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Cutscene Preview 3 (WARNING!!! May offend certain individuals, I never meant to offend certain individuals)

You've been warned.

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Liberty
RTP Princess
24266
03/07/2019 12:00 AM
Maybe mentioning what exactly might be triggering to people would be a good idea instead of a vague omg you might be offended?

For those wondering:
- mentions of rape
- lying about rape
- slight body horror (eye replacement)
visitorsfromdreams
3530
03/07/2019 12:45 AM
Oh jeez, the way rape is brought up and spoken about in this clip is pretty poorly handled and bad enough on its own, but the issue is really compounded by how awful the writing is surrounding it is. It takes it from just being an uncomfortable topic to an uncomfortable topic handled in an incredibly poor and distasteful way.

This really feels like someone trying to tell a story that they dont have the writing experience or understanding to actually tell.

Sorry.
pikachu 2127
975
03/08/2019 05:00 AM
author=Liberty
Maybe mentioning what exactly might be triggering to people would be a good idea instead of a vague omg you might be offended?

For those wondering:
- mentions of rape
- lying about rape
- slight body horror (eye replacement)

Ah... Kind of trying to figure out how to actually mention it in my own words. But yeah, about those three.

author=visitorsfromdreams
Oh jeez, the way rape is brought up and spoken about in this clip is pretty poorly handled and bad enough on its own, but the issue is really compounded by how awful the writing is surrounding it is. It takes it from just being an uncomfortable topic to an uncomfortable topic handled in an incredibly poor and distasteful way.

This really feels like someone trying to tell a story that they dont have the writing experience or understanding to actually tell.

Sorry.

I'm actually rusty in the story writing department. Though I'll probably replace the dialogue to more of a flash back while I'm working on it. For now my focus is to salvage what I can after I changed Battlesystem scripts, so this was a quick draft.
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