ASHEN_HEAVEN'S PROFILE

Lurker and occasional poster. If you want a beta-tester who's going to focus on the non-technical side (like dialogue, plot, character, etc), just give me a PM. 8D

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Monsters_on_Field.png

I dunno, the trees look okay in my eyes XD It's the black outline in sprite on the upper right that leaps out to me. XD

About the smoke. A white smoke doesn't look...threatening to me. I know it's more of a cosmetic comment, so meh, feel free to ignore. I guess the black thing inside would make it feel more 'evil', but it doesn't show. XD Also, do the encounter indicators move fast? Slow? Random depending on the map/monster type? I get a feeling that the indicators are a tad big. If they move fast and I don't want to fight them, it would be harder to use evade-fu especially in narrow areas. XD

Screenshot Saturday 4

author=Sailerius
I'm still tweaking it a little bit (for example, I think I'm going to move the EP icons to the left a bit0. Do you have a suggestion for the colors?


I guess the trusty red/black/white combination would be nice? It's the blue that really bugs me. Or that this new gauge looks so radically different from the first one. I don't...really see it as a gauge/bar thing.
Urr, I'm being so vague and nitpicky. Sorry about that. D:

Screenshot Saturday 4

Cool, more specials XD Do the Charges reset to zero when you save, just like in the original version?

A tad irrelevant, but I actually liked the old turn gauge more XP Or maybe the huge E and the blues and reds make the new one look cheesy to me.

PlaceName_ErinnaFields_2.png

Hmm, I think I like the first one better. XD Maybe because it's more scenic? But then again, I feel that the font choice/placement is more appropriate here than in the first image. I...I'm not really sure. If you want the name to stand out more, go for this one. If the image, I guess the first? :D

PlaceName_ErinnaFields.png

Looks good! And nice choice of artwork. :D It's good that the border's unobtrusive; otherwise I think it'll detract from the image itself.

Screenshot Saturday 2

For a moment I thought my screen was far too dim, since the screenshot was pretty dark. I suppose it's a fog/evening effect or something? XD

ErinnaFields_SafeZone1_Test.png

Looks okay XD A little more spicing up perhaps (the usual small stuff like stones, bushes, etc) and the tree placements. Seeing the same tree sprite in a straight line looks a little iffy to me. ;D

TitleTest01.png

Eh, not too fond of this. Then again, I'm not fond of 'put several characters here' type. XP Or maybe it's just because it's still WIP.

Town_Erinna_FencesOrNo.png

Sounds okay to me. And yes, graveyards need to be separated from the living community. XDD