SCREENSHOT SURVIVAL 20XX

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@Pizza: I agree with Sated on the trees. Color variation is nice.
Roden
who could forget dear ratboy
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Yeah, I'm thinking what I might do is play with the greens on the deciduous trees a bit, but still keep them green. The evergreens are fine, since they don't use any of the same tones as the ground.
I don't think any of the tree variations looked bad/wrong. I'd suggest you to decide upon the ones you like the most. The blue ones added a little to the foggy atmosphere though, IMO.
Roden
who could forget dear ratboy
3857
Oh, certainly not. They all have something going for them, but I want to strike just the right balance here.

Revisions:



This is feeling very solid to me now, with the grass details and the slightly greener trees. I'd say it's ready to go.
@Pizza: Yeah, the added detail really improves the map.
It looks a bit more vibrant too. It feels like the clock is
somewhere between 4-5 AM in the game. The sun is just arising.
Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
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that looks so good joseph
take my moeny
and soul
thanks frogge means a lot to me u can keep ur soul i have already drained it of its lifeforce
unity
You're magical to me.
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author=JosephSeraph
i am making a visual novel


If only they were playing volleyball... :P
good idea
this artstyle is good for animation!
@JJ: Game of the Year Decade. I like Titeena's left arm.


I was pretty happy with this guy's animation.
BizarreMonkey
I'll never change. "Me" is better than your opinion, dummy!
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author=JosephSeraph
i am making a visual novel
Excellent Joseph. You get an A!

For AMAZING!

@Sated: The map was made in interest of showing someone that no matter how bad the random dungeon generator is, worse can be done by human hands.

It says 'TRY ME M8!!!' in sand tiles but the message is largely lost due to what a hideous clusterfuck it is.
@Housekeeping: He's so cute! It looks great!



I've been going around trying to fix up my earlier maps, but I haven't gotten around to this one yet. Not sure how I want everything laid out.
Frogge
I wanna marry ALL the boys!! And Donna is a meanc
18995
I love those character sprites, so cute! Although, if the wall goes like that, shouldn't the carpet end one tile higher? Carpets don't go in shapes like that X3
For the map, it looks ok. A little empty, but nothing too bad.
I imagined it with the carpet going all the way around the building, but the wall in front covers it so you can't see. (Although now I realize that means the placement of the crates is sorta off.)
Ah, I hope I'm not "necro"-ing or whatever it is called. Please take my first map ever. Gosh, I hope I'm doing this correctly... Anyways, please help me if you see anything wrong.
http://rpgmaker.net/media/content/users/58844/locker/8b40f260e5f777b539d9155e4b79e56e.png