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author=Nedras
Hey Veynn! Good to see that you've posted the demo. The art is really great and the maps are nicely made! Noel is a nice character. I actually smiled at a couple of his lines because his personality is really like that of kuuderes and I enjoyed him overall.

The atmosphere was really nice. I liked the change of the atmosphere after a certain event. After the event though, and the thing after that (trying to avoid spoilers) is that the end of the demo? It left me sort of confused. But it is just a demo, so I'm sure there will be more it unless I missed something.

I do have some critique for the game though.
1. As soon as I started playing the first thing that I noticed was the idle animation. The sprite looks great when walking, however it immediately turns into awkward when you stop walking. I'm really unsure why you used this animation in contrast to this one.



Another issue I did find was that if Noel walks down there is a small black dash on the top right. This can be easily fixed though.

2. I'm not sure if this is just me, but I think the window clashes with text. The window is really dark, however, I think if you lightened it up a bit, or even just made the text bigger, the issue would be fixed.

3. The space is really limited the first map. I couldn't understand why I wasn't able to walk behind the pillows even though there was a clear walk way. Also Noel is standing on a chair in one of the paths.



Other than those things I pointed out, I think that what you're making right now definitely has potential! I look forward to the full game!


Hi-ya Nedras~! Thank you! \>u</
I was a bit worried of how people would perceive Noel considering you only see a small part of his personality here. Hahah, he's actually pretty silly at times (which isn't apparent here...).

The demo ends once Annabelle's portrait appears talking about the end of the demo.
It was originally supposed to be much, much longer, but then I realized it would have stopped right at a cliffhanger as opposed to this. And, Spring Break wouldn't be long enough for me to complete a longer demo.

1. One of my friends thought it looked like he was out of breath running away from Annabelle so I thought it would be less awkward to do an animation with him standing around while waving his arms.

2. I've been thinking about changing the window, but I'm really attached to this one (I'm really fond of checkered patterns!) to the point I just wanted to use it regardless.

I'll be changing it up for the actual game since it blends in with the background/text a bit too much.

3. In the kitchen Noel's also standing in blank space if you look closely. Some of the maps had this problem since I drew all of these instantly without checking them on a grid. And, I forgot to correct that chair.


Thank you for the critique~!! (▰∀◕)ノ

author=AshMichaelis
author=Nedras
Hey Veynn! Good to see that you've posted the demo. The art is really great and the maps are nicely made! Noel is a nice character. I actually smiled at a couple of his lines because his personality is really like that of kuuderes and I enjoyed him overall.

The atmosphere was really nice. I liked the change of the atmosphere after a certain event. After the event though, and the thing after that (trying to avoid spoilers) is that the end of the demo? It left me sort of confused. But it is just a demo, so I'm sure there will be more it unless I missed something.

I do have some critique for the game though.
1. As soon as I started playing the first thing that I noticed was the idle animation. The sprite looks great when walking, however it immediately turns into awkward when you stop walking. I'm really unsure why you used this animation in contrast to this one.



Another issue I did find was that if Noel walks down there is a small black dash on the top right. This can be easily fixed though.

2. I'm not sure if this is just me, but I think the window clashes with text. The window is really dark, however, I think if you lightened it up a bit, or even just made the text bigger, the issue would be fixed.

3. The space is really limited the first map. I couldn't understand why I wasn't able to walk behind the pillows even though there was a clear walk way. Also Noel is standing on a chair in one of the paths.



Other than those things I pointed out, I think that what you're making right now definitely has potential! I look forward to the full game!
So I was making a recording for my youtube. I had to try a second time because I messed up the audio. There is a scene where it specifically tells you that you have finished the demo. I totally missed it the first time around.
**Spoiler**
Go to sleep in your bed after dealing with Mr. Magpie for it to say the demo is over.


Thank you for taking the time to play and make a recording for it!! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Yeeep! His family's really superstitious.

Trouble uploading game?

author=InfectionFiles
It might be that special character in the title, not sure though!
author=GreatRedSpirit
Yeah, it's the ä in the name. RMN's text encoding is weird at the best of times. Replace it with an a and try again.


I love you all.

Thank you so much!!! \>u</

Träumerei

author=gabicho
author=Veynn
Is anyone else also having trouble with uploading the demo file?
I was able to unpack it, but not play it.
I searched up the error and it seems like the "ä" in the folder name was messing it up. I switched "ä" with a regular "a" and it worked.
Solution was found here.
So when you upload the game file just make sure there are no special or foreign characters or else it may not work on everyone's system.


Everyone here is my hero.

Seriously, I can't believe that was the main problem.

Trouble uploading game?

Hello~!!

I've been trying to upload my game demo here, but this keeps cropping up:
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/54988/locker/Screenshot_322.png


I'm so confused. @.@

Thank you!

Träumerei

author=AshMichaelis
Soooo I'm trying to download the demo. It download but I cant open it. Not sure if its just me or what.

Odd; I just tested it out and the same thing's happening to me. Thank you for informing me; I'll try reuploading it!!

Is anyone else also having trouble with uploading the demo file?

Melting Moon

Yaaaay~

This is finally on RPGM!!! \>u</ I love your games; your demo last year was extremely well made as well!

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author=CYBERLOUS
He's so cute!


Thank you~!! ^_^

Painted vs. Pixel Sprites?

Hihi! \>u</

My main project's multiple chapters, so I'm planning to convert to making it a pixel-based game to save myself time.

I tend to take a really, really long time trying to figure out color coordination to the point the sprites usually blend in with the background when (if) I manage to get that far:

That would be for a sidescroller I was planning, but it's on hold at the moment.
This has impeded upon my main project to the point I now have to completely start over.

However, I don't understand how to actually make pixel sprites; they always look out wonky:

I started pixel art 2 days ago, but I once tried drawing pixel trees months ago.

Anyway, I really don't understand how I'm supposed to make actual character sprites, so could I just keep them painted to match the character portraits:


Thank you!!

Träumerei

author=Rlop1
It looks cool. When do you plan (if you do) to release a demo?


Thank you~ ^^

I was planning to have the demo out weeks ago, but some issues came up.
As a result my new goal is to release it before the end of the year.