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I have henceforth dedicated myself to playing the tsukkomi, because everyone in my life seems to be a boke. Here I come, you idiots!
"Riaru nante kusogee da!" -Katsuragi Keima, The World God Only Knows
I have henceforth dedicated myself to playing the tsukkomi, because everyone in my life seems to be a boke. Here I come, you idiots!
"Riaru nante kusogee da!" -Katsuragi Keima, The World God Only Knows
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A lazy guy? Make rpgs? Pfft.
Hello and welcome! I don't know you either. And everyone has to start somewhere. Practice! That's the key.
Write one paragraph of really bad erotic fanfiction about the person above you and a video game character
Trihan lifted the Companion Cube, attempting to lick the love heart on the bottom.
GLaDOS' voice rang over the intercom. <Will you please stop that? Engaging in sexual activity with the Weighted Companion Cube is not recommended, and is, in fact, strongly discouraged. The Enrichment Center reminds you that the Weighted Companion Cube will not react to your advances.>
<If it makes you feel better, cake and prostitutes will be available at the end of this test.>
GLaDOS' voice rang over the intercom. <Will you please stop that? Engaging in sexual activity with the Weighted Companion Cube is not recommended, and is, in fact, strongly discouraged. The Enrichment Center reminds you that the Weighted Companion Cube will not react to your advances.>
<If it makes you feel better, cake and prostitutes will be available at the end of this test.>
Hi
Help me find a good name for my character .
How about Sir Ziven? Sir Callan is good, too. Or Sir Talbot, Anders, Cedric, Ansel, Brandt, Elgar, Garrett, Holger, Randolf... Lancelot?
I'll stop now.
I'll stop now.
How did you and rpg maker meet?
So I was having some drinks in an inn, right...
I jest. Actually, I lurked here for ages, and then VX Ace turned up on Steam, and then a relative got it for me, knowing about my interest in these things. So there you go.
I jest. Actually, I lurked here for ages, and then VX Ace turned up on Steam, and then a relative got it for me, knowing about my interest in these things. So there you go.
Hello.
Hello! Welcome to this, the most wonderful community. (Maybe. Probably.) Enjoy your stay here, and break a leg while you're trying to complete one of your many projects.
... But not in real life! Or we'll have to hunt you down.
... But not in real life! Or we'll have to hunt you down.
Whatchu Workin' On? Tell us!
I am currently trying to draw character portraits. There's a lot of room for improvement, of course.
Must practice! Must improve art skills!
Must practice! Must improve art skills!
Ted and Kentley: Legend of the Glacar ( Script Sample)
About 19 days later, a reply!
There were typos in these lines, so I fixed them up nice and quick:
Kentley:
“T-Ted! Don't say stuff like that! H-he'd NEVER do that! I'm sure of it. Right...?”
Ted:
“Hey, Grandpa's awesome! And he doesn't get mad at you for cooking, does he? He even lets you use his kitchen!”
Grandpa:
“No.... The only way to reverse this is to find the Glacar itself and WISH that rabbit-suit away! Otherwise we better stock up on carrots.”
As for general thoughts... Everyone in this script so far seems to be quite energetic (or forceful, in Kentley's case). I think that adding a more serious character to the cast would help balance everything out and prevent craziness overload.
There are a lot of exclamation marks. This might just be the most I've seen used in such a short piece of writing. Again, you can probably tone it down a bit - the more you do/use something, the less impact it has. That rule applies to punctuation as well. :P
Overall, though, I enjoyed it. General weirdness and unusual happenings are goooooooood. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this!
There were typos in these lines, so I fixed them up nice and quick:
Kentley:
“T-Ted! Don't say stuff like that! H-he'd NEVER do that! I'm sure of it. Right...?”
Ted:
“Hey, Grandpa's awesome! And he doesn't get mad at you for cooking, does he? He even lets you use his kitchen!”
Grandpa:
“No.... The only way to reverse this is to find the Glacar itself and WISH that rabbit-suit away! Otherwise we better stock up on carrots.”
As for general thoughts... Everyone in this script so far seems to be quite energetic (or forceful, in Kentley's case). I think that adding a more serious character to the cast would help balance everything out and prevent craziness overload.
There are a lot of exclamation marks. This might just be the most I've seen used in such a short piece of writing. Again, you can probably tone it down a bit - the more you do/use something, the less impact it has. That rule applies to punctuation as well. :P
Overall, though, I enjoyed it. General weirdness and unusual happenings are goooooooood. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this!













