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Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~

author=flowerthief
Well, better than with a knife! (here I was picturing Dozen as a yandere...)

...I do kind of keep one... under my pillow...*scared of all too fitting analogy*

And how do you picture me? It's not like you've seen me before. What do you think I look like? Guess!:D

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Awesome. Kudos to you, sir. *applies Stamp of Approval*

Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~

author=MountainEyes
How on earth didja do that?
...with my fist. Silly questions...

Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~

Hey, people. It is to the betterment of us that inform you of the fact I managed to seriously injure someone. Again. -.-'
So I might have less time to work on my projects and fullfill my duties here if I end up being treated, hospitalized or locked down(which, as it turns out, has become my usual, everyday business policy here). I will of course try my best to perform both to the best degree possible. Sorry for your trouble!T-T

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author=MountainEyes
As I said before, it's only a draft, so it's not entirely finished.

Oh. I didn't catch that. I'm so sorry. *embarassed T-T*

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author=MountainEyes
Yeah, I need to rework the blush and pop in some highlights, for certain.
I second that. It's, Uhh... a little creepy, to be honest. I'm sure we can work something out that hasn't slipped into the Uncanny Valley - regarding the eyes on both, the blush(what was wrong with the original?) and the hellholeopen mouth mostly, but the toning also got lost somehow in the process of coloring her skin, and the latter as well as the edges of her body are in... eerie... contrast with her clothes' shades. It's the equalient of her popping out of a cartoon and dressing into real clothes. Neither of these would be problems if not for this mix; there is nothing bad with your work in itself, it's the combination of your artstyle and the standard.
What program or technique did you use? I had no such problems when I recoloured Kyouki's skin.

author=Marrend
*Edit: The head-tilt you've got is pretty sweet, though!
Also seconded.

I especially like that half-smile in the first picture, gives her character.

author=MountainEyes
Actually, I hadn't thought about an arranged marriage, but that would actually fill in a bit of a gap I was having problems with in her case. Wow, awesome, I've got a new idea now!

DRAMA! Nice.

Heartache 101 ~Sour into Sweet~

author=MountainEyes
I might just do that once I actually move beyond character sketches and figure out a proper theme. I'm a fairly decent writer and can spin out a story in no time, but when it comes to the tedious work to flesh the character out, I'm very much a novice. ^^;
So might take me a little while.


... You are officially my favourite writer. Keep it up!:)

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Aww, you guys are so nice to me^^

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author=flowerthief
There are tutorials you can find out there for how to make manga-style CGs so that you get clean line art, properly colored layers, etc. I've been trying to learn it, too, but I think I need to invest in a tablet.

Thanks, but the lack of skills is not the problem. I'm not worried I can't draw properly. I'm worried I didn't draw properly and when they see my work nobody will believe I can so then people will frown upon it, which makes me doubt myself, thus eventually even I will think I can't draw properly and also I will think everybody hates me due to the fact they think I suck at drawing.
Does... does this make sense to you?-.-'

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