LAMIAJERINLJ'S PROFILE

author=Mystyk
Hey, I just played this and noticed a few things:
1. After they are teleported back to the entrance to go into the hospital, if I try to go home without going in to the hospital (so go to the map with the houses), I can't go back to the hospital.
2. The edges of the sprites were not always smooth, sometimes they just looked pixelated (or how to say that...).

Also, even though it was a demo I thought it was short even for a demo (but that might be just me).
It's not bad so far, I like horror rpg maker games, so good luck!

Yeah. I know. I fixed that after submitting demo.
In full version you will not find this problem or any other problems like that. I will be more careful and I will do my best. :)


By the way thank you and hope you will play the full version when it will be released. :)

author=TheCrimsonValley
So I decided to play through the demo and I wanted to share some of my thoughts on the game so far. Considering this is only a demo I'm leaving a comment rather than a rated review ^^.

The character sprites are kind of a nice touch I have to say right of the bat, it is really nice to see that you've decided to use half body pictures rather simple engine pictures.

On the flip side, I have to say that the maps are a tad too enormous. The hospital room feels like the size of a small flat to be honest. I don't know if this is your first game published or not but I do remember that I used to make this mistake when I began too! Just suggesting maybe making the maps a tad smaller in either this game or the next.
Also the story feels a little on the nose in the way it is told. Everything happens so sporadically and a lot of it is only told through text such as the "she awoke by a noise". Show don't tell would be a good approach, instead of saying so, why not show her waking up with a noise sound effect? Just a suggestion.

I do see that this might become really good and I will play the full release once it hits the market but I do hope that you can take some of the things I've said into consideration.
Best of luck mate!

First of all thank you for sharing your thoughts. Actually this is my first game. I was so curious for releasing my games' demo that I had submitted it as soon as I prepared it. I know that hospital room size is bit enormous. That's why I have decided I will do map size smaller in future in this game.

Actually I realized it by myself after submitting my demo to be honest.:D
Right now I am focusing on the game and its storyline properly not to do any minor mistakes.

I will obviously consider your thoughts.
And again thank you for your suggestion. ^_^

ummm....yeah....do u need some? :D

author=Craze
i must have called a thousand times :<

:D

author=Frogge
I am sincerely disappointed with the file name. I expected lesbians.

Your expectation is very high. XD :D