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1st archived artistic content creation thread. For the active thread, click here.
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Ertad
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CloseDoes anyone knows how to make acondition where you need to choose acertain choice in acertain story? Imean its not from the same story but because of different info you get from choices her way of speaking or knowledge about you or yours about her will change.
Mute
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author=Ertad
Does anyone knows how to make acondition where you need to choose acertain choice in acertain story? Imean its not from the same story but because of different info you get from choices her way of speaking or knowledge about you or yours about her will change.
Let's move this to a PM. This should be in the technical thread.
Ertad
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author=MuteThanks for the help:)author=ErtadLet's move this to a PM. This should be in the technical thread.
Does anyone knows how to make acondition where you need to choose acertain choice in acertain story? Imean its not from the same story but because of different info you get from choices her way of speaking or knowledge about you or yours about her will change.
Next time Iwill make sure to use the technical thread.
Edit: Ijust wanted to say Iam planning on using Japanese honorifics in my stories but only the basic ones. The protagonist seem rude throwing them so Idont know if to leave him like that all the way or making my own version of the protagonist where he use them only in my stories. But Midori will use them anyway.
Another possible idea is to let the player choose if to use them or not before speaking to Midori in every scenario but the story will stay the same only her first reaction will change(So choose do you want arude protagonist or not)
author=Kevincalanor
-green dress image-
I'm kind thinking the bottom part should be smoother, but it's a pretty nice dress either way.
author=Kevincalanor
The color is probably temp, Marrend is better at it than I :p
Changing the color can't be that bad. Can it?
Ertad
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I have good news for today:)
The good news are my writing progress is much faster then I planned at first(completd 18 stories by now but most of them are very short total lines-464.)
And is it okay to express in this genre like in normal story telling feeling of laugh, cry, surprised, e.t.c in words instead of images?
Edit:can I give here daily reports? it seems like it will keep me on track:)
If it is spam then tell me:)
Iam not used to those terms even after reading the rules.
The good news are my writing progress is much faster then I planned at first(completd 18 stories by now but most of them are very short total lines-464.)
And is it okay to express in this genre like in normal story telling feeling of laugh, cry, surprised, e.t.c in words instead of images?
Edit:can I give here daily reports? it seems like it will keep me on track:)
If it is spam then tell me:)
Iam not used to those terms even after reading the rules.
author=Ertad
And is it okay to express in this genre like in normal story telling feeling of laugh, cry, surprised, e.t.c in words instead of images?
I've done it...
ID = 13
*giggles*
# Shoko: Silly person! Of course you can relay emotions through words!
...like that. Though, setting the pose that relays the emotion best is good story-telling.
author=Ertad
Can I give here daily reports? If it is spam then tell me.
Just be aware of the rule against double-posting. If you're only writing one or two sentences, I think it would be okay to stave off a report until you have more things to tell us, or have a release for us to test.
Ertad
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author=Marrendauthor=ErtadI've done it...
And is it okay to express in this genre like in normal story telling feeling of laugh, cry, surprised, e.t.c in words instead of images?
ID = 13
*giggles*
# Shoko: Silly person! Of course you can relay emotions through words!
...like that. Though, setting the pose that relays the emotion best is good story-telling.
author=Ertad
Can I give here daily reports? If it is spam then tell me.
Just be aware of the rule against double-posting. If you're only writing one or two sentences, I think it would be okay to stave off a report until you have more things to tell us, or have a release for us to test.
It is the first time Iplayed adating sim so Imeant in general:)
Of course Inoticed Shoko:) How can't I?(She stood out all right and became cuter as Iknew more about her.)
Then Iwill do so.
at max Iwill edit each day on the same post that way it is legal right?
It will take awhile before atest release with my writing skills in English take awhile to see mis spelling and glue words e.t.c :)
But I am getting better as Iwrite:)
And before Iforget can you take alook at the technical?
Ihad the last post so I edited to make it okay:)
author=Ertad
At max, I will edit each day on the same post. That way it is legal, right?
At some point, development isn't going to be so fast that you will feel a need to post stuff each day. Probably. However, as a start, I think this might be okay. I guess I have to see it in action to say more definitively.
author=Ertad
It will take a while before a test release with my writing skills. In English, it takes awhile to see misspellings, clue words, etc. However,, I am getting better as I write!
Asking for help on grammar/spelling is also a viable "artistic thread" post. I would think.
Ertad
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author=Marrendauthor=ErtadAt some point, development isn't going to be so fast that you will feel a need to post stuff each day. Probably. However, as a start, I think this might be okay. I guess I have to see it in action to say more definitively.
At max, I will edit each day on the same post. That way it is legal, right?
author=Ertad
It will take a while before a test release with my writing skills. In English, it takes awhile to see misspellings, clue words, etc. However,, I am getting better as I write!
Asking for help on grammar/spelling is also a viable "artistic thread" post. I would think.
Then It's here:)
Report of the day:
1. Fixed all grammar mistakes via pro writing site:)
2. Finished all possible scenarios for the second meeting place between Midori and Player:)
3. Added feeling to the lines like that:
*Annoyed* *Confused* After each statment of this type will come the lines of story.
Plans for tommorow:
At least finishing 2 scenarios for the third place of meeting:)
Here's an odd question: Where does <player> work? I mean, yeah, he's a janitor, but that's all we know. Unless I missed something huge.
Just humor me on this.
Just humor me on this.
Ertad
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author=Marrend
Here's an odd question: Where does <player> work? I mean, yeah, he's a janitor, but that's all we know. Unless I missed something huge.
Just humor me on this.
Idon't think that info was given.
I already tried to figure it out. And Ibeleive he works in the station.
lol It's only my love backround stories that works here though:)
Render
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author=Kevincalanor
A char that influences another one route :D
Wonder how it will work, can't help but expect serious mess if you try to route both of them x3 (I planned that with the Yamisaki sisters, but I've ended aborting Alessa route)
To avoid that certain mess you are talking about I've outlined the entire route (I'm nearly halfway done outlining) so everything is organized. It makes writing so much easier. However in the story, to be specific, Fujikos' route kind of is a powerhouse for Megumis'. You have to get a certain point in Fujikos' route (this part does not require the like/love phase) and then it kind of splits. You keep going and get Fujikos' ending, or Megumis'. Or you can achieve both.
Also, to Marrend & Ertad I saw you messages on the technical thread regarding to what the schools name is. I remember when Miki was announcing she said it, so I looked it up. It's Hayauchi High. I think that's the only time it's mentioned also. o.o
EDIT:
For one of the later stories I have here is Branch C of Miki/Keika/Player's conversation. I made a line where the player kind of leaves Miki speechless, I was wondering if it sounded the player or not because I've been trying to make this story sound like the original characters, so I'd like opinions on this.~
BRANCH C
ID = 1
Anyways, is there a Hajime in your class <player>?
ID = 0
Not that I know of. Why?
ID = 1
FRIENDLY
I knew he didn't, he looked too nice to be in your class.
ID = 2
Ouch.
ID = 0
Kind of like how Megumi looks too nice to be in yours?
ID = 2
OTHER1
ID = 1
OTHER1
...
ID = 0
I'll see you guys later, I'm going to class.
ID = 1
ERASE RIGHT
ID = 2
ERASE LEFT
ID = 0
(...)
(You don't see that happening often. And by "that," I mean Miki speechless.)
author=Render
Also to Marrend & Ertad I saw you messages on the technical thread regarding to what the schools name is. I remember when Miki was announcing she said it, so I looked it up. It's Hayauchi High. I think that's the only time it's mentioned also. o.o
I found the line you're referring to in game_stories_2.txt, STORY 28. Thanks for the assist, Render!
*Edit:
Maybe his last line can be...
(Miki? Speechless? Whoa! Now <b>there's</b> something you don't see everyday!)
Ertad
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I havent seen that line before:)
Thanks:)
On another note if the line is
(Miki? Speechless? Whoa! Now <b>there's</b> something you don't see everyday!)
Then it sounds right:)
Player will tease Miki if he can but will not like to give info that can show aweak point for her to use:)
They both can be apain Player in most cases when choosing the wrong words:)
By the way I never tried to mimic original Player or another character...
So you will get anew type of player when I am done (And as the storyteller Iused words to describe Player feelings too(Exept on choices)
Thanks:)
On another note if the line is
(Miki? Speechless? Whoa! Now <b>there's</b> something you don't see everyday!)
Then it sounds right:)
Player will tease Miki if he can but will not like to give info that can show aweak point for her to use:)
They both can be apain Player in most cases when choosing the wrong words:)
By the way I never tried to mimic original Player or another character...
So you will get anew type of player when I am done (And as the storyteller Iused words to describe Player feelings too(Exept on choices)
Render
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Ugh, also, I'm rewriting the first part of branch C there because I just reread it, and the grammar is just ew. Also Marrend, I took your suggestion and changed it just a little. It definitely makes it sound better.
And just to note, my progress so far is great! I wrote seven full stories for Megumis' route! Definitely happy with progress so far. Expect beta in the next month! :D
No problem. ~
And just to note, my progress so far is great! I wrote seven full stories for Megumis' route! Definitely happy with progress so far. Expect beta in the next month! :D
author=Marrend
I found the line you're referring to in game_stories_2.txt, STORY 28. Thanks for the assist, Render!
No problem. ~
Kevincalanor
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author=Render
To avoid that certain mess you are talking about I've outlined the entire route (I'm nearly halfway done outlining) so everything is organized. It makes writing so much easier. However in the story, to be specific, Fujikos' route kind of is a powerhouse for Megumis'. You have to get a certain point in Fujikos' route (this part does not require the like/love phase) and then it kind of splits. You keep going and get Fujikos' ending, or Megumis'. Or you can achieve both.
I was talking about their reactions when they find out that player was routing both, like the cross-events when routing both Kaneshiro sisters. ;p
The split being before like state sounds good, as you'll not have to route both to achieve Megumi's ending.
Mute
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author=Kevincalanor
The split being before like state sounds good, as you'll not have to route both to achieve Megumi's ending.And they will not throw food at each other.
But seeing two girls get all angry with each other can be dramatic and entertaining. And also a little depressing, depending on the outcome..
author=Ertadauthor=MarrendI don't think that info was given.
Here's an odd question: Where does <player> work? I mean, yeah, he's a janitor, but that's all we know. Unless I missed something huge.
Just humor me on this.
I already tried to figure it out. And I believe he works in the station.
lol It's only my love background stories that works here though:)
Hrm. Well, I'm pretty sure it would have to be a public bathroom, considering the size of the thing. Also, what he says about delinquents would suggest that the place is available more often than not. The station would be a decent, logical choice.
Damn. That sorta screws me up.
Ertad
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author=Marrendauthor=ErtadHrm. Well, I'm pretty sure it would have to be a public bathroom, considering the size of the thing. Also, what he says about delinquents would suggest that the place is available more often than not. The station would be a decent, logical choice.author=MarrendI don't think that info was given.
Here's an odd question: Where does <player> work? I mean, yeah, he's a janitor, but that's all we know. Unless I missed something huge.
Just humor me on this.
I already tried to figure it out. And I believe he works in the station.
lol It's only my love background stories that works here though:)
Damn. That sorta screws me up.
Lol thats what Ilove about backround stories:)
Report of the day:
Completed objective-2 scenarios for 3rd place of meeting:)
And finished adding music to all scenarios done(used the music from built in characters.)
Objective for tommorow:
Completing as many scenarios as possible for 3rd place of meeting:)
Okay, it's time. Things are very sporadic about this route, but I would to re-INTRODUCE somebody.
Remember Kwabara Emiko? Of course not. Nobody played her. Well, I'm trying to fix that. First-and-foremost by giving her graphics that I won't feel ashamed of sharing. Second, by giving her a storyline that might actually be cool. Probably.
What I have of the re-imagined route can be found here. Please download and discuss.
Remember Kwabara Emiko? Of course not. Nobody played her. Well, I'm trying to fix that. First-and-foremost by giving her graphics that I won't feel ashamed of sharing. Second, by giving her a storyline that might actually be cool. Probably.
What I have of the re-imagined route can be found here. Please download and discuss.
