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Needs more work.
Thank you kory_toombs for your video review of this game.
I really appreciate it.
1. First thing first, i know that my english may contain many grammatical errors. My native language is not english, i just hope that it's not that bad so you can still understand what it means. I already gave my best to make it simple to understand.
2. And i agree with you that my mapping is just so-so.. hahahaha.
That's why in my description i said that i want to focus strongly in my storyline.
By the way, i'll try my best to make it better in the full version one.
3. About some words that can't be read because of the windows size, i'll try to fix it, so it can be read even in the smallest windows size.
4. Can you give me a specific reason about why you think the music is bad? So i can made an improvement in that area.
5. About the battle, i know maybe it takes too much time to do just one battle. I'll try my best to change that too
6. One big thing i want to tell you is you missed some mini event in that prologue because you didn't explore the town fully. You didn't even taste the strong points of this game about Decision, did you? I know this demo didn't show much about this "strong points", but you can taste it a little. Some hint for you : "Try to explore
Inn, Pub and Church. Most of the building is closed because it's a night time, but those 3 buildings is open".
If you ask "why did you make it miss-able?". Emm...simply because it's not the main story.
Side Comment :
- Dartz, why did you find that name interesting? You mention that name a lot of time in your review? hahahaha
- I'll think about that voice actor idea, especially about you become those black robed man...hahahaha
by the way, once more i'll say Thank you very very much.
I'm really thankful for this video review
I really appreciate it.
1. First thing first, i know that my english may contain many grammatical errors. My native language is not english, i just hope that it's not that bad so you can still understand what it means. I already gave my best to make it simple to understand.
2. And i agree with you that my mapping is just so-so.. hahahaha.
That's why in my description i said that i want to focus strongly in my storyline.
By the way, i'll try my best to make it better in the full version one.
3. About some words that can't be read because of the windows size, i'll try to fix it, so it can be read even in the smallest windows size.
4. Can you give me a specific reason about why you think the music is bad? So i can made an improvement in that area.
5. About the battle, i know maybe it takes too much time to do just one battle. I'll try my best to change that too
6. One big thing i want to tell you is you missed some mini event in that prologue because you didn't explore the town fully. You didn't even taste the strong points of this game about Decision, did you? I know this demo didn't show much about this "strong points", but you can taste it a little. Some hint for you : "Try to explore
Inn, Pub and Church. Most of the building is closed because it's a night time, but those 3 buildings is open".
If you ask "why did you make it miss-able?". Emm...simply because it's not the main story.
Side Comment :
- Dartz, why did you find that name interesting? You mention that name a lot of time in your review? hahahaha
- I'll think about that voice actor idea, especially about you become those black robed man...hahahaha
by the way, once more i'll say Thank you very very much.
I'm really thankful for this video review
Ultimate Decision
Thank you Kleron for your response. I'm really happy because you like this kind of concept that i'm thinking of. Yes, this game has so many possibilities, so i'll need many testers. But maybe it's not too soon, because i'm doing this game by myself.
Do you want to be a tester?
Do you want to be a tester?
Let's work on your game descriptions!
I got your point Lockez, but that sentence is just one from many others that actually somehow change my story a little. If i keep remove those part, it will become a short description and doesn't meet the submission rules.
By the way, thanks a lot for fixing the grammar in my description and not make any other changes, Lockez. I'll try submit this one and see if it's gonna pass the submission rules
By the way, thanks a lot for fixing the grammar in my description and not make any other changes, Lockez. I'll try submit this one and see if it's gonna pass the submission rules
Let's work on your game descriptions!
author=Marrend
Maybe...
Ultimate Decision is a classic RPG that tells the story of Dillon. His best friend, Dartz, dreamed of becoming a mercenary. However, when the town came under attack by black-robed men, Dartz was nowhere to be found. Nor was he found after the attack, and was presumed dead.
Despite being a pacifist at heart, Dillon decides to to take up his lost friend's cause. He would soon find that the life of a mercenary is filled with uncomfortable choices. However, a decision must be made. Which one shall be the Ultimate Decision?
The game description that you write somehow changes my storyline, Marrend. In my story, his best friend wasn't presumed dead, because he saw it with his own eyes, how his friend was taken. But, i don't want to explain that, because it will spoil the reader about the game. Please help me, because my description got denied again
Demo - Need Beta Testers
author=Jennaauthor=dillon_stefanyYes it is, I will mark you down as a Quest Tester.
hello Jenna, i'm interested to be your demo tester, especially the quest tester one. Is that spot still available?
Thank you so much. When will the demo released by the way?
Demo - Need Beta Testers
hello Jenna, i'm interested to be your demo tester, especially the quest tester one. Is that spot still available?
Oversight Review
Oversight Review
evileagles, actually i have tried your game, wandering in that space for a few minutes and then i find a coin. Suddenly, the screen turns red and some monster chasing me, i tried to run away, find a door to be teleported to somewhere. This process repeated for many times and i happen to find some coins in the way. When i got busted by that monsters my score is 400. I don't know if i miss any events out there, but i didn't get your message. You said earlier, that these app is not a game and shouldn't be treated as one. what i'm asking you is, how should we treat this app? Is this app actually tells about the story of your live?
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Thank you Marrend for your correction. But, i decided to change my description completely. I have decided to tell the introduction of my story rather than just tell about what kind of game my game is. Can you or someone else check if this description is riddled with grammatical errors too? Here is my new description :
Ultimate decision is a classic RPG game that tells a story about a young boy named Dillon. This young boy has a best friend named Dartz who has a dream since a kid to become a mercenary at the Guild. One day, for an unknown reason, a black robed man made a plot to take Dartz. That plan is successful, a tragedy occurred in the town, and Dartz has been taken away from Dillon.
Since that day, Dillon, that actually doesn't like fighting, renew his resolution.
He trains so hard to become a mercenary to take back his best friend. But he'll face many hardship that made him choose a lot decision in his life. Some wrong decision can ruin his plan to save his friend. Can you help him? Help this young boy to make the right decision and help his childhood friend
Ultimate decision is a classic RPG game that tells a story about a young boy named Dillon. This young boy has a best friend named Dartz who has a dream since a kid to become a mercenary at the Guild. One day, for an unknown reason, a black robed man made a plot to take Dartz. That plan is successful, a tragedy occurred in the town, and Dartz has been taken away from Dillon.
Since that day, Dillon, that actually doesn't like fighting, renew his resolution.
He trains so hard to become a mercenary to take back his best friend. But he'll face many hardship that made him choose a lot decision in his life. Some wrong decision can ruin his plan to save his friend. Can you help him? Help this young boy to make the right decision and help his childhood friend
Let's work on your game descriptions!
Ultimate decision is a classic RPG game. Usually, when we play RPG game, in the middle of playing, we may be faced with a lot of choice. For example, when we talking with a villager, sometimes there are villager that give us 2 or more choices to answer. Sometimes it can be important, but most of it is just useless choice that didn't affect anything in the game
But this game, Ultimate Decision, is a game that focus strongly in the storyline. Every choice that you choose when talking with NPC in this game will affect the story, even the unimportant one. So, for every people that will play this game, undoubtedly they will have different experience because this game has so much possibilities. There are 3 endings that u could see when finish this game, and which ending you will get, is decided since the first choice you made in this game. To play this game, you don't need to be perfectionist, just choose the choice that you like most and your future will be decided
Features:
- Has a deep and twisted story
- There are 3 possible endings you could get, but one of it is hard to get
- You can choose between become Good or Bad person
- ATB Battle Engine
- Random Encounter
- Job System (Class)
- 50+ Quests which each of them has its own uniqueness
- New Game ++ (with additional quest and secret)
- Tournament and Battle Arena (feature that always make RPG game exciting)
and etc.....
All, please help me, my game is denied because of my description. i don't know which part of my description that need to be changed. Please give me some input. i'll really appreciate it.
by the way, actually, my first language is not english.
thanks before
But this game, Ultimate Decision, is a game that focus strongly in the storyline. Every choice that you choose when talking with NPC in this game will affect the story, even the unimportant one. So, for every people that will play this game, undoubtedly they will have different experience because this game has so much possibilities. There are 3 endings that u could see when finish this game, and which ending you will get, is decided since the first choice you made in this game. To play this game, you don't need to be perfectionist, just choose the choice that you like most and your future will be decided
Features:
- Has a deep and twisted story
- There are 3 possible endings you could get, but one of it is hard to get
- You can choose between become Good or Bad person
- ATB Battle Engine
- Random Encounter
- Job System (Class)
- 50+ Quests which each of them has its own uniqueness
- New Game ++ (with additional quest and secret)
- Tournament and Battle Arena (feature that always make RPG game exciting)
and etc.....
All, please help me, my game is denied because of my description. i don't know which part of my description that need to be changed. Please give me some input. i'll really appreciate it.
by the way, actually, my first language is not english.
thanks before
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