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orig, i'm sad to hear you didn't enjoy his dark materials. that's gotta be one of my favourite series'.
Top 3 things in life
ugh..exercise...
author=Heynowrcp link=topic=4044.msg82387#msg82387 date=1245799397author=boobledeeboo link=topic=4044.msg82339#msg82339 date=1245769843
Ahahaha, but then instead of being paranoid about people looking at me, i'd be paranoid about my safety.
@suzuricho, heck yeah! gimme some skin(hi5)...virtually.
XD
lol aw you poor thing..youll be fine! just carry some mace! i see people in my neighborhood walking with sticks..I dont know if its some new exercise or if they are planning on fighting off an assailant!
you could always just carry a stick with you too :)
water bottle in one hand, mace in the other....
"Arena" A Snow-Punk, Sci-Fi, Gladiator Story
Very cool way to start a story. I'm already wanting to read more :) I'm curious to find out all that was left unsaid! How long do you plan to make this?
The only thing I have to mention is that you switched tenses in a couple of parts. I'm a huge grammar freak, so I couldn't help but notice (At "A couple of quick yanks... " and "It takes a minute..."). There is also a couple of places to keep an eye on like using "She's" instead of "She". I know this is irrelevant to the writing, but there is nothing worse than being distracted from a story by grammar or type errors.
I really liked your descriptions and similes "Dug into my skin like a shovel" was awesomely gross.
Yeah, great work, I look forward to the rest :)
The only thing I have to mention is that you switched tenses in a couple of parts. I'm a huge grammar freak, so I couldn't help but notice (At "A couple of quick yanks... " and "It takes a minute..."). There is also a couple of places to keep an eye on like using "She's" instead of "She". I know this is irrelevant to the writing, but there is nothing worse than being distracted from a story by grammar or type errors.
I really liked your descriptions and similes "Dug into my skin like a shovel" was awesomely gross.
Yeah, great work, I look forward to the rest :)
Why Did The Chicken Cross The Road?
Keyboard Speed (WPM)
Your speed was: 85wpm.
Congratulations! You made no mistakes, practice does make perfect.
This was so annoying though. What was with the terrible grammar!? Seriously, I can't type like this!! EUGH!
Congratulations! You made no mistakes, practice does make perfect.
This was so annoying though. What was with the terrible grammar!? Seriously, I can't type like this!! EUGH!
Wow, this website is actually alive
Living Spaces.
author=Blitzen link=topic=3964.msg79599#msg79599 date=1244679319
Living with a girl is the best. Its just really good for our disposition if you are best friends and also sweethearts, home becomes a place of respite and good feelings, and you become closer by sharing such a big part of your existence with each other. I really liked it. I miss it. :)
This can also go horribly wrong...
I would suggest living on your own first (especially since it's your first time living away from family). Have her visit as much as you want. If she is practicaly living there after a while, then agree to do it. You might find you'll want your space after a bit...
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Freedom... Part II
author=GameOverGames Productions link=topic=3966.msg79430#msg79430 date=1244595179
Yet another brilliant way to make money with useless software. The iAmRich or whatever that $100 App for the iPhone that did nothing was is still the best in my opinion though.
Well, it is free. It would be pretty ironic for a program called FREEDOM to cost money lol. They do ask for donations, this is to your own descrepency though, so you can't really complain about this.
The app is $1000, and yes, that was ridiculous.
I know, I do need self-control. Come on though, try working on your computer for like 2 hours and not using the internet AT ALL. It's harder than you think!