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Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl
Whew, I missed some comments lately =O so:
Thank you for your link, I didn't know about this and there are some facts that are so similar to the game! =O Dunno if I should be happy or scared XD It's ok if you don't want to play it, BTW your intervention is really useful =)
author=shayoko
Random thoughtsbefore the game actually starts i have a feeling one major question that wont be answered is how the hell this scenario could ever take place?
men are rarely left with kids legally. the government would have to not know about them for this to happen.
them not going to school or having tutors is a dead giveaway.
Well... if you find Misaki's diary you can read that she was never ever showed to the outside world, she was born at home and never went to an hospital, how can the government know about her if noone knows that she exist? ^^"
i don't get the characters actions :( one ending just utterly destroys Ais character...
her goal was to be free and then she just decides to stay?...
and the reason for staying no sense.she already decided that she wasn't really living in her current situation.
She simply broke, an 8 yo that kills her father, even if it's an asshole, he really was her whole world and the only things she knew, it doesn't seem such a strange development for me... but btw it's a "mad end", everyone could take it differently.
-The grammar was horrible
Again,I'm NOT english, and sadly almost all italians are goat with it, or at least want a payment and if I don't receive a cent I don't see why I need to pay someone for translation. I'm working with a proofreader now to correct the game (thx for your mail too), I'm sorry that the language was such a burden for a lot of people but the same things will go on even with my future game (horrible english THEN corrected version) so please deal with it.
author=Goddialgaauthor=shayokoalso i wonder if were going to get any reason why the dad is like this? if someone fell in love with him and had a kid. you'd imagine more likely they are a somewhat decent person at least.author=shayoko
but the father i don't understand at all.
In my opinion,the father was like that because he was like that.
That's how it works and seems to be what the creator was trying to tell us. (Correct me if I was wrong :P)
No you get exactly trought the point =) It's not like everything must have a phylosophical background, just to say it straight, he's a pedophile and that's all XD Sincerely start an explanation of something like, "his sad childhood and so on" seemet to me quite pointless on a 20 min long game yet super-prolix.
And he could fake his nice parts and hide his real wicked side to achieve his true goal. Human can do that so I see nothing wrong about it.
Again, you're right =)
author=Sated
To the people who don't understand the father, please look into some of the real-life examples of things like this happening. Here is a recent example (as in it was uncovered recently; it was actually going on for a long time) from the UK. Horrible people exist and I don't see why that is a great mystery.
Thank you for your link, I didn't know about this and there are some facts that are so similar to the game! =O Dunno if I should be happy or scared XD It's ok if you don't want to play it, BTW your intervention is really useful =)
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl Review
Well, this is a review that I really appreciated!
No, I'm not masochistic XD But this is exactly what I mean for a full constructive critique.
Yeah, the game is far off from perfection, we treated it with kid gloves just to start experimentation on RpG and check if we could endure a future game with much more work on it. For the future, we're working on a correct translation but we don't think that we'll touch the game itself anymore, it's too much controversial and we're already on next project, so I don't think that we'll waste other energies on it with upgrades and so on.
I agree about the boredom, in the end it's too short and a lot talkative, so the actions are few, this is a problem of mine as the story writer, I'll try to become lesser prolix >.<
For the keys...
Thank you again for the review, it's really useful =)
No, I'm not masochistic XD But this is exactly what I mean for a full constructive critique.
Yeah, the game is far off from perfection, we treated it with kid gloves just to start experimentation on RpG and check if we could endure a future game with much more work on it. For the future, we're working on a correct translation but we don't think that we'll touch the game itself anymore, it's too much controversial and we're already on next project, so I don't think that we'll waste other energies on it with upgrades and so on.
I agree about the boredom, in the end it's too short and a lot talkative, so the actions are few, this is a problem of mine as the story writer, I'll try to become lesser prolix >.<
For the keys...
we tried to make the game a little more funny to remove the feeling of oppression for a bit, see for example the "burping death", we was inspired by classical games where you find strange things everywhere, but apparently we've failed XD sorry
Thank you again for the review, it's really useful =)
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl Review
author=alteregoI'm sorry, but this is bullcrap. "This is not a game for everyone" is the classic codeword for "I don't want serious, objective critique because my game is perfect, so nyeh!" The fact that is so commonplace with these "horror" games makes me sick, to be honest.Funny. When developers don't mention what kind of themes/subjects their game touches upon, or what kind of audiences are fit for it, they're accused of trying to hide crucial information (among other things). But when they do, they're accused of trying to avoid criticism.
for me have twice the fun, because this was the first critique I've received on the game, "make a clear advertise on the themes", and now it's not good even like this XDD But well, this is unavoidable, something that's good for one is bad for others and so on.
I truly appreciate the ones that tried to defend the game, but please don't start a war on this review. I agree that it's not an objective review, but it's in any case a review of someone who hated the game, and even bad review have their existence, trying to obliterate them is pointless and won't change the mind of Professor Q. I'm an artist and criticism are everywhere in my industry, you just need to find the useful parts and don't make you to break down =)
BTW, bad publicity is always publicity =P Jokes, with all this I'll make sure to do an amazing game for my next work ^_^
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl Review
Thank you for the review Professor Q, criticism are useful as compliments, of course it would be better something more cheerful ^_^" but as I wrote in the descriprion this is not a game for everyone for it's sensitive arguments, so I was prepared. I sincerely don't know a single one of your quotes O.O" nether the true story of the girl, as I said I was inspired by Chloè no Requiem environment and that's all... free to not believe me, but it's the truth.
BTW I'm not quitting to do games, it's just the beginning (but the end of this kind of games, the next product of my duo would not have raped people XD)
Regards the name: They're all genuine, not a weeboo works XD I have japanese friends that is translating it in Japanese so we wanted to do a game... how can I say? japan-friendly? XD
Now I have to take off a little itch...
For Frogge: For one that targeted the game as disgusting as first comment, you are really active on the posts of Toraware no Shoujo ^_^ It's not the first time, you have a really lot of free time continue to rage as soon as you have the chance, when something sucks I just pretend to ignore it =P You've criticed my english with those screens obviously just to humiliate me? Gooood girl, she critics something that the autor herself explained in the FIRST description because she's not native speaker and have just old school studies, you must be proud of yourself! =D
You are the classical ""shark"" of the net that feel satisfied behind her safe and warm pc screen, well I'm quite bored with people like you so please continue and go on rampage, I'll just start to pretendo to ignore you, barking dogs need to be left alone to romp, peace <3
BTW I'm not quitting to do games, it's just the beginning (but the end of this kind of games, the next product of my duo would not have raped people XD)
Regards the name: They're all genuine, not a weeboo works XD I have japanese friends that is translating it in Japanese so we wanted to do a game... how can I say? japan-friendly? XD
Now I have to take off a little itch...
For Frogge: For one that targeted the game as disgusting as first comment, you are really active on the posts of Toraware no Shoujo ^_^ It's not the first time, you have a really lot of free time continue to rage as soon as you have the chance, when something sucks I just pretend to ignore it =P You've criticed my english with those screens obviously just to humiliate me? Gooood girl, she critics something that the autor herself explained in the FIRST description because she's not native speaker and have just old school studies, you must be proud of yourself! =D
You are the classical ""shark"" of the net that feel satisfied behind her safe and warm pc screen, well I'm quite bored with people like you so please continue and go on rampage, I'll just start to pretendo to ignore you, barking dogs need to be left alone to romp, peace <3
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl
author=Goddialga
PS. I might interested in translating your game to Thai but due to the content of the game I need some time to think about it. But the Good End was really good ^_^
If you could it will be great =D let me know about it!
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl
Hi Goddialga, yes the ed are the 4 you found (double bad - one mad - one happy), for the singer at the end no it's not my acquitance I've found her on a free-to-use site, the song is Noapusa by Yutsuki Mio she have proper credits on the video ^_^
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl
Awww tnank you both Asphodel and SilentSong for the offers of translations!! I'd really like a Toraware no Shoujo version with good english, actually I'm reeeally busy with university exams session, so it's difficult for me to work on the game for the upgraded version now, you'll risk to w8 for at least two months for the upload of your work >.< But I'll contact one of you definitely for the translation as soon as I'm free from everything else =)
BTW SilentSong, your comment is really heartwarming, thank you so much ^///^
BTW SilentSong, your comment is really heartwarming, thank you so much ^///^
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl
Thanks for your thoughts Dragnfly, they're really precious =)
Yes, the "original" language is italian, thank you for let me notice I'll definitely fix it if we'll do a new version of the game!
There isn't an item inventory 'cause the objects are really few and for the diary pages
For the finals, there's a guide here on the RpG Maker wiki, so you can check the one that you miss =) and if you don't like spoilers, there's even a walktrought on youtube of the italian version (so you won't understand the writings XD).
Thanks again for your impressions!
Yes, the "original" language is italian, thank you for let me notice I'll definitely fix it if we'll do a new version of the game!
There isn't an item inventory 'cause the objects are really few and for the diary pages
you just need to check the father's diary, every page you found will be attached in it into the right sequence, and when you complete it there won't be anymore the advertise that say "some pages are missing"
For the finals, there's a guide here on the RpG Maker wiki, so you can check the one that you miss =) and if you don't like spoilers, there's even a walktrought on youtube of the italian version (so you won't understand the writings XD).
Thanks again for your impressions!
Toraware no Shoujo - Caged Girl
Well, there's an advertise at the start of the game that could contain "shocking parts", the themes are strong but they're similar to Chloe no Requiem game, nothing is explicit saying like this seem that the game is a porn... I'm sorry that it offend you, I can put and advertise even on the site but saying it's "disgusting" it's a bit exaggerated ^^"
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