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Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~
Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~
Finished content
... I can't argue with that. In truth I didn't so much touch her files since I asked Nekochi for help, due to RL issues. In other words, I've been stagnating for two months, and I know I won't have time to work on it up until... yeah, three days from now, maybe not even after that. I'm sorry. Should I delete that part of the post then? T-T
Finished content
I just call the Player 'Ferd' for convinience. Tell you what, let us from this point forward call him Kazuhiko Ferdinand, Ferd for short, who's weapon of choice is the lance! How is that?
And I'm SO in.
"Kirinashi Kyouki's name is almost as famous around school as Shihoko's, although for different reasons. They say she broke every rule there is, and is barking mad. Not a good memo. Of course, nobody told me anything about her before it was too late. Now that we've met, I can tell she's not so bad, but still bad enough to the point where no one can take a step near her without risking a heart attack. Kyouki can turn a normal day into a comedy show in a moment's notice, and it's honestly hard to tell when she does so by accident and when on purpose. I'd bet she doesn't bother to think about what she's doing most of the time, either."
And I'm SO in.
"Kirinashi Kyouki's name is almost as famous around school as Shihoko's, although for different reasons. They say she broke every rule there is, and is barking mad. Not a good memo. Of course, nobody told me anything about her before it was too late. Now that we've met, I can tell she's not so bad, but still bad enough to the point where no one can take a step near her without risking a heart attack. Kyouki can turn a normal day into a comedy show in a moment's notice, and it's honestly hard to tell when she does so by accident and when on purpose. I'd bet she doesn't bother to think about what she's doing most of the time, either."
author=NekochiAs the bisexual representative, I have to agree with you.
Also, as the female representative for this game, I'd buy whatever that delivery boy was selling. ;)
author=MarrendThese... suspiciously sound less like the Player and more like you and damn I'm criticizing again just shoot me in the face already>.>
"So, there's this third-year transfer student called Mitusya Masako, right? She's super-smart. She certainly has this tendency to spout stuff in a way that I just don't understand. Then there's the way she seems to know what people are thinking. It's really freaky! Though, there are times when she seems distracted by something. I wonder what it could be?"
"I can't get Terakado Shoko to talk. On that point, has anyone gotten her to talk? Is she a mute? I don't know. All I know is that there seems to be some aura of sadness around her."
Content creation (technical)
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=Nekochi
By the way Dozen, do you still want me to look at Kyouki? If you do, can you please send me the files? I'd love to look at them now that I have time to do so.
I know I promised, but now I'm the one who ain't got time for no thing. Sorry Nekochi, I hope we'll get to it eventually.
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
@Marrend This event is comedic gold in itself. The player should talk/think more depending on what's going on exactly and act more like himself, but I can see this making me smile all day, had I encountered it in-game:)
On that, what IS he doing? Helping Masako? Overhearing? I can't tell...
And, for the love of gods, the hell is Masako's bonus on Sense Motive?
On that, what IS he doing? Helping Masako? Overhearing? I can't tell...
And, for the love of gods, the hell is Masako's bonus on Sense Motive?
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
author=Marrend
the usual line for Mayu offering some of her baking is "God, I suck at cooking!" Her skill in cooking is not defined beyond that, so I'm not sure how plausible this event actually is.
Yeah, I guessed that could be confusing. I tried to make clear she only did good this one time because it was a 'hot dish'.
author=MarrendThis... makes me feel all fuzzy inside :) Thank you.
I really like this. What I like about it the most is the reference to hot foods, and fire. It feels like the kind of reference I might make myself. How the story concludes with Mayu "saving face" in light of her true feelings is also something I admire with this story.
I've done a few fixes to it - I think it's ready for implementation. Off for the next one!
Content creation (artistic, 1st archive)
Gonna check both out soon, Triad!:)
Also! I feel kind of bad playing the big guy when I still haven't showed up with anything, so I'll put effort into smaller projects. Such as the Uchioniko Expansion! What do you think of this, Marrend? Your mallet or whatzit wacked it at me today:
STORY 16
CONDITION = 12 LOVE
CONDITION = 5 DONE
PLACE = Courtyard
ID = 12
Yo, <player>.
SHOW CENTER
ID = 0
Hi yourself. Looking for me?
ID = 12
DISLIKE
You wish, you per-
NEUTRAL
:sigh: Sorry, reflex. I am. <b>This</b> time.
ID = 0
That's a pleasant suprise.
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
Savor it. Ya gonna be like that, it won't happen again.
ID = 0
Heh, okay. What would you like?
ID = 12
NEUTRAL
To give you this.
ID = 0
(Mayu hands me what looks like... a lunchbox?!)
You're giving me lunch?!
(This is just about the last thing I'd expect from Mayu. Or anyone.)
ID = 12
Well, duh. You're my partner. I gotta keep you in shape if we want to win matches.
And I bet you punk don't pay attention to your diet. This might taste worse than the crap your throat usually has to put up with, but it's good for you.
ID = 0
(I wonder if this really is her reason...)
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
So? Will you take the damn thing or should I stand here and wait for your excellency?
ID = 0
Uh, right!
(Calm down, <player>. Just be thankful nobody's staring at the two of you yet.)
(I take the box from her and open it. It feels warm in my hand. I can't tell kind of food's in it, but it smells nice.)
But... You could have just given me a recipe or something. Why cook for me?
...
ID = 0
...
ID = 12
LOVE
Ehm...
NEUTRAL
'Cuz.
ID = 0
'Cuz why?
ID = 12
DISLIKE
'Cuz 'If you won't shut up and try it I'll shove it down yer big mouth and pull it out of your ass'!
UNFRIENDLY
ID = 0
Fine, fine.
(I take a bite. It seems like some sort of mea-)
MUSIC = none
(... This. This food.)
ID = 12
What? What the hell is with that stupid face of yours? It looks more retarded than usual.
NEUTRAL
ID = 0
MUSIC = happy
...This... This stuff is fantastic! When did you learn to cook so well?
ID = 12
You mess with me? I'm the worst this side of Osaka!
ID = 0
No, I mean it! I wish my Mom cooked food half this tasty!
(I talk with my mouth half full. Not that I can help it. I can't have enough of Mayu's masterpiece.)
ID = 12
LOVE
Um, well, I, I'm really bad at it most of the time, but I, uhh, have a thing for, hrm, well, the hot stuff.
ID = 0
The hot stuff?
ID = 12
Yeah, the hot stuff. Like, hot dishes. You've got to use fire and everything. That might be why this turned out good.
# References!
If, if it is, I mean. It really is?
ID = 0
It really is.
ID = 12
Nah, you're just pulling one over me! Bet even you could do better with your eyes closed.
ID = 0
Me? As if! I would't be able to prepare anything short of a sandwich to save my life.
ID = 12
Then...
# This would be the part where the girl offers the boy to cook for him every day, but since Mayu realizes that she's... khm... Mayu, and who's she talking to, she twists it a wee bit.
NEUTRAL
...
ID = 0
What is it?
ID = 12
...
DISLIKE
MUSIC = Uchioniko/sots-mio.mp3
If you can't cook, then the hell should I hand out recipes to you, you moron?!
ID = 0
Wh-
ID = 12
Don't you dare say anything, idiot!
UNFRIENDLY
Ya think you're smart? Well I tell you what! If you like my meals so much, then you can be damn cheery about it, because from now on, you will eat the stuff <b>I</b> made every day. Or <i>Else<i>.
ID = 0
Okay, okay! I will!
ID = 12
Right you will.
NEUTRAL
So, ehm...
See ya.
ERASE CENTER
ID = 0
...
(This could be the best deal I've ever been intimidated into.)
Also! I feel kind of bad playing the big guy when I still haven't showed up with anything, so I'll put effort into smaller projects. Such as the Uchioniko Expansion! What do you think of this, Marrend? Your mallet or whatzit wacked it at me today:
STORY 16
CONDITION = 12 LOVE
CONDITION = 5 DONE
PLACE = Courtyard
ID = 12
Yo, <player>.
SHOW CENTER
ID = 0
Hi yourself. Looking for me?
ID = 12
DISLIKE
You wish, you per-
NEUTRAL
:sigh: Sorry, reflex. I am. <b>This</b> time.
ID = 0
That's a pleasant suprise.
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
Savor it. Ya gonna be like that, it won't happen again.
ID = 0
Heh, okay. What would you like?
ID = 12
NEUTRAL
To give you this.
ID = 0
(Mayu hands me what looks like... a lunchbox?!)
You're giving me lunch?!
(This is just about the last thing I'd expect from Mayu. Or anyone.)
ID = 12
Well, duh. You're my partner. I gotta keep you in shape if we want to win matches.
And I bet you punk don't pay attention to your diet. This might taste worse than the crap your throat usually has to put up with, but it's good for you.
ID = 0
(I wonder if this really is her reason...)
ID = 12
UNFRIENDLY
So? Will you take the damn thing or should I stand here and wait for your excellency?
ID = 0
Uh, right!
(Calm down, <player>. Just be thankful nobody's staring at the two of you yet.)
(I take the box from her and open it. It feels warm in my hand. I can't tell kind of food's in it, but it smells nice.)
But... You could have just given me a recipe or something. Why cook for me?
...
ID = 0
...
ID = 12
LOVE
Ehm...
NEUTRAL
'Cuz.
ID = 0
'Cuz why?
ID = 12
DISLIKE
'Cuz 'If you won't shut up and try it I'll shove it down yer big mouth and pull it out of your ass'!
UNFRIENDLY
ID = 0
Fine, fine.
(I take a bite. It seems like some sort of mea-)
MUSIC = none
(... This. This food.)
ID = 12
What? What the hell is with that stupid face of yours? It looks more retarded than usual.
NEUTRAL
ID = 0
MUSIC = happy
...This... This stuff is fantastic! When did you learn to cook so well?
ID = 12
You mess with me? I'm the worst this side of Osaka!
ID = 0
No, I mean it! I wish my Mom cooked food half this tasty!
(I talk with my mouth half full. Not that I can help it. I can't have enough of Mayu's masterpiece.)
ID = 12
LOVE
Um, well, I, I'm really bad at it most of the time, but I, uhh, have a thing for, hrm, well, the hot stuff.
ID = 0
The hot stuff?
ID = 12
Yeah, the hot stuff. Like, hot dishes. You've got to use fire and everything. That might be why this turned out good.
# References!
If, if it is, I mean. It really is?
ID = 0
It really is.
ID = 12
Nah, you're just pulling one over me! Bet even you could do better with your eyes closed.
ID = 0
Me? As if! I would't be able to prepare anything short of a sandwich to save my life.
ID = 12
Then...
# This would be the part where the girl offers the boy to cook for him every day, but since Mayu realizes that she's... khm... Mayu, and who's she talking to, she twists it a wee bit.
NEUTRAL
...
ID = 0
What is it?
ID = 12
...
DISLIKE
MUSIC = Uchioniko/sots-mio.mp3
If you can't cook, then the hell should I hand out recipes to you, you moron?!
ID = 0
Wh-
ID = 12
Don't you dare say anything, idiot!
UNFRIENDLY
Ya think you're smart? Well I tell you what! If you like my meals so much, then you can be damn cheery about it, because from now on, you will eat the stuff <b>I</b> made every day. Or <i>Else<i>.
ID = 0
Okay, okay! I will!
ID = 12
Right you will.
NEUTRAL
So, ehm...
See ya.
ERASE CENTER
ID = 0
...
(This could be the best deal I've ever been intimidated into.)
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