STORYTELLER'S PROFILE

Just a slow-working game maker from the USA.

I'm working with the VX Ace Engine now, but I previously created the Koli's Sorrow series on VX. My current projects are in my attempts to finish the Koli's Sorrow storyline and wrap up our lovable characters in a nice little bundle.

I wouldn't mind anyone playing my current two games and leaving a review or comment, as it helps me out a lot. If you have any decent criticism feel free to lay it on me.
Koli's Sorrow
Can Koli face the odds and save the world from minor destruction?

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author=Neok
One of these men is not like the others...


Ha! now that you mention it, Crimson does stick out a bit.

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author=kitten2021
It's a very pretty area, seems a little cluttered to me, but maybe everything that's there is there for a reason.
I still think it's a lovely map tho.

~Kitten
Sent from my iPhone


It's from the end of the game. In the beginning, all of the symbols and people aren't there.

Koli's Sorrow 2

author=BareGamer
You'll need to re-submit your game's download. The player's location isn't set.


Fixed. Thank you. *facepalm* I'm stupid >..>

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author=UPRC
I have no idea what I am looking at, but I like it.


Thanks. The download's being uploaded now, actually. You might wanna play the first one, well, first if you decide to check it out o..o

Koli's Sorrow Review

author=BareGamer
author=Storyteller
author=BareGamer
The developer is still interested in a review of his game, I hope.
I am, thank you BareGamer. I enjoyed the criticism, and I've tried my best to fix some of these in the second game, however I'm not much in the point of Game Making as I am a writer. This is a side objective, and I pretty much just make the game out of boredom.
Thanks for taking the time to read it. Hope it wasn't too harsh. I meant it to be positive feedback.


It's good. The game is meant to be a "Here you go, no information" at the beginning. The past gets explained as the game (and it's soon to come sequel) continues. Thank you for taking the time to review it. =p

Koli's Sorrow Review

author=BareGamer
The developer is still interested in a review of his game, I hope.


I am, thank you BareGamer. I enjoyed the criticism, and I've tried my best to fix some of these in the second game, however I'm not much in the point of Game Making as I am a writer. This is a side objective, and I pretty much just make the game out of boredom.

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author=dezz123
You may wanna change the grass tile to the other in TileA2 as the one you're using is better for world map, where the other is for towns/fields/etc. Also, I suggest adding in some more plants, stones, etc. to flavour up the map a bit.


Well, I already went through and set it up for 1 & a 1/2 games, might as well stick with it. (There's no world map)

Also, most other maps have significantly more going on. By the end of the game, this map is crowded.

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Regarding the suggestions, I've since fixed this.

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This is actually a lot later in the game. The pic in with the mountains was my first map with the program. I'll fix it in the sequel.