Bleach references? No, I only put horror references in the game...
But this makes me want to list the references in the future! :D

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=giorgio2584
i got the true ending i like it do you plan for a sequel?
Yes, I do plan for a sequel :D
But it has little to do with Nightmare of The Snow, though. (Despite being set in the same world)

Nightmare of The Snow 雪の悪夢

author=Fakkal
I'm currently playing the game and I'm planning to make a review :D. Meanwhile, I've found some bug/glitch from chapter 0-1-2.

Spoiler ahead, beware !
• Yuuki's house : When you walk as Yuuki on the couch (The one next to her room), her head passed right through
• Kirihara mansion : The spikes' location appear on the bloodstains when you exit a room (especially the one who hold the key to the exit)
• Kirihara mansion : The brightness of some rooms (when you come in) is high then suddenly become low. It happens in a quarter of second (example : Skeletons' room (Archive ?) with Kayako (chapter 1))
• The game often make me go slower and laggy, it may be due to my windows.
• Stamina meter : Appear (when you paused the game and return to the game) after taking the kitchen knife from the skeletal remain in the bedroom (Chapter 1, kayako)

• Glitch when you entered the building in the Ishikawa Gakuen.
• Glitch in the nursery : Kayako can step on the food (Chapter 1, Kayako)
• Glitch with an item in the school (Chapter 1, Kayako)

• Glitch in the kitchen (Gakuen's building : Kayako appear through the door (location depicted in the picture)

• Glitch in the basement : Kayako passed right through a pile of something (Chapter 1, Kayako)

• Glitch next to the well (chapter 2, Yuuki) : Yuuki passed through an object
Whoa, thanks a lot!! This really saves me a lot of time finding the bugs and glitches :D