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Been a bit quiet, hasn't it?

Updates are a bit on the slow side, as I've been running through the first 8 or so hours of Tristian and really analysing it ( story/plot wise, maybe even battle balancing ). And I realised something.

I can do so much better.

If you wondering how on earth I managed to make an 8 hour + game in less than a year, well. Most of the stuff I wrote now seems a mite rushed, if a tad forced. While I'm happy with the characters themselves, I realise I can do a far better job in relation to the villians and the plot itself.

This game should be plot-driven ( it is currently, but can be better ).

I was seriously thinking of everhauling the plot and rewriting it to paint a better picture of Eridanus' world. I feel the world-building and lore is somewhat lacking compared to Enelysion, where it was almost-ever present. On the other hand, the pacing of the latter is extremely slow ( things only start kicking into high-gear around the 2 hour mark >< ). I was thinking of combining the pacing of Tristian with Enelysion's rich world-building ( hint: the continents of Tairngire and Eridanus are part of the same world, with Tristian taking place two years after the events of Enelysion ). Then I'd at least have a solid base to work from, not to mention I can insert dozens of easter eggs for those who have played through Vol I of EHD. Easter Eggs are neat. And tasty.

I also need to give Tristian an iron-clad reason for hating General Camus and Disma, though I suppose Dante could complicate and hinder things due to his past relationship with one of the two...

And I really don't want Ianna to leave the party after only 1.5 hours of playtime. ;_;


Isn't she just lovely? Seriously, I just wanna hug her. She's my favourite edit so far.

I really love her personality at the moment ( vulnerable and emotional with a huge tendency towards forgiveness, even towards her enemies. Typical Pisces. I freakin' love writing Pisceans; Patrick is one as well. The make such ADORABLE Woobies ), but also sets a base for some strong character development. Tristian doesn't take too well to that particular characteristic of Ianna ( Stoic, emotionless Capricorn. I wrote a really great scene between them with regards to that. Hell, any scene with TriAnna gives me a TON of feels ).


Regarding portraits. x1000 times better now. Tristian really needs to smile more... Though I don't blame her, given what happened.

So yeah, to quit my rambling ( and end off my 131st blog post 0_o ), I want to do a rewrite of Tristian. The final product probably will be even better than what you've played before. =)

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Yeah, usually I would say something encouraging in order to get you from stop re-writing the entire plot and dialogue sequences because they’re just fine and just focus on getting this done, but I, too, have done this on many different occasions with some of the stories that I’ve written thus far. It just seems that you’re never completely satisfied with something until you’re completely satisfied. Besides, the more re-writes you do, the more the plot stays true to form and actually is coherent throughout. So in the long run, it’s a good thing. So I don’t mind you taking some more time to really make this game the best that you can get it to be.

And the new Ianna looks just AMAZING! This is the best of the new portraits that you’ve done by far! Far better than her original look by a country mile. No wonder you’re so proud of yourself. I would be too if I could draw just as good as this. :)

Actually, the new portraits in action look pretty good. I was wrong about the whole thing; they actually really look good. Even the new Dante looks much better than his original counterpart.

- Keep it up!

(The shareholders are watching...)
I should have asked earlier, but how are you making such awesome portraits? The old ones were obvious FE edits, but these are something else altogether. How do you do it?
Ah yes, as an obsesive man I know how it feels to re-write the same scenes several times. I just can't let it be until I'm a 100% satisfied with the dialogue and every single sentence is perfect but I think it's for the best in the end so it's not a bad thing. Yeah, it takes more time and you torture yourself(or at least that's how I live it) but in the end it's better.

Also, great improvement in the portraits o_o
@Dy: Lots of patience. XD


Admit it, Tristian. Laine will always be more popular than you. :D Yes, she really does join the struggle. janussenpre gave me the idea. So expect Laine and her trio to show up. ^^

Just had an amazing brainwave with regards to both games as well. It will enable me to wrap up Enelysion sooner than expected as well.
author=yuna21
Yes, she really does join the struggle. So expect Laine and her trio to show up. ^^


So, wait, does this mean you actually get to play as Laine and co. in Tristian or does she, along the rest of her ragtag crew there just to join the resistance? I thought that Laine was originally just going to be a coliseum battle?

Also, how the hell did Laine get that huge scar across her face?

(Maybe it had something to do with Siglud.)

Laine always had a scar. It's still visible in her original artwork. And I might make the player choose between the two girls ( Tristian and co, or Laine and co. to lead different resistances. ). Laine no longer appears in the Coliseum, since I changed the timeline. :D
author=yuna21
So expect Laine and her trio to show up.


Hmmm. That's gonna be a lot of badassery going on there.
A world of badassery awaits. XD But Laine won't steal the show. Despite her popularity among you guys, she already had one game to herself; she won't pull an Ike like in Radiant Dawn ( Fire Emblem 10, for those of you who don't know, the former had a whole game to himself in Path of Radiance, the prequel ), where the game should have belonged to Miciaiah, but he steals the show anyway... they're both terrible MCs in any case ).

The rewrite is going well, too. Ianna doesn't leave the party anymore. ^^ So naturally, I've had to restructure the plot, but it already reads a lot better. And I really didn't want to make her another damsel in distress, but rather, a naive young girl who is still unused to the ways of war and gradually has to find the strength to face her opposition ( and parents' murderer ) head on.
Aw, I would've loved to have experienced the reveal of Laine and co's presence in the game without prior knowledge. It definitely would've been a pretty cool "holy shit!" moment. Oh well.
Hey, bp. Long time no see. XD

It is a rather bad habit of mine. I can never keep exciting/intriguing information to myself. I need to share it or I'll burst. ^^ But hey, I'll at least keep the portraits of FE-RD styled Siggy, Cil and Pat to myself, lol.
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