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Suiren
Thank you for your thought =) The dialogue received an inprovements with the latest upload, for the other things we'll work on, after all it's just a demo that cover around... 20% of the total game? XD Still a lot to do.
Just a thing...
Just a thing...
i love the avatars! i assume the dev got them from somewhere.
Absolutely not we're illustrators so avatars and cg are 100% ours ;)
Absolutely not we're illustrators so avatars and cg are 100% ours ;)
Pikasprey plays Suiren DEMO
Aww I didn't know that there's this option to upload the video here, thank you for share here your let's play! Can't wait to see the second part!
Demo version updated!
Yeah I could imagine don't worry =) We fixed the problem that showed up in your videoby the way, thanks again! =)
Suiren
author=FlareBlitzed
With your permission, I would love to perform a Let's play on your game! :D (P.S Your avatar is menacing! :))
Sure!! =D I've just added a new version of the demo, you can do a let's play on that =) let me know when the video is out, I love to see the various let's play!
Suiren
author=Ghos7Soldier
I actually did a lets play of it and will put it up if that's alright. I thoroughly enjoyed the demo, roughly a 15-30 minute game. I will mention that it is indeed full of grammatical errors from the above mentioned. Even reading it I get flustered over the words when speaking. It's obvious in the video but that's the only real thing I would dock points for. Otherwise, the setting, gameplay, User interface/settings, are really good. The custom sprites and etc. used were very good.
I am looking forward to the full release, I want to hold off on doing any actual reviewing because of the fact that it's only a demo and I can't really feel obliged to do a review for not even half a game.
These are my thoughts, hope you continue to work on the game. =)
Of course it's all right for a let's play, I really want that this game have a good diffusion, it's important for us to have support it give us the strenght to continue the game =) As I said I'm really sorry for the grammar error it's difficult without a real native speaker, fortunally the launch of the demo give us some kind guys that will do the proofreading for the complete release, so we'll work hard to do a game with proper grammar =D
It wasn't on our programs, but maybe if there will be other requests for video, we'll upload even a corrected demo, this is the first time that we have so much video requests so we're not prepared XD
Let me know when your let's play video is out!
Suiren
Men, this will be long! XD
So, let's begin with Dragnfly:
Thank you! Actually we create an hypotetical art gallery of 9 elements just to put a randomic number, in truth the final version of the game will have surely more than 9 images ^^
We tried even with a different resolution of the image but zooming the results was everytime the same -.- Thank you for your help, Demon will try to just remove the zoom option before, if this results immossible I'll ask to you for help 'cause zoomed image are indeed very awful <.<
Than you!! I hope to not disappoint you!
Pikasprey:
Are you kidding me? Sure, it would be a honor! =D Let me know when you release it!
HikiNeet:
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. You're super fast and kind, I can't say anything else except if you want to help us with the correction of the complete release too ='D
Meh, I did a mess, I'm no good with the chat codes >.< need to study them a bit XD
So, let's begin with Dragnfly:
author=DragnflyThe art and the designs of the four friends look good. I found 2 CGs in the demo and there's still plenty of slots for more on the gallery. That's really impressive.
Thank you! Actually we create an hypotetical art gallery of 9 elements just to put a randomic number, in truth the final version of the game will have surely more than 9 images ^^
author=DragnflyThe gallery is always appreciated but zoomed images look terrible for me. It's not going to zoom well on any modern resolution. I got around this problem with one of my projects but it's a lot of work. Let me know if you're interested and I'll try to explain in mail. Of course this might not even be a problem if it's just happening to me.
We tried even with a different resolution of the image but zooming the results was everytime the same -.- Thank you for your help, Demon will try to just remove the zoom option before, if this results immossible I'll ask to you for help 'cause zoomed image are indeed very awful <.<
author=DragnflyYeah, I ended up liking Suiren, as expected. I always like the sadistic netherworld overseer types in games. The Corpse Party series had Sachiko and there was Yuka in Gore Screaming Show, for example. Just an advance warning that some people will likely give you hell about Suiren's outfit. Meh, whatever. But I'm just warning that you can expect the usual backlash from people like before.
The original chara designer for Suiren and the other was Demon (his drawings are the ones of the chats, mine are CG's and title screen), Suiren is blessed by his "man's touch" hahahaha! BTW I like her a lot too, we know after the problem with Toraware that there could be problems with the outfit, in fact one of the first thing that she say is that she's not a child even if she has that appearance, we wanted to safeguard ourselves this time XD If even this time it's no good... weh, simply I won't give a fuck, we will never change Suiren into a hot milf just to preserve her outfit, that is the character and that will remain!
author=DragnflyBugs/problems/odd stuff:
The big problem is, as you already know, the English. There's a lot of problems with it. Since you and the translator aren't native English speakers it's great that you have a proofreader. But if the proofreader has already gone through this and made their fixes then it absolutely needs a 2nd pass. I'll volunteer. If the proofreader hasn't touched it yet then this entire problem might be nothing. We'll have to wait and see.
Sorry for the english again, even if it's better than Toraware it's not good enough again T_T if I can say a thing, I was in a hurry for the completation of the demo, because in less than a month I'll need to transfer in another State, so I make the translater to rush for complete it quickly... I promise that the complete release will be more and more accurate, thanks for your volunteering!
author=DragnflyWhen you speak to the bunny in the pink dress at the bottom of the south room it yawns, then gets the Zzzzzz emote. But it does this every time you talk to it. Is it supposed to yawn the 2nd time you talk to it? I guess it all depends on if you mean that you keep waking the bunny up and it just yawns and goes right back to sleep. Stop being a jerk to the bunny, Frederika:)
Mmmm... this thing of the bunny now that I think about it is true, we'll fix it!
author=DragnflyWhen the painting rips, Isamu says he'll tell the girls what he saw. But when you get back to them he just says there's no reason to go back there and even right up to the puzzle he doesn't really tell them.
I wanted to make it implied, because he see the ripped painting just a minute before he rejoins the girls and if he talks again about the pic seemed to me a bit redundant, but if you think that he should say it clearly I'll fix even this =)
author=DragnflyStuff to be careful of in the final version:
Since the characters walk in a conga line they can block the path of anything else that's moving. Consider your puzzles and if this would break them.
They are rarely together, for the rest of the game you have to play them singularly so the conga line is not a real problem ;)
author=DragnflyAll in all I'm looking forward to the final version.
Than you!! I hope to not disappoint you!
Pikasprey:
author=PikaspreyWould you be okay with Let's Plays being done for the demo? Of course, I'd be very clear that it's an early version.
Are you kidding me? Sure, it would be a honor! =D Let me know when you release it!
HikiNeet:
author=HikiNeetA friendship between three girls and one boy, hmm. You don't see that often. This reminds me ofCorpse Party if you've ever heard/watched/played it before. The characters in that game perform a 'Forever After' charm so that they stay friends forever even though one girl is moving away. Unfortunately, they did it for fun and didn't expect that doing it would get them pulled into another world where their lives are in danger. The worst part is that those who die in Heavenly Host will feel the pain they felt during their death for all of eternity and their souls will be trapped forever unable to pass on to the afterlife.
I wonder if the individual character deaths in this game, depending on how good/bad the ending route you're on, will be just as gruesome and heart-wrenching.
This also kind of reminds me of Anohana too. The characters in that anime forgot a promise they made long ago when they were children. In the end, they do figure it out...
Yeah I know Corpse Party well =) (not the anime AnoHana actually XD)
In truth, the only ispiration that we had was from Nightmare on Elm street's series, about the demon that lives in dreams, and that's all (The name FREDerika is a homage to this too). For now, I can say that there would be bloody parts, but hardly so much gruesome as Corpse Party. =)
In truth, the only ispiration that we had was from Nightmare on Elm street's series, about the demon that lives in dreams, and that's all (The name FREDerika is a homage to this too). For now, I can say that there would be bloody parts, but hardly so much gruesome as Corpse Party. =)
author=HikiNeetWell, unfortunately I have a lot of corrections/grammar mistakes/wrong word usages for you that I spent a few hours combing through. I too offer my proofreading services. My corrections/additions are in bold or I'vestruck throughwhat should be removed:
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. You're super fast and kind, I can't say anything else except if you want to help us with the correction of the complete release too ='D
Meh, I did a mess, I'm no good with the chat codes >.< need to study them a bit XD
Suiren
author=Dragnfly
I'm stuck in the demo with the pink guy's quiz.
Yeah, you miss a flag! After you leave the hallway with Isamu, you need to go and talk again with the pink bunny half-asleep. She'll give you a big hint for the right answer, even if you respond correctly without this the pink guy will kill you because you're responding casually =)
suiren_screen_2.png
author=InfectionFiles
It looks great, my only complaint would be the table with all the stuff on it on the right side. It's almost so dark it looks like it connects with the blackness and the items almost appear to just be floating there
Thanks for the comment ^^
This particular screenshot was taken during a blackout, it doesn't last long and for the rest of the game this room is much more lighter =)
suiren_screen_2.png
Suiren
author=Dragnfly
Your rooms look really good. There's some clear space to run around in. Will there be chases? Don't feel obligated to answer if you'd rather it be a surprise.
Thank you for your compliments ^///^ About this questions, well there won't be chasing events... in the demo =P I'll leave you with this!
author=HikiNeet
You had me at dream realm. It doesn't seem like it'll have a good story but then again, most horror RPGmakers don't go too in-depth with that anyway. Multiple protagonists seems like a redundant feature to me unless you can control any of the four friends instead of just Frederika? Multiple endings, hmm. Some will live, others will die. There tends to be a route where everyone dies and one where everyone lives. You probably have to work for the latter though. There could even be an ending where someone keeps Suiren company.
Well, hopefully the characters are well-written and developed enough so that I'll actually be upset if they get killed. It's more emotional that way.
Obviously there won't be four characters just to add a tail to Frederika XD About the story, I hope that in the end you will reconsider it once the game will be fully developed, games with lack of story ever bothered me and create a world with just four dummies that goes around screaming with just the purpuose to survive it's not absolutely my idea of game =)
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