VOTE 4 CHARACTER DESIGN
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So, I'm making an RPG of the morality play Everyman. When I first thought up Everyman's design, I made the first design below, but a friend of mine brought up an interesting suggestion. Since Everyman is suppose to represent EVERY MAN, his race really isn't defined, so maybe he should wear a mask. So, I pondered that thought and made the design on the bottom. Now, with these two designs, I really don't know which to pick. I like both very much and I like the idea of giving him a mask, but I can't choose between the two. If you don't think they're good, I'll take more suggestions. Help :(
Design 1: III
Design 2:IIII IIII IIII
Design 1:
Design 2:
Design 1: III
Design 2:
Design 1:
Design 2:
The one on left kinda looks like a girl. Mostly because of the eyelashes. The posture and facial expression gives off that look of disgust I've only seen in a woman's face ^.^;
I like the one on the right (and not just because the other one is girl :)
I like the one on the right (and not just because the other one is girl :)
author=Link_2112
The one on left kinda looks like a girl. Mostly because of the eyelashes. The posture and facial expression gives off that look of disgust I've only seen in a woman's face ^.^;
Well, this game is gonna take place in the 1400s, and pretty much all the young men kinda looked like girls... that's what I think anyway...
The left is good (especially if it were a girl), but my vote goes to the right due to the mysterious nature.
I think the right fits better for what you're going for. VOTE2
Also, did you get the EVERYMAN thing from the Simpsons? After the comic book guy makes a comic called Everyman, where he can use any power from a comic book? or something.
But the real name of the hero was Avery Mann.
Just curious if that was your inspiration.
Also, did you get the EVERYMAN thing from the Simpsons? After the comic book guy makes a comic called Everyman, where he can use any power from a comic book? or something.
But the real name of the hero was Avery Mann.
Just curious if that was your inspiration.
So it's 0 for design 1 and 6 for design 2 (and 0 for any suggestions).
Please note that I'm also hosting this voting on another site.
Please note that I'm also hosting this voting on another site.
Hmmm...hard choice. I think you're a very talented artist for one thing (I suck bad at it so I always give props for that), but considering the name of the game...I'd go with #2. Hearing the title "Everyman" makes me think of an enigma, someone whose true identity is a mystery, and I think the mask really generates that effect. I suppose in a way, when I really think about your game's title it reminds me of a V for Vendetta-type thing. Dunno why, just does. I'm odd like that. ^.^
If you feel like the one with the mask is more relevant you should go with that one, I only suggest you to change the hair for something less spiky and more "natural", perhaps even a shorter version of the first one's hair.
btw, saw the logo in thescreenshot "Whatchu Workin' On?" topic. Pretty good. =)
btw, saw the logo in the
Thanks, Kisareth, and thank you, alterego :) I'm not great when it comes to logos or anything pertaining to lettering, so it took me a long time to make. That logo was the second one I made for the game ^_^
To tell you guys the truth, I kinda made the second one on the fly. I'll take up the few suggestions I received and make a new design (hopefully better).
To tell you guys the truth, I kinda made the second one on the fly. I'll take up the few suggestions I received and make a new design (hopefully better).
Voting for #2. Every man's face is different, after all.
The red don't cover anything. Besides, both designs have the same grieves, so putting the rest of the image would just take up space.
author=Karsuman
You should probably post the full images instead of covering it all in red like you did.
But #2.
author=AABattery
The red don't cover anything. Besides, both designs have the same grieves, so putting the rest of the image would just take up space.
Why do people automatically go on the defense? Just take his criticism/advice and either use it or don't.
To be different, I like #1. I can't imagine what use that face guard has for #2 other than to blind him. It seems silly.
author=prexusJust stating the truth. What? I can't be real? You want me to be fake and say "Thanks, your suggestion really helps!"
Why do people automatically go on the defense? Just take his criticism/advice and either use it or don't.
Besides, I set the red strokes to multiply so it wont get in the way. It's the white lettering that's in the way.
Also, that's no ordinary mask. It's MAGIC! WOOOOoooooooooOOOOOOO!
Okay, it is WHITE TEXT. There, you won the semantics debate.
I suggested that you remove them because they distract people from actually looking at the images. Especially since the images are just lineart.
I suggested that you remove them because they distract people from actually looking at the images. Especially since the images are just lineart.