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The one in the middle looks like he has a disease that makes his face fat or something. (Not trying to be mean) and the guy on the right is really skinny :o not sure if that was intended.
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author=Jparker1984
I understand this is your first game, but you should try touching up your mapping some. I don't usually care to much about peoples mapping skills, but there are lots of people that will harp a lot about bad mapping (not someones first game though.) I do like some of the concepts you got going on, the agility things is neat. Keep up the work and I hope you finish it. Not many people finish their first attempt at a game.
Yes, I know my mapping kind of sucks and I'm trying to work on it as we speak :)
Thank you for your helpful criticism. I hope I can make the game much better.
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author=chana
I don't know what you have in mind but I would start by making these lands bigger OR closer together; of course a little detail would help : make the forests, woods,rivers where there are falls, and maybe a precise (dot) location for the cities; the size of the names are too similar also and the colors, imo, not too great; my ideas, have fun, keep going.
Thank you.
By the way, other than the combat bug i am almost done with, what did you find in the game that needed improving, specifically.